There are many students smoking in senior high school, the reason may be that they think they look cool or appear to be more mature while having a cigarette at hand.But there are a lot of reasons not to smoke. Smoking does harm to our health.It is dangerous to our heart and lung. A lot of diseases are caused by cigarettes.Cigarettes also have terrible smell.The seconghand smoke can also be dangerous to the others who stand around you. Therefore, no smoking in public is a strict regulation in many countries. And the most important thing is that once you come into addicitive,it's hard to get rid of it. So,we must keep far from the cigarette——for everybody's health.
高中里有很多学生吸烟,原因可能是他们觉得手中有一支烟看上去很酷或者显得更成熟。但是,不吸烟的原因有很多。吸烟有害我们的健康,对我们的心脏和肺很危险。很多疾病都是由香烟引起的,而且烟的味道不好闻。二手烟对周围的.人也很危险。因此,公共场所禁止吸烟是很多国家的一项严厉规定。最重要的是,一旦你上瘾了就很难戒掉了。所以,为了每个人的健康,我们必须远离香烟。
我们的生活越来越发达,食品也跟着越来越丰富。看着超市里各种各样的食品,对于我这个爱吃的小馋猫而言,就像是猫儿掉进了鱼缸里——妙极了,真想一日三餐都吃它们。但是,爸爸、妈妈还有老师总是要我们吃足三餐,学校里也禁止带零食,每次到了节假日还发告家长书重点强调饮食安全教育。我就弄不明白了,难道吃还能吃出病来吗?
原来吃还是一门学问呢。俗话说,病从口入。如果吃得不合理,反而会成为慢性毒药。现在就让本馋猫化身成饮食小专家来说说吧。
吃东西要挑,不食用变质或“三无”食品,这是最基本的。校门口、路旁的小摊子,东西价格便宜但质量却并不好,它们基本上都是“三无”产品,俗称“垃圾食品”。老吃这些东西不利于身体健康,还会生病。还有我的最爱——饮料,即雪碧、可口可乐等,尤其是夏天,喝一杯冰过的饮料,别提多舒服了。但是汽水中含有的山梨酸钾、二氧化碳等都是对身体有害的成分,所以只能忍痛割爱了。虽然如此,可难不倒本专家,纯果汁、牛奶和酸奶等,有助于我们成长,可以喝这些。当然,还要注意营养的平衡,过量地饮食也是不好的,而且吃的食物还要多样化,这样吸收的营养才可能越丰富和完整。
朋友们,多吃谷物粗粮、蔬菜水果,多喝奶类产品,少吃“垃圾食品”,为拥有一个健康的身体,让我们一起来合理安排自己的饮食吧!
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
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首先感谢您百忙之中抽出时间阅读完这封信。20xx年11月份国务院出台了《国务院办公厅关于农村义务教育学生营养改善计划的意见》,决定在集中连片特殊困难地区启动农村(不含县城)义务教育学生营养改善计划试点工作。我县属于试点县,按照省政府统一部署,从2012年春季开学起,对全县农村(不含县城)义务教育学生每人每天3元钱,每年按200天计算实施农村义务教育学生营养改善计划。营养改善计划的资金性质是营养补助,不是免费午餐,是根据各校的客观条件分别通过食堂供餐、企业(单位)供餐两种不同的供餐模式,在学生原有的营养基础上,补充更加营养的食品,提高学生的膳食水平。
我校学生营养餐(牛奶+面包或鸡蛋或火腿肠)自三月份实施以来,得到了各位家长朋长的大力支持与鼎力相助,同时我们也吸纳了许多真诚的建议,在此一并表示深深的感谢。时值隆冬,日均气温只有几度,随着寒流的来临,气温可能在零下摄氏度,这给学生饮用牛奶增加了困难,更多的是带来许多不安全因素,尤其是造成学生肠胃的不适,从而引发患病的可能。本着一切从学生的安全考虑,为此,学校决定改变冬季学生牛奶的饮用方式:将牛奶带回家饮用,这就需要得到家长朋友的科学指导和全程监督,为了您孩子的安全,敬请得到您的通力配合!
温馨提醒:
1、家长朋友务必做到当日营养餐当日饮用,如加热,不宜时间过长,不宜温度过高。
2、孩子饮用完,务必督促孩子次日早晨上学将牛奶盒带回学校。如遗失,家长须向学校出具文字说明。
3、孩子因病因事请假(一周内),营养餐由孩子返校后首日一次性带回。请假一周以上,须由班主任陪同,家长在储藏室签名一次性或分批将营养餐领回。
4、孩子因病因事期间领回的营养餐,家长务必在保质期内全程监督、科学指导孩子饮用。如在家中发生过期饮用、方法不当等造成的安全事故,家长自行承担责任。
5、回收的牛奶盒须由孩子自行签名,因病因事请假期间的牛奶盒无须回收。安全第一,健康是福。敬请各位家长务必在百忙之中加强对孩子的营养餐饮用监督力度,时时提醒孩子注意安全事项,一切以安全为重,确保孩子平平安安,快乐成长。
请家长阅读后在下面“回执”中签字,由孩子将签字的信件带回学校。顺祝各位家长:身体健康,工作顺利。
尊敬的家长朋友:
孩子成人成才是家庭和学校共同追求的目标,而孩子的安全则是各种目标得以实现的保障。我校贯彻“安全第一,预防为主”的方针,加强对学生安全工作的`领导与管理,做到家校合作,分工明确,以达到预防事故,保护青少年的目的。恳请家长协同学校,做好对贵子女的安全教育与管理,以履行自己应尽的责任与义务。 在孩子的教育过程中,很多工作的实施落实、很多问题的解决处理,需要我们双方达成共识,密切配合。为做好孩子的上学放学安全工作,特向您提出以下要求:
一、接、送孩子时尽量不要把车辆开到校门口,要在离学校20米外的宽阔地带下车步行到校。学生早晨到校一律不得早于7:30。
二、接孩子必须守时,在规定时间内(放学后20分钟)把孩子从学校接走。 上午:11:30 下午:16:30 (特别注意星期三、五 下午15:40 各季节有变动,具体见学校作息时间表)
三、教育孩子遵守交通规则,文明出行,确保不出事故。自行包车接送孩子的家长,确保不乘“三无”车辆,督促驾驶员不准超载超速,不准酒驾,文明行车,确保学生安全万无一失。
以上规定可能会给您带来一些不便,但为了学校教育的有序、规范,为了孩子的安全,敬请您理解、支持、配合!谢谢!
to prevent H7N9 we should know some common sense. First of all, it is important for us to prevent H7N9 from ourselves. For example, clean our hands frequently.
Sencondly, do more exercises. Such as running. Lastly, change our diet to keep balence. For example, eat more types of vegetables and drink more water
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