我正在家里津津有味地看书,“叮零,叮零。”突如其来的电话声打破了这宁静。原来是妈妈呀,在电话里,妈骂千叮咛万嘱咐的交代我,今晚她有事,要晚点回来,让我把饭煮好了,他下班后去买些熟食就可以吃饭了,妈妈反复的将煮饭的步骤告诉我,我有些摸不着头脑似懂非懂的说懂了。
我依依不舍的放下书,向厨房走去。我先把锅洗好,放了两碗米,接下来要把米洗干净妈妈交代我要用双手搓米。水质就会变白,把米洗两三轮就好了。我放了少许水,双手不停地搓这米,“呀,水果然变白了。”我情不自禁的脱口而出,好像发现了惊天秘密似的。我细细地洗,慢慢地搓。洗了五六次最令我疑惑不解的是;为什么洗了那么久水还是那么白呢,妈妈说只用洗两三次,但我洗了这么多次水还是白白的,是不是我洗的不够干净。
我左思右想也想不明白,我只好无奈地继续洗。反复洗了十几次,为什么还是洗不干净呢,正当我百思不得其解的时候,妈妈回来了,我迫不及待的跑到妈妈面前,疑惑不解的问妈妈;“妈妈,为什么我洗了好多次水依然会变白呢,是不是我洗的不够干净呀。”
妈妈笑了笑,不紧不慢地对我说;“不是的,只要把米洗两至三次就行了,水变纯白色是因为大米本身的物质,所以,不是你洗得干不干净的'原因,知道吗。”
说完,妈妈转身向厨房走去,看着妈妈在厨房忙碌的身影,顿时,我感到一阵心酸。妈妈的白头发好像越来越多了,但是,我好像从来都没有这样仔细的观察过妈妈,即使美貌和青春隐退,她还会以往一样一如既往地支持我无微不至的照顾我。
第一次煮饭让我印象深刻,它是我人生道路上一段有趣的经历。生命中的第一次愈多,生命也就愈多姿多彩。第一次的不一定都愉快但是新鲜而刺激,使人回味无穷……
现代的社会,科技飞速发展,城市面貌可以说是焕然一新了,电饭煲也走进了千家万户,派上了很大的用场。
今天,我向大家推荐一种商品——海尔CFJ302型智能电饭煲。、有了他,你就可以天天吃上香喷喷的米饭。
你瞧!他又一身粉红色的衣服,衣服上还印着几只翩翩起舞的蝴蝶正在追逐打闹。他就是接下来我向大家推荐的高智能电饭煲。
这种电饭煲精美用耐用。他的主要功能是煮饭、加热等等。因微压力蒸汽阀设计,提高煲内压力,所以以营养保留的更全。让人们吃的安心。
海尔电饭煲的盖比较独特,青苹果形状的,只要按一下苹果中间的按钮,他就会缓慢升起,非常神奇!
这种电饭煲的设计是结构简便,温控灵敏一键操作,自动保温人性化设计,并且超厚内锅,加热均匀,锅体不易变化,既又光滑所以蒸出来的美味可口而且海尔的售后服务比较及时,迎得了人们的信赖
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
在我家厨房有一个像“鸵鸟蛋”的东西,它就是我们生活中必不可少的一样家具,那就是厨房的佼佼者——电饭煲!
这种电饭煲可厉害了!品牌是__最大、全球第二的炊事研发制造商——苏泊尔;颜__是酷酷的酒红__;内胆是晶钢内胆;适应人数2-4人;容量3升;能较比3级。代言广告“聪明火,米饭更好吃;独特微压阀,真正10度;上下双温控,加热更精确;晶钢内胆,美味又好用;超长24小时预约,省心省事又方便;功能真全面,厨房更轻松!”
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传统电饭锅没有微压系统,不能保__锅内温度100度,米饭糖化度不够,口感不q__;苏泊尔智能聪明火电饭煲独有微压系统,能保__锅内温度大于等于100度,米饭糖化度高,口感q__,饭味香甜。
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