Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
to prevent H7N9 we should know some common sense. First of all, it is important for us to prevent H7N9 from ourselves. For example, clean our hands frequently.
Sencondly, do more exercises. Such as running. Lastly, change our diet to keep balence. For example, eat more types of vegetables and drink more water
今天的风特别的大,飞沙走石,天昏地暗,天气预报说有沙尘暴。 我去学校的时候衣服很干净,等回来时,衣服都挂有一层土了。街上的行人特别少,风刮的人都睁不开眼睛,举步艰难,顶风骑车的就像蜗牛一样,慢吞吞的。
下面是沙尘暴预防措施 :
1.加强环境的保护,把环境的保护提到法制的高度来
2.恢复植被,加强防止风沙尘暴的生物防护体系。实行依法保护和恢复林草植被,防止土地沙化进一步扩大,尽可能减少沙尘源地。
根据不同地区因地制宜制定防灾、抗灾、救灾规划,积极推广各种减灾技术,并建设一批示范工程,以点带面逐步推广,进一步完善区域综合防御体系。
5.控制人口增长,减轻人为因素对土地的压力,保护好环境。
那什么是诚信呢?简单的说,“诚”就是诚实,不弄虚作假;“信”就是信任,对人讲信用,不欺诈坑弱。诚信就是待人处事真诚,讲求信誉,言必信,行必果,一言九鼎,一诺千金。
诚信是一种人人必备的优良品格。讲诚信的人,处处受欢迎;而不讲诚信的人,人们就会忽视他的存在,所以我们每一个人都要做到讲诚信。
可是现在,诚信随着时间的流逝渐渐地被人遗忘、丢弃,“地沟油”、“瘦肉精”等,无一不侵害着消费者的安全,有些商家为了赚取更多利益,丢掉诚信,去危害人们的生命安全,难道非得等到受到法律的审判,才肯罢休吗?
我不由自主地想到了我们中学生,我们是一个讲诚信的人吗?又有几个可以挺起胸膛说自己是呢?虽然有,但恐怕也是极少。有的人为了上网玩游戏而欺骗爸爸妈妈;有的人为了考出好成绩,选择了作弊;有的人犯了错误,当面认错一套,而背地里又是一套……我们一个接一个的谎言,就是一次又一次地违背了诚信,我们作为祖国未来的接班人,不要让我们的国家最终毁在我们缺乏诚信上。
我们中学生最应该讲诚信。青少年时期,是人的一生的黄金时期,是人的一生中最美好的时期,诚信是我们中华民族的传统美德,我们应该把诚信作为一个坐标,做老实人,说老实话,办老实事。像卖馒头的`老奶奶那样,诚信对人,诚信对己,渐渐地我们社会将会有更多的人讲诚信,我们的社会将会更加地和谐,祖国也将会越来越美好而强大!
《狼来了》的故事,我相信每一个人都知道,结局也很清楚,我希望我们每个人都讲诚信,以诚信作为我们人的一生的原则,不要让《浪来了》的故事,再度上演。
让我们一起行动,从自己做起,做诚实守信的人吧!
黄沙满天,大雾蒙蒙,一股黄风卷起……你们也许以为你在看电影,也许以为这在做梦,总而言之,你们相信这是真的吗?其实,这是沙尘暴“捣的'鬼”。沙尘暴是沙暴大哥和尘暴小弟的总称,他们经常用风把地面大量沙尘卷入空中使空气十分浑浊。他们的出生原因是因人们大度砍伐树木与植物而产生的。沙尘暴兄弟俩作为一种高强度风沙灾害,并不是有风的地方他们都喜欢,只有植物稀疏的地方,他俩才去那里。如果那里是植物和树极缺的地区,他们就会亮出自己的绝招——瞬时风速每秒达25米,风力10级以上,可能使地面水平能见度低于50米!
沙尘暴是一种危害性极大的灾害性天气。当沙暴大哥和尘暴小弟找到自己的“作案地点”时,会以排山倒海之势滚滚向前移动。他们的“作案”后造成的后果可不小,有时,会使大片农田受到沙埋或被刮走活跃土,或者农作物受霜冻之害。它还能加剧土地沙漠化,给人民生命财产造成严重的损失,他们一旦出现,所经地区受害尤为严重。
去年12月31日和今年元月1日,沙尘暴兄弟肆虐甘肃省河西走廊,兰州市出现浮尘,在他们的统治下,连白天开车都要开车灯呢。今年3月底以前,甘肃河西走廊和内蒙西部已出现沙尘天气9次之多。3月中旬,兄弟俩的踪影出现在距沙漠地区遥远的南京市,引起人们的恐慌。
沙尘暴兄弟气焰嚣张,甚至飘扬过海,登陆日本了,日本的电视新闻都在说:从中国来的6年来最大的一次沙尘暴袭击了日本的大部分地区。
沙尘暴兄弟对人类的危害这么大,不除不足以平民愤呀!我想发明一种机器,专门治理沙尘暴。当然,我的机器它并不是《西游记》中多闻天王的混元珠伞,能把花果山的猴子收拾得干干净净,而是一种能播撒绿色的机器。因为沙尘暴兄弟光靠挡是挡不住的,只有把他们消灭在“出生”的地方,才是治本的好办法。沙漠是沙尘暴兄弟的“出生地”,我发明的机器,能把他们困在沙漠里不能出来“作恶”。机器的形状象一个超级可乐瓶,里面装满了富于营养的物质和植物的种子,这种瓶子可以固定在飞机的肚子下面,飞到沙漠上空的时候,就通过操纵杆打开“瓶盖”,把营养物质和植物种子均匀地喷洒在沙漠表面,营养物质里面饱含植物生长所需的水分,经过科学家的特别配制,落到沙漠上后并不会马上被沙子吸收或蒸发掉,它会一直坚持到植物长大为止。我相信,过了不久沙漠上就会遍布绿色植物了。我的机器表面涂着漂亮的绿色,好像在暗暗地告诉着我们要保护环境。有了我发明的机器,沙尘暴兄弟这两个祸害人民的“罪犯”肯定被绳之以法了,哈哈!
当然,这只是我的幻想,现在真正地实现这个愿望还要等一段时间。所以,我们要从身边的一点一滴做起,从身边的小事做起,努力学习科学文化知识,将来有更多的发明创造,让大自然变得更加美丽!
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