When I was a freshman in college I watched the film Gua Sha Treatment for the first time, now I am a junior student and I come back to review the movie from a multicultural aspect, I have many different feelings after watching the film again.
At the beginning of the film, XuDatong is given an award and later he delivers a speech. What makes me impressed most is in his speech he says “one day I will become one of you, a truly successful American, today this award proved that America is a true land of opportunity and I am the living proof of that.” At that moment Xu thinks he has realized his American Dream totally with his lovingly wife and adorable son. However, I think it is ironical that to make a speech like that and I assume it is made on purpose to hind a clue for the story's development. How many non—American people have such a beautiful American dream? One of my classmate studies in American now and before he went aboard he told me his American dream is he can stand at the top of the New York. To be honest, I also dream that one day I can get the Green Card living there happily and successfully maybe working at the Wall Street. When Xu gets the award he thinks he entirely melted in the melting pot neglecting the multicultural obstruct, later the plot goes against the way he thinks. And later Quinlan asked Xu'why you be the scapegoat of your father?' Xu answers 'because he is Chinese.' Then maybe Xu knows that there is always a wide gap between Chinese and American cultures.
The second scene is Xu hit his son Denis because Denis hit the son of xu's boss, at the middle of the film xu tells his boss that he hit his own son is only to show his respect to his boss John Quinlan, that time Quinlan feels puzzled “what a Chinese logic”,yes, American can never understand such a logic full of Chinese characteristic, because they respect everyone including the children, they won't beat a child to please the boss, and there is no such a conception of degree between employee and employer, they feel everyone is equal, which is quite different from china.
Connected to the second scene, the third difference I want to analyze is the care for the children. In America, people pay more attention to the right of children which can be seen from the law—leaving children alone at home is illegal, while in China it is so common that almost everyone may experience such loneliness. And Children Welfare Agency does work in America which shows the importance Americans attach to children's right. What's more, I remember a line 'No one won the case, especially the child.' In my opinion, it also manifests the universal concern from the American public to the children.
The fourth aspect is following the procedure, in the film, more than there times, the people focus on the rule, the law, the procedure. At the Christmas Eve Xu wants to return back to his home pretending as a Santa Claus, what a pity, the security recognizes him and persuades 'you are always a good tenement, never causes troubles for me.' And another scene is at the end of the film , the judge says 'I have to follow the procedure.' However, in China people always have to ask for a favor to do something, and later you have to pay back the favor,for myself, I prefer the American style, strict to the procedure.
The fifth and the last point is the humors, Quinlan says 'you can't fall, your health security is the company paid.' 'Datong, welcome home, maybe next time, you can come from the front door.' 'dady, why you come from the window' ' because we don't have a chimney.' I really adore this distinguished American humor, especially in dangerous situations, which is quite rare in China.
That's my whole reaction to Gua Sha Treatment.
小时候,我一直肠胃不好,记得那时常常是三天一吐五天一拉,小区里的卫生所似乎可以算得上是我的半个家了。妈妈说小米粥可以养胃,因此我家冰箱里常常多出一大包小米。妈妈熬小米粥的技术更是一流的,那热乎乎的米粥浓稠又晶莹剔透,仿佛每一粒小米都被施了魔法一般浮在粥中,加上那偶尔几个红枸杞,几块儿核桃,那时可是我的最爱啊。从小,我就时常耍滑头装胃疼,缠着妈妈给我熬米粥。
但有一次,我不知是吃坏了什么,半夜突然肚子疼,随即上吐下泻,于是就赶紧去了医院。经医生诊断,说是急性肠胃炎,要输液。于是,我只好在病房呆了一夜。可是当我早上一睁眼,却发现在身旁陪我输液的妈妈没了,我折腾了一夜,吃的东西全都吐光了,肚子饿极了,正当我虚弱的准备闭上双眼时,门“吱呀——”一声开了,只见妈妈大敞着羽绒服,怀里抱了个保温桶,从外面风风火火跑了进来,外面的寒气袭来,我不禁打了个冷战,妈妈赶紧转身关紧了门。“妈,你怎么连外套扣子都不系,大冷天儿的,感冒了怎么办?”我皱着眉头说道,“保温桶不太保温了,我刚给你熬的米粥,来的路上怕凉了。没事儿,妈的身板硬着那!”说罢,便忍不住结结实实打了个大喷嚏,她红着脸,不好意思的'冲我笑笑,手却麻利地打开了盖子,给我盛了一碗米粥。我赶忙接过来,却看到了妈妈冻得通红的双手,如细胡萝卜一般,一根根手指又红又肿。米粥的热气迎面扑来,氤氲着那小米的淡淡清香,我的鼻子酸了,眼泪也涌了上来,一片泪光中,我又瞧见妈妈抱着那剩下的半桶米粥,小心地走到暖气片那边,将米粥放在暖气片上温着,随后又缓缓地走回来,搓着手问我感觉好点了没。我当时只感觉热乎乎的米粥流入了我空荡荡的胃中,满足了我的肚子,也暖了我的心。那米粥仿佛真的比药还灵,几口下肚,便舒服了许多。
而今,我已住校,不能时常喝到母亲那纯正而黏稠的米粥,便越发依恋那味道。好在食堂也有米粥,只是时而太稀,时而太稠,不及母亲的十分之一二罢了。每当我胃病犯了的时候,就喝那米粥,暖胃,更暖心。
手里捧着那碗米粥,米香氤氲在鼻尖,而爱,流淌在心头。
改写括号中的内容,使其句式整齐,韵律和谐。
醒来眼里布满了泪水;(大病之后我疲乏,依依不舍的离别,旅行途中的辛苦,到家后可能的恐怖的事实,)都到心上来了。
分析:这是一道典型的语言运用试题,在近年中考语文试卷中经常出现。这类句式修改,一般要求句式整齐,语意连贯,可调整个别词语和句子顺序,但不得改变句子愿意。
句式整齐,语意连贯,其实就是修改为整句。整句是什么呢?整句就是把结构相同或者相似的一组句子整齐地排列在一起。整句形式整齐,音律和谐,气势贯通,能够把内容表达得鲜明集中,有利于突出作者的思想感情。
本题的实质是将原句修改为排比句(排比句就是整句的一种),但在题目中并没有明确指出,意在降低试题难度,只要句式基本整齐,意思和原句差不多都能得分。
查看本题中要修改的部分,我们很容易发现,出现了“大病之后”、“旅行途中”、“到家后”三个时间状语,只要第二个短语“依依不舍的离别”可以修改为时间状语修饰,句式基本上就整齐了。“依依不舍的离别”就是离别的时候依依不舍呀,“离别时”不就是一个时间状语吗?
看看,这样修改后就变成了“大病之后我疲乏,离别时的依依不舍,旅行途中的'辛苦,到家后可能的恐怖的事实”
是否还需要进一步修改呢?同学们在修改中也要试着读一读,看看还有不有别扭的地方。我们很快就可以发现,第一个短语和后三个是不同的。我们只需要把第一个短语也修改成的字短语修改的偏正短语就行了。
“大病之后的疲乏,离别时的依依不舍,旅行途中的辛苦,到家后可能的恐怖的事实”
这已经非常不错了,当然,你还可以进一步美化。
“大病后的疲乏,离别时的不舍,旅行途中的辛苦,到家后可能的恐怖的事实”
前三句字格式、字数完全相同了,最后一句是不能改为“到家后的事实”的,也不能改为“到家后的恐怖事实”,因为去掉“可能”,就改变原句的原意了。
青岛实验初级中学 胡凯宇
一把提琴,操在乐师手中,音乐就动听了;一支画笔,握在画师手中,春天就盛开了;一碗米粥,在妈妈手中,亲情就融化了。有米粥相伴,滋味更长。
自从上了初中,作业量逐渐增大,每次回家便一头扎在作业堆里。妈妈很是心疼,于是就开始为我煮粥。起初,母亲给我煮的只是乳白的米粥,表面上平淡无奇,实则清香无比,让人神清气爽,好滋味在心头。每每吃过后总会抹抹嘴,开心地说句\"真好吃\"。这不经意间的赞扬,给了母亲无限的\"后劲\"!餐桌上粥的花样开始翻腾起来,从平常的菠菜粥、白菜粥到夏日里的赤豆粥、绿豆粥再到冬日里的.花生粥、皮蛋粥、羊肉粥……各式各样的米粥在妈妈精湛的厨艺下与我相伴。
在静谧的夜晚里,在明亮的灯光下,捧着一碗温暖的米粥,坐在氤氲着舒缓的米香的热气里,伴着母亲关切的询问声\"今天过得开心吗?\"我总能感到无比的惬意与放松,不仅如此,我更感受到了一种更强大更长久的滋味——母爱! 那天,正在享用香菇木耳粥,突然问母亲:\"妈,当时为什么想起给我煮粥呢?\"母亲娓娓道,\"你每天回家,我想和你说会儿话,又怕打扰了你的学习,所以妈妈在家里一边慢慢地煮粥,一边慢慢陪你写作业……\" 听着妈妈的话,我心里莫名感动,觉得那粥的味道更浓郁了。
最长情的爱就是陪伴!相伴儿子成长的过程,就像等待一锅粥煮熟的过程。爱,就在浓浓的粥里,有米粥相伴,滋味更长!
【兰姐姐点评】
一碗粥里的浓郁亲情,从胃里穿越到心里,成了最好的精神给养。作者的选材小切口大写意,感情表达得恰如其分,语言自然流畅,且首尾圆合,多处点题,是一篇佳作。
This is my first week in ** Senior Middle School.Everything here is new for me.Our school is an old school but it`s very beautiful.I have 50 new classmates in my class.They`re all very excellent, I think, and I felt a little sad.Because I`m too common.But come to think of it,it`s a very good thing.I believe I can also be very excellent if I study with such excellent classmates.I didn`t know why Ms *** chose me to be the committee of study.But I know it`s a good chance for me to raise my ability.All I can do is do my best in the future.I am sure that Ms *** and my classmates can help me when I do something wrong. Because they`re all very kind.It`s a pleasure to work and study with them.I`m really very happy.I`m not an outstanding student in this class,but I can do the same thing like others.I believe I won`t make anyone disappointed.
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