关爱是一盏灯,照亮了人们前进的道路;关爱是一艘小船,把人们带到爱的彼岸;关爱是一把火,温暖了人们的.心。随着关爱的脚步,我轻轻地打开记忆的闸门。
那是在我幼儿园的时候。那时我爸妈工作很忙,常常是很迟来幼儿园接我回家。那时我们的老师是陶老师,她是一个很慈祥的老教师。
一天放学后,眼看着其他同学都一个个被大人接走了,而我的父母仍迟迟没来。此时外面下着倾盆大雨,我望着乌云密布的天空,忐忑不安的想:怎么办?难道今天爸妈要很迟来接我吗?可我没带雨伞啊!怎么办啊!正在我焦急不安时,陶老师走过来,和蔼可亲地对我说:“陶立莹,不用担心,爸爸妈妈忙,我可以送你回家,你去教室等等。”说着递上一包饼干,让我吃。
于是,我来到小班的教室里看动画片。在看动画片的时候,陶老师还在一旁耐心地照顾小朋友们,脸上的皱纹笑成一团,像一朵灿烂的菊花。
“陶立莹,收拾一下东西。时间到了,我可以送你回家了!”陶老师对我温柔地说。“嗯!”我轻轻地应了一声。陶老师的手紧紧地牵着我的手,我在心里感慨:陶老师的手真暖啊!真希望每一天都有一双温暖的手握着我。就这样,我和陶老师一同撑着一把紫色的雨伞,向我家走去。
终于到家了,我向陶老师说了声谢谢。陶老师跟我道别后便回去了。我一直站在门口目送陶老师远去的背影,而那把紫色的雨伞此时还在雨中跳动,如一朵怒放的花。
自此以后,每当我看到陶老师,总会亲切地叫她一声,也会想起在那个大雨滂沱的日子里,那一把跳动的紫色雨伞......
一尘不染的天空中挂着一轮火红的太阳,在太阳光辉的照耀下,是人声鼎沸的大街。一个女生在楼下朝我挥手。定睛一看,嘿,那不是安月吗?我连忙像一只小兔子似的,蹦蹦跳跳地去开了门。
安月头发上的汗珠在赛跑似的,一个接一个地飞奔而下。我给她擦了擦,然后邀她坐到沙发上问;“先从哪一科开始呢?”
“嗯……语文吧!”安月想了想,“先听写!”
“好!”我欢快地像只小麻雀,可当我去房间里弯腰在书包里找听写本时,腹部猛地传来一阵巨痛——老毛病又犯了!它使我不得不停下手中的动作。我僵在了那里。
安月走了进来,问:“怎么了?”
“肚子疼……”我喘息着,用着最后一点力气说出了这句话,随后瘫坐在地上,不知道为什么,那些不争气的小东西开始在眼睛里打转。安月见状,把我扶上床,然后像刚刚我为她擦汗那样拂去了我的眼泪。
太阳不见了,却能看到白云。它们好像一张洁白的画纸,定格在了我窗前。
安月擦完我的眼泪,便出去了,不一会儿,隐隐约约听到了烧水的声音,两分钟过去,只见安月端着两个装了水的杯子进来,她小心地将杯子放在了桌子上,然后拍拍我,从手中取出两粒药丸说:“梦,把药喝了。”她的声音很轻,以至于让我想起了妈妈的声音。
我照做了,在喝药的过程中,又看见她从兜里取出了一包冲剂,我认得那冲剂,是治肚子疼的。随后她熟练的动作让我大吃一惊,我喝完药,便问:“安月,你怎么这么快就弄好了?”
“我?我家里有个弟弟,他也经常胃疼……所以我就会了”安月被我这么一问,原先井然有序的动作开始乱起来,“瞧!被你问得我都不好意思了。”
看着她的背影,我的眼泪不禁再次涌上眼眶,但这次,我忍住了:“安月,谢谢你。”
“啊?不客气,不客气。”她显然更仓促了,脸稍稍泛红,“我们都是好朋友!”
关爱,是一个眼神;关爱,是一个会心的微笑;关爱,是一句温暖的问候……
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
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