社会万象类作文素材(社会生活类作文600字素材)

社会万象类作文素材(社会生活类作文600字素材)

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社会万象类作文素材(社会生活类作文600字素材)

社会万象类作文素材【一】

“后”的韩婷,辽宁大连人,是个月大宝宝的妈妈。她看到同样是个月大的小王涵被严重烫伤,心疼地流下眼泪。她在网络上组织成立“王涵爱心妈妈群”,呼唤大家对王涵的关心;她在现实中忙前忙后,用实际行动照顾这个受伤的孩子。在她的感召下,社会各界为小王涵捐治疗款万元,孩子的伤势得到治疗。她是网友熟知的“韩小宝”,她是后的“爱心妈妈”。

盲女林妍和导盲犬Sherry

高挑时尚的岁盲女林妍,岁因视力矫正手术失败而失明,坚强的她通过努力被评为沈阳十佳残疾人创业标兵。年父亲因病离世,她和母亲万分悲痛,心理和生活一直处在抑郁中。直到今年月,经过两年的申请而获得的\'中国首批导盲犬之一——Sherry来到她身边。Sherry是只训练有素的导盲犬,和它走在路上,林妍重新找回了健全人的感觉。对林妍来说,Sherry不是一只狗,而是伴侣,是亲人。她深信Sherry是她前世走失的家人,今世回来要重新相伴一生。

社会万象类作文素材【二】

【习作题目】

Students Grading of Their Teachers

1.学生给老师打分已很普遍;

2.人们对其持不同态度(肯定或否定的态度);

3.你的看法。

【习作解读】

显然,此任务是写一篇议论文,主题为对学生给老师打分的现象进行议论,开放性较大。学生应根据实际情况,从多个方面阐述其原因并表达自己对这种现象的观点和态度。该话题更加贴近学生的实际生活,但有一定的语言难度,也有一定的思想深度。通过此文的写作,也从侧面提示了学生在注重写作基础训练的前提下,也应该注重培养积极思考、灵活运用、自由发挥等能力。

此次的写作任务出题相当巧妙,写作内容涉及的词汇和句型都属于新课程标准范围。题目在考查学生写作能力的同时,也在考查学生的分析判断能力及高度概括能力。富有想象力的学生写出的文章可能生动而富有灵性。此题目能引发学生对平日习以为常的行为进行反思,学会换位思考,这对中学生的性格和品德培养非常重要。

【习作展示】

Students Grading of Their Teachers

Nowadays, a lot of schools ask their students to contribute to grading their teachers. As a teacher, it is their responsibility to satisfy their students in all aspects. Meanwhile, it is admirable that school teachers prefer to expose themselves to their students.

If the system of grading of teachers by students is introduced, it will benefit students, teachers and the administration of the school for a number of reasons. For one thing, the system will give teachers and the administration of the school an insight into the minds of the students and show whether the teachers are successful in getting their lessons understood by the students; for another, it will also encourage the good teachers to continue their efforts and motivate themselves. What is more, it will expose those who are not doing enough and will lead them to correct their teaching methods as well as their attitude towards students. Thus the quality of teaching will certainly improve.

In a word, it is a promising concept and will bring surprisingly good results if applied with the right conditions.

【习作点评】

作者观点明确,赞成学生给老师打分。作为老师,就要做一个让学生满意的老师。这样,不仅对学生、学校有利,而且对老师本人也有利。这样,老师就会从另一个角度重新审视自己,看自己是否是一个成功的老师。如果得到学生的认可,这将是对自己的一次鼓励,为继续前行增添动力。如果学生的认可度不高,老师就应进行反思,调控教学方法和教学态度。这样,教学质量肯定会提高。作

者用简洁、明快的语言以及自己的经历列举了充分的论据,内容充实,贴近生活。For one thing, for another, what is more, in a word等过渡词的使用,是短文结构清晰,层次分明。最后,最值得一提的是,文中多次正确运用的高级词汇和复杂句式,给文章增添了不少文采。综上所述,这是一篇不可多得的佳作,值得向大家推荐。

二、写作模板

此模板适用于社会现象类议论文。参考模式如下:

Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental There are a couple of reasons behind this problem/phenomenon. For one ;Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people 

Nowadays, there exists a common phenomenon—with the development of the Internet, more and more people tend to send electronic cards instead of paper ones to their friends and relatives when an important holiday comes.

There are a couple of reasons behind this phenomenon. For one thing, compared with the traditional cards, electronic cards are more lively and interesting. They can give not only pictures but also sound and animation. For another, there are many websites online which offer varieties of cards for you to choose from. What is more, with the popularity of the electronic cards, less paper is used in making paper cards, which does good to our environment.

Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that sending greetings by using electronic cards will be accepted by more and more people, not only the young ones.

三、写作指导

写作思路是先列出一个具体的社会问题或者现象,然后分析产生的原因和产生的影响,最后提出解决问题的办法,或者得出结论,或者提出个人看法,或者预测前景。

论点、论据、论证是议论文的三要素。论点是作者对所议论问题所持有的见解和主张,论据是用来证明论点的事实和道理的根据;论证是用论据来证明论点的方法和过程。一般来说,议论文每段都有主题句来确定论点。论证的方法很多,但最常用的是因果分析法。即:分析事实与论点的因果关系,指出取得结果的原因是所要证明的论点,从而达到论证的目的。

在近几年的高考中,议论文的比重占得越来越多,议论文的.出题形式可以多种多样,有看图写作、图表、表格、书信等各种类型,但文体实际是议论文,而有时是夹叙的议论文。议论文的写作要点是:

1. 观点鲜明,文章一定有一个明确的中心论点。

2. 层次分明,一个中心论点通常有几个分论点支持,不同层次之间要分明,过渡清晰自然。

3. 最后一段一般要总结全文,得出一个符合逻辑的结论,突出中心思想。

4. 一般采用一般现在时。

5. 语言简洁有力,一般不采用口语。

四、巩固练习

1.【练习题目】

2010年上海世界博览会期间,上万的青年志愿者参加志愿工作,请你谈谈对此现象的看法。

【参考范文】

During the period of holding the 2010 World Expo in Shanghai, tens of thousands of young citizens are participating in volunteer work, hoping to devote themselves to the grand occasion. As far as I am concerned, everyone ought to enter for it. Here are the reasons I want to mention.

It can be argued that the advantages of doing unpaid volunteer work are enormous, because volunteer work is actually a two-way street. First of all, volunteer work should always benefit people who need help. Those who need help will feel happier due to our immediate help. On the other hand, as far as the young people ourselves are concerned, we have more opportunities to develop the sense of responsibility, independence as well as interpersonal skills in the process of helping others.

Through this kind of work, we become confident and mature. In addition, we can make many friends and increase our chances of getting the jobs of our dreams. Furthermore, volunteer work plays an active role in building up a harmonious society.

In a word, it is of great value for the young adults to offer volunteer work. The youth volunteers do make a difference by the voluntary work! Why not join them and do something for our country?

2.【练习题目】

某些中学生为了显示自己成熟或表明自己醋而吸烟。请写一篇120词左右的短文,列举吸烟的危害,并提出建议。

【参考范文】

I am sorry to know that more and more middle school students begin to smoke. I think it is wrong to believe that smoking is cool and even think that smoking makes you appear to be mature. In fact, smoking is not cool but very dangerous.

First, smoking can do much damage to health. Scientific researches show that smoking can lead to heart diseases, cancers and other problems. It is reported that about 5 million people die of diseases related to smoking each year all over the world.

Second, it is a waste of money to smoke cigarettes. Smoking can cost a great deal of money. Once you are addicted to it, it is difficult to give it up.

What’s more, smoking can cause fires easily, which may do great damage to your life and your surroundings.

So give up smoking at once! Only in this way can you keep healthy forever.

3. 【练习题目】近年来,越来越多的中学生出国学习,出现了所谓的中学生“出国热”。请根据以下提供的信息,谈谈自己的看法。

1)良好的语言环境,更利于语言学习。

2)拓宽视野,学习国外先进的科学技术。

3)传播各民族间的不同文化。

参考词汇:媒介,中间人:mediator

【参考范文】

In recent years, studying abroad has been popular. Tens of thousands of Chinese middle school students have gone to foreign countries to study.Many people are trying their best to apply to go abroad.

There are a number of reasons for attending schools abroad.First, students who are studying abroad can act as mediators between people of different cultures. They can communicate with each other directly and learn about different cultures. Second, they can learn much more advanced knowledge of science and technology from foreign countries and experience different education methods.Third, they live in foreign countries and take classes given by foreign teachers. As a result, they can learn foreign languages much more quickly.

Therefore, it is advisable to attend schools abroad.

4.【练习题目】随着经济和社会的发展,道路上的私人小汽车越来越多。请根据自己的观察和理解,谈谈自己的观点。

【参考范文】

With the fantastic development both in economy and in society in China, the number of people who own private cars is on the rise. Some people have bought cars of their own, and others are planning to buy cars. But I strongly object to the increase in developing private cars.

I hold that automobiles will give rise to a series of problems. In the first place, as more and more cars are produced and run on the road, a large volume of poisonous gas will be given off, polluting the atmosphere and causing actual harm to the health of people. Next, private cars contribute to traffic jams so greatly that the advantages gained in comfort and freedom are often cancelled out by the frustration caused by traffic jams. The last problem is the increasing number of car accidents that have killed and will kill a lot of people in a friction of a second.

In a word, although automobiles have been playing a vital part in the daily activities of our society, they also bring us numerous troubles such as more serious environmental pollution, more traffic accidents and more energy consumption. They drink up huge amounts of fuel and throw out huge amounts of pollutants. Jams waste our precious time. Therefore, I am against developing private cars.

社会万象类作文素材【三】

洛阳市突降暴雨,市内一交通要道水深及膝,积水深达厘米,交通拥堵不堪。交警戚新峰在水中指挥交通。虽然穿着雨衣,但由于涉水时间较长,他的裤子都已湿透。紧张的疏导中,一只皮鞋被水冲走了,他索性把另一只鞋也脱掉,继续淌水指挥。戚新峰雨中指挥交通、援手被困群众的视频,被网友传至大河论坛,迅速走红。网友称戚新峰为“赤脚哥”,他在平凡中创造感动,在风雨中彰显无私。

社会万象类作文素材【四】

作为一名事业有成的香港人,曾敏杰始终心怀祖国。他热衷于内地的儿童公益事业,先后帮助多名脑瘫儿童进行康复治疗。玉树地震发生后,他又作为义工去灾区探望孤儿,发起公益活动,购买孩子们急需的炉子、棉鞋、帐篷等物资。就在将物资送往玉树最偏远的村寨时,他和同伴遭遇意外,不幸遇难。他被网民誉为“新阿福”,他的善心善举让我们看到,爱心无地域,真爱暖人间。

社会万象类作文素材【五】

队伍整齐有序地前进着,一路上大家欢声笑语,期待着目的地——万象山公园。“万象山到了!”随着老师的声音,大家越发兴奋起来,你一言我一语地议论着,顿时队伍里一片沸腾。

首先,映入眼帘的是万象山脚下的那一块硕大的石门。石门上还刻着栩栩如生的图案,我们走进石门就听到几声清脆的\'鸟叫,扑面而来的是阳光的洗礼。台阶两旁芬芳扑鼻的鲜花,同学们立刻被这一派美丽的景象所陶醉。

队伍继续前行着,满是绿树的浓荫石阶上长着深绿色的青苔。我们来到了革命烈士墓,一走到这里,仿佛眼前出现了革命烈士的身影,一股令人肃然起敬的感觉油然而生,几名严肃地站在石碑的两侧。我们缓慢地在一块块石碑前行进,严肃地望着这一个个革命先辈的名字,不禁心中升起一种敬畏感。

我们离开了革命烈士墓。突然,远处的歌声吸引了我们。寻着歌声,我们找到了歌声的主人——老爷爷老奶奶们。如果他们与现在的年轻人相比,可真是一点也不逊色。歌声悦耳动听,就好比一只只黄鹂鸟。等爷爷奶奶们唱完之后,迎接他们的是一阵又一阵雷鸣般的掌声。一位脸上还洋溢着笑容的指挥员爷爷还向我们挥了挥手,表现得和个小孩子似的……

今天我所看到的听到的,都会让我久久不能忘怀。

社会万象类作文素材【六】

女儿刚出生就患有脑瘫,个月大时又被诊断患有癫痫。岁老来得女的赵长萱,这位来自哈尔滨的伟大父亲,年如一日,用他最深沉、最厚重的爱,为女儿撑起了一片天空,创造了一个又一个生命奇迹。当《让世界充满爱》的动人旋律在耳畔轻轻流淌,从“唯朵至珍”,到唯爱至真,“朵朵爸爸”感动万千网民,也向我们诠释了这样一个道理:父爱如山,静默无声,不求回报;父爱似海,深沉宽广,足以包容一生。

社会万象类作文素材【七】

??生万象-六年级

在世界文字丛林中,中国汉字作为世界上最古老的文字,汉字保存了人类历史上最丰富的文明记录。它是我们民族文化的化石,坚不可摧;它是历史的载体,源远流长;它是民族文化的精髓,意蕴深厚。

佛家有“一花一世界,一叶一菩提”,汉字则完美的诠释了一字一人生,万象字中现。汉字的构造讲究严谨、神美、形美。不同的汉字展示出截然不同的景与情,汉字将形、神、韵糅合在一起,以字喻人,演绎着不同的人生状态。

汉字霓裳翩翩舞,幽思古意冉冉升。汉字就像一个舞者,用其妙曼的身姿完美的向人们表达自身的含义。以自然为例,“太阳”词让人感到热和活力,“明”由“日”和“月”组合而成,日月明鉴,自然就万物清明;笑,咧嘴而乐,令人欢愉;哭,双眼含泪……汉字就像一幅幅意味深长的画面,这些横竖钩点的奇妙组合,让你瞬间走进想象的空间,而后又慢慢溢出,只给你留下余留韵味,轻读细品。汉字以象形的方式,让你能够直白的了解其所表达的内容,但又不觉枯燥,因为它们都是一个个鲜活的生命,可爱的精灵!中国汉字,字正腔圆,是一种鲜明的特色,意在警示人类要堂堂正正做人,顶天立地!细细地品一个文字,便足以被它的魅力所折服,便体会到了仓颉造字的幽深古意!

心有菩提树,汉字菩提花。民族是枝桠,汉字结成花。流沙河曾经说过“一个汉字就像一台机器,能拆解成零件二三,零件组装配搭各异,每个零件都代表着不同的含义,通过重新组合形成的文字也有新的\'含义。”“进”的繁体是“进”“隹”是鸟的意思,为什么一只鸟和一个人的脚有向前的意思?实际上,我们人类走路,既可以向前面走,也可以退着走,所有的兽类,也都可以退着行。只有鸟类,只能向前飞,不能退着飞。所以要画一只鸟在里边,告诉你“进”是向前走。由此可见,古人造字是多么讲究,是多么的意味深长!我想这大抵是汉字为何经久不衰的原因了吧,因为汉字所蕴含的哲理,俨然成了一座只是宝库!

一字一乾坤,万象字中生。看呐,中国汉字多么美妙:“信”,一个人的言语与他本人一般比肩齐高,不夸张,不装小,堂堂正正。便是可信之人了;“邪”,是挨着耳朵,启牙弄齿,摆唇鼓舌,嘀嘀咕咕,恐为人知,肯定光明正大不到哪里去;“欠”,人感到头上有某种负重或是压力,必有欠负,“欠”往往压得人抬不起头直不起腰,索取的实质就是一种亏欠,所以人要活得洒脱,就不能过多的索取,要讲究奉献……一个汉字一种哲理,一个汉字一份真情。世间万象,汉字以其趣味性将耐人寻味的哲理变的通透,可谓是字里乾坤!

千年来的风俗礼仪、社会结构、道德伦理、哲学思考、审美意识----中华民族的文化基因,几乎都匿藏在一个个汉字所要反映的事物的摩画、概括和美化之中。一字一道德,一划一乾坤;方正天地大,识字做真人。汉字教我们的,不只是对世间万象的剖析,更教我们永隽不变的真理。汉字文化,化作菩提花种,植入心中发芽。

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