清新空气与疾病防控作文指导【一】
Prevention is better than cure: Out of a country’s health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures.
The rising costs of health care have become an issue for many countries in the world. To deal with this problem, it is recommended that a big part of the state health budget be used for health education and disease prevention instead of treatment.
First of all, many kinds of diseases are preventable and preventing a disease is usually much cheaper than treating it. For example, people could prevent catching a cold if they dress warmly and get good rest when the weather first gets cold in the winter. But many people get sick because they fail to do so and have to spend much more money seeing a doct123 Another case in point is cancer, the leading cause of death in the world. But lung cancer, liver cancer and many other kinds of cancer could all be effectively prevented if people take measures for their health in an early stage. Small things such as smoking less or eating more healthy food would have kept millions of families from becoming bankrupt if the patients took measures for early cancer prevention.
In addition, health education also plays a key role in improving people’s health. By giving people more information about health, countries could help people understand the importance of disease prevention and ways to achieve it.
However, emphasizing on disease prevention is not downplaying the significance of medical treatment. After all, prevention and treatment are just two different means toward the same e12
In conclusion, we could save money in health care and treat patients more successfully if our country uses more money on health prevention and education.
清新空气与疾病防控作文指导【二】
1、一篇记叙文无论写一件事或几件事，都只能有一个中心思想。写一件事自不必说，写几件事的情况尤其应注意，这几件事不一定发生在同一时间、同一地点，事情也不一定是同一个人或同一些人所做，但这些事应该有内在联系，共同说明一个道理，为一个中心服务。
2、要交代清楚时间、地点、人物、事件，让读者明白文章写的是什么人，在什么时候，什么地方发生了怎样的事。一般要按事情发展顺序，把一件事的起因、经过、结果写清楚，不能颠三倒四，还应把事情的前因后果，来龙去脉写清楚。
3、要确定好记叙的线索。线索是贯穿文章始终的脉络。
4、要安排好行文的顺序。记叙比较复杂的事件，一篇文章中往往不只采用一种方式，而是以一种方式为主，结合其他方式，使文章条理清楚，错落有致。
5、记事中要围绕中心，抓住重点，详略得当，不要面面俱到。重点部分要详写，写具体，写详尽，给读者以深刻的印象。要描绘生活中生动、具体的细节以及自己真实的感受，而不能只停留在泛泛地一般叙述。“文似看山不喜平”，说的是文章要写得有波澜，行文有起伏，有高有低，有紧有慢，有波浪一般富于变化。这样的文章不论长短，都能使读者读起来历久不倦，收到强烈的艺术效果。
