Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
明天,就是令人无比激动的春游。春游的一个重头戏,当然就是要带好多美食和同学们一起在野外分享。
我放学一回到家,叫让妈妈带我去买零食与饮料。回家后,妈妈又做了几道拿手好菜,装进了饭盒。一切搞定,当我准备把一切美食收入包里时,哎呀!我突然想起了陈老师交给我们的艰巨任务:自己要做一道菜。可是我做什么呢?对于我这样一个只喜欢吃,不懂做菜的懒人来说,这可是比登天还难啊!我搜肠刮肚半天,还是没有答案。妈妈看我这么苦恼,对我说,“要不然你就做水果沙拉吧!”对啊!水果沙拉又简单、又好看、又好吃,多么完美的选择啊!我马上满口答应。
水果沙拉,顾名思义就是水果加沙拉。我检查了一下冰箱,有梨子、苹果,还有一瓶沙拉酱。太好了!原材料都全了。我先把水果洗好,准备一个一个削皮。削梨子时候,可费了我好大劲了。梨子的皮很硬,它就像穿着铠甲一样,你是水果中的铠甲勇士吗?我小心翼翼地削着,害怕削到手。当最后一块梨子皮掉下来的时候,我舒了一口气,就像刚刚打赢胜仗的英雄,内心充满了自豪!接下来,我的战斗对象变成了苹果,有了削梨子的经验,皮比较软的苹果,自然不在话下,三下五除二就削完了。接下来就是切块了,我把沿着梨子核和苹果核的周围,把四周切了下来,再小心地切成一个一个正方形,然后都倒入饭盒里。最后,我把沙拉倒下去,有筷子把搅伴均匀,看上去还真像那回事儿。此刻的我,心中满是快乐。我忍不住尝了一个,呀!真好吃!明天我的同学们都会夸我手艺好的!
今天,我们在小桔灯的课堂上,跟老师学做了一道香甜可口的美味家肴。想知道是怎么做的吗?不知道吧?那请跟我一起走进小桔灯的课堂吧!
首先,老师把水果拿到桌子上,只见红彤彤的苹果、黄澄澄的梨、半绿半绿的葡萄、绿油油的黄瓜等等,都出现在讲桌上,讲桌上一下子变得更加的鲜艳了。
接着,老师把水果们请到一盆清澈见底的'温水中,让它们洗一温水澡,把它们洗得干干净净的。洗好之后,就开始削皮了,老师右手拿小刀,左手拿苹果,刀随着苹果转动,一道彩虹般的苹果皮垂了下来,它越来越长,突然刀一抖,彩虹断了,我们遗撼极了。
削好皮的水果被老师切成了形态各异的小块,有丁形的,有圆形的,还有三角形的等等。最后,老师把形态各异的小块放入盘子里,再加了许多的沙拉酱。我们狼吞虎咽,我们一下子就把它们干掉了,那味道香甜可口,回味无穷。美味极了!
回到家里,我一定要做一道水果沙拉,给爸爸妈妈尝尝这个美味!
——贺俊逸 四(6班
今天一大早,爸爸妈妈就出门了。临走前留了张纸条,说要明天才能回来,让姑姑给我做饭。我起了床,走到姑姑房间:“姑姑,起来做饭吧,爸妈不在家!“姑姑说:“什么?让我做饭?不是吧!”姑姑赶紧起来给爸爸打电话,问了具体情况。
完后,姑姑“扑通”一声坐到沙发上,说:“你写作业去吧,我查一查能做什么?”我笑着跑去写作业,只见姑姑打开电脑,查了又查,然后就出去买菜了。
不一会,姑姑回来,手里提着菜,说:“看我今天给你露一手——蔬菜水果沙拉!”
我说:“好呀!不好吃的话,我就出去吃,你在家里吃你的沙拉!”
姑姑说:“行”!
姑姑整个上午一直都在厨房。我进去看时,见姑姑正在切菜,只见她把胡萝卜、黄瓜、土豆切成小块;把青菜、白菜、油菜都切成一瓣一瓣的;又把水果拿出来,把苹果、梨、桃子、香蕉和西瓜也切成小块的。最后把它们都倒入盆中,倒了点油、盐、果酱,然后又把它们都搅拌匀了。最后叫我吃饭。
我看着那饭,说:“看见就不好吃!”
姑姑说:“你尝一口,就想吃了!”
我说:“那,好吧!”
我闭起眼,吃了一口——哎!还真的好吃!只觉得,入口的一瞬间,好像人也升到了空中,那空中好像正有许多许多正在泛着幽幽香气的花卉……姑姑见了,就叫:“喂,赶紧吃!”我朝姑姑笑了笑,便狼吞虎咽地吃起来。
这是我最喜欢的一顿饭,这饭,虽然不是很好看,但很好吃,因为里面有一种爱的“佐料”,只有最疼我的姑姑才会用!这恐怕也是世界上最独一无二的手艺了吧!
劳动课上,老师告诉我们下节课做自己喜欢吃的菜,我们小组的人商量了一下,决定做水果沙拉。我们几个人分好工了,谁该带水果,谁该带工具,我们心里比谁都清楚。
第二天,我们每个人手里都提着一兜东西走进教室。第三节课的下课铃刚刚打响,我们小组的人慌慌忙忙的聚在一起,准备开做。老师一进门,被我们的气势吓了一跳。
我们占用了两张桌子,一张桌子专门用来削皮、切丁的,另一张用来放调料、调拌的。我负责切丁,孙睿思负责削皮,其他人负责调拌。孙睿思把削好皮的苹果放在小盆里,我取出苹果放在菜板上,心里没底的我不知该怎样下刀我比划了半天,一刀下去终于把苹果一分为二。我又用刀一点一点把苹果核儿抠了去。看到孙睿思削皮学得那么熟练,觉得一定非常容易,我问孙睿思:“我能削削吗?”“当然可以”她十分果断的回答了我。我没有一点警惕性,在家里我见过妈妈削皮,知道该怎样那削皮刀。试了两下“哈哈,太好玩了。”正高兴着,突然苹果没拿稳,为了不把削了一半皮的苹果弄脏,我想把刀放到桌子上没放稳,正好掉我手上,结果,不但把苹果弄脏了,还把手擦伤了。虽然只流了一点血,但是这令我再也不毛躁了。我又重新拿起水果刀,继续干我的“老本行”。我们端着自己亲手做的水果沙拉,给六年级办公室里的老师们尝了尝,都说还不错。我们的班主任司老师一连吃了好几口呢!为此,左向达同学还编一首简短的小诗:吃了第一口,想吃第二口,吃了第二口,活到九十九。
你看,做一盘好吃的菜真不容易。妈妈每天都要做饭,可见,妈妈为我们付出的太多太多了。妈妈为我们做好饭,就叫我们下来吃。我们吃饱了,却还要妈妈刷碗、擦桌子。还有最重要的一点,还是我们小组的默契配合,如果我们互相排斥,不团结,那这盘美味的水果沙拉一定不属于我们!
Expert tips on how to prevent avian influenza H7N9 collated by current argument data dictionary
1.平时加强体育锻炼,多休息,避免过度劳累,不吸烟,勤洗手;注意个人卫生,打喷嚏或咳嗽时掩住口鼻。
1 usually strengthen physical exercise, rest more, avoid excessive overworked, do not smoke, wash their hands; pay attention to personal hygiene, when sneezing or coughing and cover your nose and mouth.
2.保持室内清洁,使用消毒液清洗的地毯,避免使用难以清洗的地毯,保持地面、天花板、家具及墙壁清洁,确保排水道通畅;保持室内空气流通,应每天开窗换气两次,每次至少10分钟,或使用抽气扇保持空气流通;尽量少去 空气不流通的场所。
2 keep the room clean, use disinfectant cleaning carpets, avoid the use of hard to clean the carpet, keep the floor, ceiling, furniture and walls clean, to ensure smooth drainage channel; maintains the indoor air circulation, ventilation windows should be at least two times a day, 10 minutes each time, or use a fan to keep air circulation; as little as possible to airless places.
3.注意饮食卫生,进食禽肉、蛋类要彻底煮熟,加工、保存食物时要注意生、熟分开;养成良好的卫生习惯,搞好厨房卫生,不生食禽肉和内脏。解剖活(死家禽、家畜及其制品后要彻底洗手。
3, pay attention to food hygiene, eating meat, eggs should be thoroughly cooked, processing, preservation of food to the attention of raw, cooked separately; develop good health habits, good kitchen hygiene, do not eat raw poultry meat and offal. Anatomy of living (dead to wash hands thoroughly, livestock and poultry products.
同时,在户外洗手不方便的时候,可以使用免洗洗手液,随身携带,随时随地隔离病菌,呵护您的健康。
At the same time, when the outdoor hand-washing is not convenient, can use hand sanitizer, carry whenever and wherever possible, isolate the pathogen, take care of your health.
4.发现疫情时,应尽量避免与禽类接触;公众特别是儿童应避免密切接触家禽和野禽。
4 found in the epidemic, should avoid contact with poultry; the public especially children should avoid close contact with poultry and wild birds.
5.注意生活用具的消毒处理。禽流感病毒不耐热,100°C下一分钟即可灭活。对干燥、紫外线照射、汞、氯等常用消毒药都很敏感。
5 pay attention to disinfection and living appliances. Avian influenza viruses do not heat, 100 ° C, one minute can be inact
说起家常菜,有酸酸甜甜的肉沫茄子,有Q弹性的红烧肉。还有色香味俱全的番茄炒鸡蛋。其中我最爱吃的就是清香扑鼻的水果沙拉。
星期天下午坐在自家的饭桌前,品尝着妈妈精心为我制作的水果沙拉。水果沙拉放在一个白瓷盆里,它们就像一个大家庭,其中害羞的苹果宝宝,躲在黄澄澄的黄桃爸爸后面,害羞的不敢露出淡黄色的脸蛋,橙色皮肤的橘子哥哥站在黄桃爸爸的前面保护着害羞的红了脸的樱桃妹妹。
火龙果妈妈穿着一件大红色的外套,和强壮的黄桃爸爸靠在一起。苹果宝宝和妈妈一样,披着一件深红色的大衣。樱桃妹妹套着紫色的衣服,圆滚滚的。它们每个人的身上都涂满雪白雪白的沙拉,这是它们家族的象征。我把头钻到“水果家庭”的面前,用鼻子闻了一口,顿时一种沙拉独有的味道,清香扑鼻,沁人心脾。
我从桌子上轻轻拿起叉子。小心翼翼的夹起一块黄桃,放入嘴中。开始细细品尝。轻轻放入口中,一种清凉的感觉进入了我的嘴巴。黄桃的汁液润滑了我的舌头。这味道,这感觉,仿佛我踏上了成仙之路的最后一层阶梯。我开始用力的嚼了起来,黄桃大军进入我的食管,慢慢的我的食管被他们融化透了。过了一会儿,我整个身体都有着清凉的感觉。真让人飘飘欲仙呀!
经不住诱惑,我又夹起一小块苹果,放入口中狼吞虎咽的吃了起来,吃完后我又将剩余的全部一口一口的吃完了,我吃的津津有味,一连打了三个嗝,我摸摸自己圆滚滚的肚子又望了望空空如也的白瓷盆,心里十分不舍。水果沙拉做法简单,几乎人人都会做。只要将各种各样的水果放在一个碗里,再往上面挤上沙拉酱,用筷子反复搅拌均匀,一道美味的'水果沙拉就做好了。
民以食为天,美食在中国有着渊源流长的历史。一道美味的家常菜,给中国的老百姓带来了无限的乐趣。夏日炎炎,一道清凉可口的水果沙拉是我家餐桌上的“常客”,也是我的最爱。
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