初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大,但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能,人们可以i用电脑做很多事情,比如说看电影,听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器,所以我很喜欢电脑。
那是个冬天的早晨,寒风猛烈地吹着,这样的天气也许谁都不愿意早起。我收紧衣服的领口,急匆匆地来到小区门口买早点,可是卖早点的'小摊前排着长长队伍。我看了看表,已经七点四十了,我的前面还站着许多人。我寻思着这下糟了,上学还有十多分钟的路程,如果继续等下去就一定会迟到。我心急火燎,抓耳挠腮,好像热锅上的蚂蚁,急得原地直打转。
这时,站在队伍最前面的一位阿姨回过头来,她好像看到了我的窘样,又似乎猜透了我的心思。她微笑地向我招招手,和蔼地说:“小朋友,你这么着急,是不是要迟到了?”我红着脸回答道:“是的,如果我迟到了,就会被同学们笑话,他们会说我是‘迟到大王’。”她微微一笑,毫不犹豫地说“既然你要迟到了,那我把我孩子的早餐让给你吧,我们不赶时间。”
我看了看站在阿姨身旁的小女孩,她个子不高,五六岁的模样,应该上幼儿园了。早晨的这段时间对谁来说都很紧张,但这位阿姨好心地把早餐让给了素不相识的我。我感激极了,十分抱歉地说:“谢谢阿姨,给您添麻烦了,让您耽误时间了。”阿姨微笑着说:“没事,我们再等一会儿,不要紧。”说着,她牵着小女孩走到了长长的队伍最末尾。
我捧着这份盛满善意的早点,转回头望着小摊前长长的队伍。在队伍的最后,那一大一小的两个身影模糊了我的视线,隐约中仿佛她们的身影正在逐渐变大,大到足以挡住了所有的寒风,甚至挡住了整个冬天,让我感到特别的温暖。
虽然冬天早已过去,但在那个清晨、那份暖人的早餐至今还让我回味无穷,令我铭记于心。
想起老师布置的作业,我对妈妈说:“妈妈,今天的早餐就让我来做吧!”妈妈欣然答应了。 我立刻穿衣起床,来到厨房一看,厨房里只剩下一包挂面了,那就做挂面汤吧。在妈妈的指导下,我干开了。我先把水放进锅里,等水烧开了,再把挂面一把一把放进去。在沸水里大约煮了四五分钟,再用筷子把面条夹进大碗里。接着,我把锅里的.水倒了,再倒上一锅清水,等到水再次烧开,再把挂面放进去,煮上两分钟左右,在锅里放上黄糖,搅拌,就起锅了。 面条有了,该来点什么下下面呢?哦,就来煎个蛋吧。我先把平底锅架在灶炉上,打开煤气灶,把火调到文火,等锅干了,再倒上油,让油均匀地流到锅的每一个角落。等油锅热了,再把蛋打碎放进油锅。妈妈在一旁指导着。我心想:油会溅起来吗?溅到手上脸上痛吗?想到这里,我害怕极了,不敢把蛋敲碎放下去。妈妈鼓励我说:“孩子,有妈妈在身旁,不用怕。”于是我放大胆子,把蛋打碎,放进油锅。只听见油锅里立刻发出了“滋——滋——”的响声,吓得我向后倒退了好几步。过了片刻,我拿起筷子,给蛋翻了一个身。这样,来回翻了几次,蛋大概有七八成熟了,妈妈在一旁说:“可以起锅了,煎蛋太老了就不好吃了,七八成熟最好吃。”我赶紧用筷子把煎蛋夹起来放进碗里,然后浇上一些酱油,一个煎蛋就这样做成了。
接着,我又照样子煎了一个蛋。 一碗面条,一个煎蛋,一根香肠,我和妈妈坐在餐桌前,开始享受起了早餐。吃着自己亲手做的早餐,觉得特别有味道。同时,我也感受到了平时妈妈做菜的辛苦了。
在新的一年中,我要帮妈妈多做一些力所能及的事。
在我成长的道路上,总有一些人、一些事,让我记忆犹新,久久难忘。总有一些感动犹如美妙的弦律始终在我的心头回荡。
那是个冬天的早晨,寒风猛烈地吹着,这样的天气也许谁都不愿意早起。我收紧衣服的领口,急匆匆地来到小区门口买早点,可是卖早点的小摊前排着长长队伍。我看了看表,已经七点四十了,我的前面还站着许多人。我寻思着这下糟了,上学还有十多分钟的路程,如果继续等下去就一定会迟到。我心急火燎,抓耳挠腮,好像热锅上的'蚂蚁,急得原地直打转。
这时,站在队伍最前面的一位阿姨回过头来,她好像看到了我的窘样,又似乎猜透了我的心思。她微笑地向我招招手,和蔼地说:小朋友,你这么着急,是不是要迟到了?我红着脸回答道:是的,如果我迟到了,就会被同学们笑话,他们会说我是‘迟到大王’。她微微一笑,毫不犹豫地说既然你要迟到了,那我把我孩子的早餐让给你吧,我们不赶时间。
我看了看站在阿姨身旁的小女孩,她个子不高,五六岁的模样,应该上幼儿园了。早晨的这段时间对谁来说都很紧张,但这位阿姨好心地把早餐让给了素不相识的我。我感激极了,十分抱歉地说:谢谢阿姨,给您添麻烦了,让您耽误时间了。阿姨微笑着说:没事,我们再等一会儿,不要紧。说着,她牵着小女孩走到了长长的队伍最末尾。
我捧着这份盛满善意的早点,转回头望着小摊前长长的队伍。在队伍的最后,那一大一小的两个身影模糊了我的视线,隐约中仿佛她们的身影正在逐渐变大,大到足以挡住了所有的寒风,甚至挡住了整个冬天,让我感到特别的温暖。
虽然冬天早已过去,但在那个清晨、那份暖人的早餐至今还让我回味无穷,令我铭记于心。
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