I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
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High school is regarded as the best time in a person's life. As a senior 3 student, it won't take long before I graduate.
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Some fish are forced to leave polluted water and are flying in the sky. But unfortunately, air is also so polluted that they have to wear masks. Each of them is crying, “Where is my home?” What a terrible sight!
Mankind has brought so much pollution. Waste is being poured into rivers and seas. Poisons to kill pests in farming and chemicals go into rivers and seas, too. Poisonous gasses from factories also make the air so dirty. The whole balance of nature is being destroyed as a result of our ignorance of the environmental protection.
Personally, man can not live alone on the earth. Should fish die from serious pollution, so would man! It is high time we did something to prevent such a scene from happening.
妈妈在厨房忙了一个小时,我可不想让妈妈失望。妈妈端来一小杯中药,说:晴晴,你喝吧。妈妈尝过了,可苦!记住,不要尝味道,要大口大口的喝下去!我说:妈妈你去帮我拿块糖,喝完我吃。
糖拿好了,我开始打量杯中的'中药。那中药呈黑色,看起来挺苦的,我小心地端起杯子,用鼻子闻了一下,怎么闻起来也很苦。我开始有些犹豫:喝还是不喝。
良药苦口利于病,忠言逆耳利于行。这是小学课本上的一句话。我曾说过无数次,又曾说过中药有什么苦,为什么不喝呢?为了自己的身体能快点好起来,把这中药喝了!
于是,我果断地喝了下去。中药比我想象的苦,我往嘴里塞了块糖,一会儿就不苦了!中药果然和别人说的一样苦,不是一般的苦,而是非常的苦。爸爸对我说过:吃得苦中苦,方为人上人!我不是喝一次中药,所以我要坚持,能吃苦!
中药是苦,但苦后才会甜!
“西药治标不治本,中药标本兼治。”外婆这样说。于是,妈妈带我去医院,拎回一大袋子草药。
我坐在桌前,望着这些草药,一张苦瓜脸怎么也笑不出来。心中想:要喝中药了。可该怎么办呢?中药又苦又难喝,不想喝呀!
我走进厨房,药正在熬着,苦涩的药味一下子钻入了我的'鼻孔,紧紧捂着鼻子,赶紧逃离。刚出厨房门,又愁了起来呀!连味道都这么难闻,这药一定非常难喝。为什么中药就那么苦!
饭后半小时,喝药的时间到了,两个杯子在桌上被妈妈摆成一排。一个里面装了大半杯棕色的苦药,另一个里面装了白开水。
我一步步走向放药的桌子,觉得每一步都是那样沉重,好像在走向刑场,心中更是一百个不情愿:不想喝呀!
我端起杯子,心中数:一、二、三!喝!可是,我的双手却一点也不听大脑指挥,端起杯子的手反而放下了。“快喝吧!喝下去就好了!别害怕!加油!”无论大脑怎么鼓励,手还是无动于衷。大脑生气了:“喝!又有什么大不了的?不就苦那么一会儿嘛!”
我只好又端起杯子,送到嘴边,用最快的速度喝。药水从我的嘴里流过,苦涩却留了下来,我闭紧双眼,握紧拳头,只顾喝。药被我喝完了!放下杯子,迅速将白开水猛地朝嘴里灌,终于好了!
我将一颗阿尔卑斯糖放入嘴里,感觉比以往都要甜!
本文格式正确,意思表述完整,行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用,还使用了以‘which,’引导的非限定性定语从句,从而使文章层次分明,富于变化,不愧为考场佳作。
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