英语五年级 做汤的作文【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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英语五年级 做汤的作文【二】
Early morning，sun farther—in—law showed smiling face，small alarm clock “ bite the bell bites bell “ the ground cries，seem to saying：“Beautiful，should get up！Should get up！！
Li Lixing，see sun farther—in—law came out，asperse on pale green branch full bright sunshine。 Li Li wore a beautiful powdery dress，wore a sky—blue pants again。 At this moment，transmit outside the window “ chirp “ cry，li Li looks up to look，a birdie is crying，seem to saying：“Li Li has breakfast quickly，I and you go to school together。 I and you go to school together。
Li Li eats breakfast rapidly，carry small satchel on the back，go to school together with birdie。
英语五年级 做汤的作文【三】
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大，但是有的\'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能，人们可以i用电脑做很多事情，比如说看电影，听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器，所以我很喜欢电脑。
英语五年级 做汤的作文【四】
老板娘热情的招待了我，问我要吃点什么，我看了看老板娘憨厚的笑容说：大姐给我来碗馄饨，加一个火烧。”"一共6元不要点别的了？老板娘对我极为热情，我也被老板的热情感染了随即微微一笑回答：“不要了，谢谢，这些就行了”老板娘转身对她旁边的老公说“一碗馄饨一个火烧”然后又笑盈盈的对我说：“姑娘稍等马上就好啊”然后老板娘又开始对路人吆喝起来：“来看看啊，馄饨烧烤咯，”
我环视了老板娘家的小摊位，一个推拉车和烧烤炉， 四周摆满了小型的桌椅板凳，其实也不错，在吃的人还挺多的。旁边人嘀咕的声音我坐在这里都能听到，这样嘈杂的夜里仿佛让自己的内心更加的不安，“哟，馄饨好了，姑娘小心烫啊，”老板娘向我走过来。一碗热气腾腾的\'馄饨在我的面前，香气扑鼻啊，我拿着勺子喝了一口汤，入口就有一口淡淡的香菜味，入喉暖到心里了，我尽情的享受着一碗混沌带给我的温暖。
当我吃完的时候起身离开，老板娘又很热情的跟我说了再见还笑呵呵的让我下次再来，我回头点头示意了下老板的离别，手插在衣服口袋里，深深的吸舒了口气，想起老板娘的热情，想起那碗暖暖的馄饨，心头一暖，不觉得嘴角也偷偷扬起了微笑。
英语五年级 做汤的作文【五】
走着走着，便有阵阵香气扑鼻而来——是从那家牛肉汤店中传过来的！
我点了一碗牛肉汤，坐下来细细品尝，喝着这美味的牛肉汤，思绪被拉到了三年前。
还是同样的店，同样的碗，同样的牛肉汤，但那时却是我和太婆在一起品尝。
“天底下居然有如此美味的汤啊！”我说道，“牛可真是种好动物。”
“嗯！可谁曾经想起牛在默默无语地耕地？老了就老了，养着不就是为了卖钱吗？”太婆笑着对我说。“可……”我竟说不出话来了，突然感到手中的碗再也举不到嘴边。
太婆见我犹豫了，说：“喝吧！牛终究会老，与其老死，不如在它无能力耕地时做成一碗碗牛肉汤，让人们尝一尝，让人们充充饥。小文文啊，你是愿意自己做出贡献还是等着别人做出贡献呢？”
“但是…就留个完整的尸体…也不行吗？”
“唉，人有悲欢离合，月有阴晴圆缺，此事古难全啊！有的人死得轻如鸿毛，有的人则重于泰山！”太婆的脸上露出了严肃之情。
很不幸，太婆去年10月中旬因病离开了我们。她在临死之前最后说：“捐出……我……我所有……能用的……器官……”
随着店老板的一声叫卖声，我的思绪被拉了回来。那碗牛肉汤是我喝过最好的.汤！
那碗牛肉汤里，不仅有默默奉献的老牛的影子，有乐于奉献的伟大的太婆的影子，更藏着下定决心做贡献的自己的影子！
啊！那碗牛肉汤让我明白了很多，很多！
