六年级英语作文涂鸦【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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六年级英语作文涂鸦【二】
一路风景优美，树木花草一派诗情画意，养荷的池水碧波荡漾，荷枝身姿摇曳，花苞早红了脸而。就连垃圾箱都放着舒缓的乐曲。池边有一座半悬空的凉亭，更是古香古色，我一看便起了好奇心，就踏上了楼梯。
这一登可不得了。刚到最顶层，我就被谢幕的春风吹得睁不开眼，头发也随风飘扬。适应了一会儿，我冒着风兜了一圈。这下可“收获”了不少。那亭中不少地方是淡黄的粉饰，没刷漆，于是，我便看到了令人大跌眼镜的一幕：那上面都是游客们留下来的'“印迹”。铅笔、蜡笔甚至油笔，在墙上、方柱上些打油诗、留名抑或“作画”。这些字大多方方正正，像是初、高中的学生，字很漂亮，画也很不错。唯一不对的是，这儿是景区啊！这样的“组合”搭配起来，是在令人咋舌。之后，我又留心了一下细微之处，发现只要能写上字的地方，无一例外地都“挂了彩”。
除了北安的公园，我去过的很多其他地方的景点、景区，也有不少布满这样的“伤痕”。看着这一幕幕，我深刻地理解到，中国人已经输在了“起跑线”上，被人嘲笑“素质低、素质差”就是外交官有百寸不烂之舌，也无法反驳，这是事实啊。
在此提醒大家，以后到景区千万别带笔，以防手痒，千万不要做风景的毁灭者。记住，您这几笔，毁的是别人的好心情，毁的是风景，毁的是形象，毁的是您的形象，您的人品，毁的是公德，毁的是自己，悔的终究也是自己啊！
六年级英语作文涂鸦【三】
先用蓝色和白色调出了海水的颜色，接着把鲨鱼画在了海水中，天空有一个金色的太阳。可我总觉得少了一点什么，请妈妈帮我看了看我的画，妈妈拿起画笔沾上用各种颜色为我的天空画上了彩色的云朵，真漂亮！我喜欢极了！
可是妈妈说我的`鲨鱼太抽象，和海水的颜色差不多了，分不清楚哪里是大海哪里是鲨鱼……我哈哈地笑起来！
画完一幅我还意犹未尽，于是我决定在衣服的背面再画一幅更好的画。
这次我选择了我最喜欢的大白，因为衣服本来是白色的，所以我就用黄色代替，勾画出了一个大白的轮廓，我总觉得大白旁边好像少了点什么，它太孤单了！所以我用绿色为它加了草地，用黄色画了太阳，用红色画出阳光。
妈妈和老师都说我的大白画得特别好，我也非常喜欢。
六年级英语作文涂鸦【四】
在家乡 My Hometown’>我的.家乡有一个小湖，那是我最喜欢的地方之一。我总是和我的朋友一起去湖边，我们经常游泳、玩耍。有时我们会去划船，享受安静的时刻。现在的湖因为污染已经不那么干净了。我意识到保护环境的重要性。
六年级英语作文涂鸦【五】
Early morning，sun farther—in—law showed smiling face，small alarm clock “ bite the bell bites bell “ the ground cries，seem to saying：“Beautiful，should get up！Should get up！！
Li Lixing，see sun farther—in—law came out，asperse on pale green branch full bright sunshine。 Li Li wore a beautiful powdery dress，wore a sky—blue pants again。 At this moment，transmit outside the window “ chirp “ cry，li Li looks up to look，a birdie is crying，seem to saying：“Li Li has breakfast quickly，I and you go to school together。 I and you go to school together。
Li Li eats breakfast rapidly，carry small satchel on the back，go to school together with birdie。
