一只山羊不小心掉到陷阱里去了,它拼命地喊:“救命啊,救命啊!”大象听见了赶忙跑过来,山羊立刻求大象救它。
大象见了,用自己长长鼻子在四周吸了一下,尘土立刻灌进它的鼻子里。大象又把鼻子往阱里一喷,尘土在阱里立刻堆得像小山一样,山羊站了上去,大象又吸了好多尘土喷到井里。
可是这样,山羊的前蹄还是没能碰到阱沿。
这时,一个小朋友正好经过这里,见此情况,心想:我要救救这只山羊。
于是,他跑回家拿来了梯子。让山羊逃了。
正巧,猎人回来了,他看见自己好不容易捕来的山羊被人放走了,气得火冒三丈。
他一边走一边想:这下我没有羊肉吃了。
于是他加快脚步走。
可当他看见那个人时却惊呆了,因为——那是他自己的孩子!
孩子对爸爸说:“爸爸,我们应该保护动物,这样人间才会美好。”爸爸听了直点头。
to prevent H7N9 we should know some common sense. First of all, it is important for us to prevent H7N9 from ourselves. For example, clean our hands frequently.
Sencondly, do more exercises. Such as running. Lastly, change our diet to keep balence. For example, eat more types of vegetables and drink more water
一路上,它一边欣赏路边美丽的风景,一边唱着歌谣。一蹦一跳地走着,完全陶醉在美景之中。它一会儿抬头仰望天空,和天空上的小鸟问好,一会儿又和池塘里的青蛙问好。殊不知,前方有一个大坑。它根本就没有注意,一脚踩进了大坑里,掉到里面去了。虽然,这个大坑并不是很深,但对于小鸡来说可以说是万丈深渊了。它努力地挣扎着,想要往上爬。可是,它尝试了好几次,都没有成功。它只好大声呼救:“救命呀!救命呀!快来救我!”终于,这呼救声被一只小猴子听到了。小猴子顺着呼救声的方向找去,发现小鸡掉到坑里去了。它试图用手去抓小鸡,可是由于猴子的手臂不够长,因此,这个方法行不通的。后来,小猴子灵机一动,去找来了一根长杆子,伸到下面,让小鸡跳上杆子,自己慢慢地爬上来。这样,小鸡终于得救了。小猴看它浑身沾满了泥土,忍不住大笑起来,并帮它拍打身上的泥土。
小鸡谢过小猴子后,又独自回家了。它想:我以后可真的要小心走路,绝对不能左顾右盼了,我得记住这次教训。
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
the sun rises in the east and sets in the west, which is caused by the rotation of the earth as you all know. but have you ever thought of the effect of the earths rotation on man and can you imagine what would happen if the earth stopped rotating?
the radius of the earth is about 6,370 kilometres. it takes the earth 24 hours to rotate once. objects on the earths equator move with the earth at a speed of 460 metres per second, and the air close to the earths surface turns at the same speed. if the earth stopped rotating suddenly, the air would keep flowing eastward at a speed of 460 metres per second. the wind would be fourteen times as powerful as a hurricane. at the same time sea water would rush eastward at a speed of several hundred metres per second, which might do damages much greater than a seaquake would do. obviously, men could hardly stand such a catastrophe.
even if such a catastrophe would not happen, there would be a great temperature difference on the two hemispheres of the earth, and the four seasons of the year would no longer occur because a day and a night would be as long as a whole year instead of 24 hours. all this would greatly affect the life of human beings, imals and plants and that would cause worse results than anything imaginable.
太空人3150号是一架运输飞船,是用一种新材料制成的,抗腐抗潮,经得起大陨石的`冲撞。其速度更是快得惊人,最高时速约每秒97840万光年,所以它主要用来运输路程较远的矿产。
我是宇宙矿产公司3小组的组长,还有助手柯尔太以及3名矿产考察员。
“柯尔太,你把前几天发现的飞马矿资料给我看看。”
“好的!”柯尔太大声回答,“你看,这是……”
“不错,只要我们能找到更多的飞马矿,并把它带回地球,向地球矿产协会申请为可用矿石,一定能闻名全球!”
过了一会儿,我们已经到了飞马太前,一座座晶莹透亮的“小山”,仿佛明亮的水晶。我们把飞马矿放进飞船。不久,就带着沉重的“货物”返回了地球。
几周后……
“组长,你快过来看看!”柯尔太站在公司信箱前向我挥手,我漫不经心地走过去。“啊,太棒了。我们的申请成功了。”我高兴地说。
“没错,信上还说要我们多运点飞马矿咧。”
“好,我们明天就出发。”
第二天,在晶莹的飞马矿前,又出现了我们的身影。
中午,我们围在一起商量如何把这么多的飞马矿运回地球时,一阵雷鸣般的谈话声,震得耳朵发痛。我觉得有点不对劲,就要柯尔太随我一起去看看。于是,我们带上“音量调整器”出发了。我们朝着声音走去,只见几十个约二十多层楼高的巨人坐在一起商量着什么。
“兄弟们,最近我们的矿石越来越少了,这是怎么回事?”一个巨人问道。
“都是那些地球人***好事!”一个巨人获得了发言权,“他们私自挖我们的矿,所以我们得多招些兄弟,一起去地球转转,给地球小虫一点颜色瞧瞧。”
“我听说地球是个美丽的星球,还有许多好东西;如果可以的话,最好把那些永不知足的地球小虫统统踩扁!然后,尽量把好东西往衣袋里装;最后,再给他们一颗‘魔鬼终结者’!那地球就全完蛋了!”一个巨人说着手舞足蹈起来。
“那好,各位,今天就去召集人手,明天就出发!”
听到这里,我们扭头就跑。
“啊呀!”柯尔太重重地摔在地上。
“谁在那里?”一个巨人吼道。
我见势不妙,一把拉起柯尔太就跑。
“小虫,哪里跑!”
我急中生智,看见前面有堆飞马矿,就跑过去给“麻醉核炮”补充能量。
“预备,发射!”
只见整个天空一亮,3条蓝色门柱的能量波像利箭一样从炮口射出,后来合成一个巨大的能量球,向正在追赶的巨人飞去,直击在领头巨人的胸口,扩散出十几米宽的能量余波,旁边的几个巨人都惊慌地逃跑了,我也似乎把悬吊在心里的那块石头放下了。
“太棒了,柯尔太,我们从危机中拯救了地球。”
To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界,
一花一天堂,
手中即无限,
永恒亦短暂。
How to prevent the H7N9?
As is well known,the A flu is spreading throught our country. However, if we negnect it, the deadly H7N9 may cause more infectors,or even more deaths. So what is the most important is that we should take some effective measures to prevent it.They can be listed as follows.
Firstly,it is necessary for you to realize the Avian flu can be prevented if you develop good living habits. For example,you shouldn’t forget to wash your hands before meals.Besides,don’t spit everywhere and try to cover your mouth or nose with paper or hankerchiefs when you have to cough or sneeze.What’s more, remember to wear the mouth-cover if you have to go to the public places, such as the crowded cinemas,supermarkets, buses,where the A flu may spread easily.
Secondly,of course, taking exercise more often and taking good sleep to build your body are wise choices for you to reduce the risk of being infected.
Last but not the least, if you are unlucky to be infected with the slight flu cold, try to stay at home,and take some medicine. Do pay attention to your daily body temperature. If you have a high fever, go to the hospital without delay for further treatment. Make sure you are not expected to come back to school before the cold or flu is cured.
Only by doing like this can you prevent or defeat the A flu in the end.
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