雅思大作文优点是否大于问题【一】
所谓议论文，最关键之处在于论述得当。支持句应使主题句更加令人信服，令考生的想法更加鲜明的呈现在考官面前。然而，中国考生在论述时往往存在一些误区：
雅思大作文优点是否大于问题【二】
通过观看这次《安全大于天》，我学到了许多日常生活知识。我们要注意安全，不要走黑暗的地方，遇到坏人一定要冷静，先往人多的地方去，再叫警察来帮忙，不能冲动；在动物园里，不要摸动物，以免被伤到；过马路时，要红灯停，绿灯行，一定要走人行横道；不要在楼道里打打闹闹，以免发生踩,踏；有人落水，自己不要去救，应该请大人去救；不能玩网络游戏，才不会使自己迷上网络，使学习成绩下降。比如每上学，总有许多人为了节省时间蹦又跳地闯红灯，一会前，一会后，好不容易到了对面。这样的事天天在发生，在延续，是你运气好，暂时没出事，有一天运气不好，就无法挽回了！
观看《安全大于天》，让我学会了怎样保护自己，不让自己受到伤害。记得爸爸以前常跟我说的一句话：“就算你很守交通规则，也有可能会出事——因为别人不一定会遵守交通。如果要不出事，就得人人遵守规则。”我现在才懂得这个道理，让我们永远记住：“珍爱生命，安全第一，生命只有一次。”
雅思大作文优点是否大于问题【三】
在这个句子中，我们先选择advertisements，influences， people这三个词汇，然后开始准备扩句。
雅思大作文优点是否大于问题【四】
虽然来源于身边社会，但不可让描述方式变的太鸡毛蒜皮，拿不上台面。其实这点非常容易办到，只需要把事件中某一个具体的你，我，他，变成是客观群体，比如说people across the globe, students, they之类的人称即可。
举例的常见表达方式：
for example,/for instance,（后加句子）
Such as/ like （后加词组）
Take... as an example,
A case in point is that......
其次，在举例时还应注意尺度。
1. 应避免使用第一人称和第二人称，为了加强客观性，应将人称写成第三人称。
改正：Those people who raise pets, such as dogs and cats, are more likely to gain happiness and relieve their loneliness.（那些养宠物，例如养猫和养狗的人往往更容易获得快乐并且缓解孤独感）
2. 应避免引用一项调查研究，并同时伴有过多数据。应将数据去掉，用含糊的方法表示。
改正：There is much evidence to show that the number of people smoking has increased at an alarming rate in China. （大量证据表明。。。）
3. 应避免将例子局限在一个国家，尤其是中国。应将范围放至全世界。
改正：Many children around the world like to sit in front of the screen for a long time, leading to their poor eyesight.（在全世界，许多孩子在屏幕前待太久，导致了他们的视力减弱。
“全世界”的表达方式：around the world, all over the world, across the globe
【写作真题】The advocates of international aid believe that countries have a moral obligation to help each other, while the opponents consider it necessary, because money is misspent by the governments that receive it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
【名师献计】This aid is essential to the homeless and useful in helping recipient countries return to their normal state after major disturbances. For example, with the humanitarian relief obtained worldwide on an annual basis, victims of natural disasters (such as tsunami, drought, flood throughout the world can recover rapidly and rebuild their homeland.
雅思大作文优点是否大于问题【五】
有些人也许会问，这么小的事真会有那么大的影响么？
说出来或许很多人不会相信。众所周知，文学界有名人物，也是诺贝尔文学奖的获得者，假如他当年如果没有老师的`瞧不起，或许今天我们都不知他姓甚名谁。
当年，莫言被老师说成是“笨”孩子，可他只有十几岁的年纪，能看出什么呢？老师的看不上，同学的白眼刺激了少年的心灵，从那时便要做出个样子来，让他们看看，才铸就了今天的辉煌。
影响铸就未来，性格决定事业。
当今，网络上炒的正火的人物－那个冷酷的少年吴亦凡，他曾一度是韩国偶像天团EXO-M中的队长，以帅气的外形，年纪的优势使他成为队长，他富有责任感，人气旺盛，成为一干少女心中的偶像。但就在2014年，他被医生诊断为“心肌炎”，医院下了通知单，继韩庚之后SM又将他视如机器零件，无情被抛弃。一年中他成长许多，带着成熟，带着朝气，带着原有的坚持与不放弃又向我们走来。带来了一个崭新的自己。被SM公司抛弃后，他并没有自暴自弃，也曾一度说:“我一定要在这片天地中闯出自己的天下。”最终他完美变形，华丽转身，早已成为娱乐圈小鲜肉，四次元少年。
像他们一样还好，可是有些没有毅力，却毁其一生。活的精彩是我这一生的标签。
小小的蜡烛，却让蝴蝶避而远之；
无意的话语，伤透了别人的心灵；
轻盈的脚步，踩痛了小草的灵魂；
雅思大作文优点是否大于问题【六】
雅思考试有条写作指令叫做：Include relevant examples from your own experience. 所以很多考生在考试时都喜欢使用举例法（exemplification。这一扩展方式本身无可厚非，然而在使用时几种例子是不适合的。
雅思大作文优点是否大于问题【七】
2. Many schools demand the students wear uniforms. Some people think that such a practice can undermine their personality and individuality. What is your opinion?
3. Some people believe that pet animals such as cats and dogs cannot be kept in the cities, especially in busy modern cities. Do you agree or disagree?
4. Nowadays, teenagers cause a lot of social problems due to lack of discipline. Some people think that parents should spend more time staying with their children. Do you agree or disagree?
5. Nowadays, many children have their part-time jobs. Some people say that doing part-time jobs is useful, but others argue that children should enjoy their childhood. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
6. Some people think if students want to learn a foreign language, it is advisable for them to learn it in the native countries where the language is actually spoken. Whats your opinion? Give your reasons.
7. In some countries, there are women taking the positions of police officers, while some people believe that women are not suitable to work in the police force. DO you agree or disagree? Write your reasons and give examples in your experience.
雅思大作文优点是否大于问题【八】
选好词汇之后，就选择搭配，但搭配的组合一定要与自己的观点相符：
influences我们通常都和positive / negative 搭配;advertisements也可以分为commercials和non-profit adverts;people可以用the general public替代，所以句子如下：
Commercials and non-profit adverts have both positive and negative influences on the general public.
这就是将简单句进行华丽变身的方法啦~最后环球君要给大家出个题目哦!
本周考题
Community service is helpful for both students and society.
这句话老师的扩句版本为
Establishing community service as a compulsory part in high school education is not only helpful for students but also meaningful for whole society.
