Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
今天,一只白胖胖的小熊懒洋洋地躺在我家的盘子里,舒舒服服地晒太阳。噢,它躺在松软的沙滩上,不对!是美味的咖喱滩!
小熊笑眯眯,欢迎爸爸妈妈来品尝。哈,这是我用香喷喷的米饭做成的,你想知道它是怎么“出生”出来的吗?让我来告诉你吧。
首先,用黏米捏成一个圆滚滚的大饭球,做“头”。接着,用奶粉勺做模具,扣出四个圆圆的大脚丫。再扣一个脚丫切成两半,作为耳朵,怎么样?我有创意吧!
现在,就让小熊“躺”到盘子里吧!摆好姿势,开始装饰了:将海苔片剪成10个圆形和1个月牙形,放在饭团上做眼睛、嘴、小爪子。用胡萝卜做一个红红的、圆圆的大鼻头,瞧!小熊可爱地微笑啦!
在沙滩上暴晒,会晒伤的!我得为它做一把紫色的洋葱伞:先切一片圆圆的洋葱,插在小牙签的一端,牙签穿透洋葱的地方用小胡萝卜片做伞撑,防止洋葱片滑下来,最后用西红柿做一个伞帽,小伞就大功告成了!将它放在小熊的手里,就遮阴了。
“小熊”咖喱饭,主角是咖喱,可别忘了最重要的环节:制作“香肠咖喱”。方法是:
1、备好香肠、土豆、洋葱、胡萝卜,分别切成小丁。
2、油锅翻炒,大火烧开,中火煮烂。
3、放咖喱块,添水,转小火,搅拌,将咖喱溶解。
最后,将咖喱肉块带汤汁一起浇在小熊身上即可。
爸爸妈妈,早就闻到它的香味了!可是他们没舍得吃。于是,小熊打着小阳伞,伴着“寿司”,跑到姥姥姥爷家去当午餐啦!
很久以前,森林里住着一只狮子和一只猴子。森林里食物丰富,他们一向相安无事。
一天,狮子饿了,找不到食物,就想尝尝猴子肉的味道。于是,他打了一个电话给猴子说:“猴弟弟,我们好久没见面了,你来我家喝喝茶、聊聊天,好吗?”贪玩又贪吃的.猴子毫不犹豫地答应了。他蹦蹦跳跳地来到狮子家,敲了敲门说:“狮子大哥,我来了,快开门呀!”狮子一开门就把猴子压在门边。猴子惊奇地问:“狮子大哥,你干嘛呀?”狮子说:“我要吃你呀!”说完,狮子迫不及待地张开血盆大口,露出尖利的牙齿向猴子咬去。“等一下!”猴子说,“我又瘦又小不好吃,你吃我一个也吃不饱的。我知道有个地方动物多,还不如我带你去那里,让你吃个痛快。”狮子想了想,眼珠子滴溜溜地转了几圈,相信了小猴子的话,于是他就把猴子放开,让他在前面带路。小猴子一边走一边跟狮子说:“狮子大哥,那个地方的动物可多了,肉可肥了。”狮子听得口水直流。他们走到一棵大树底下,猴子叫狮子站到一片草丛里去,说:“狮子大哥,动物们马上就要来了,你先躲藏好。”狮子听了,大摇大摆地往草丛走去,只听“轰”的一声,掉进陷阱里去了。原来,猴子知道有猎人在那里设置了陷阱。
小猴子见了哈哈大笑,打出一个胜利的手势,对狮子说:“再见!亲爱的狮子大哥!”说完就大摇大摆地走了。
人生最美好的时刻,莫过于享受美食的一剎那,扑鼻而来的香气浸满了我的鼻,如火焰般的热气轻抚过我的脸颊,咬下食物的一瞬间,美好的滋味在我的味蕾跳动,有酸甜、有辛辣,丰富的口感至今仍萦绕在我的唇齿间,它就是章鱼烧,一道简单却令人惊艳的美食。
章鱼烧是道随处可见、唾手可得的美食,当你的双脚踏入夜市或美食街,几乎都可以看到他们的踪迹,每当我有机会去夜市走一遭,这一定是必点的口袋名单,因为章鱼烧对我来说,是人间第一大美味。因此当我踏进夜市,熟悉的柏油路踩在脚底,凹凸不平的地板彷彿是冒险的场景,爬山过海、翻山越岭,只是为了一道人人称奇的佳肴。随着夜市人潮的流动,自己只能不断地向前,路边的摊贩瞬间成了闪闪发亮的装饰品,此时此刻,我焦急了起来,深怕章鱼烧成了配角,就在我看不到的.角落悄悄地消失,幸好,在悲伤之余,不远处有个熟悉的店铺,湛蓝色的招牌上,白色清楚的字号大大的写着“日本章鱼烧”,兴奋的我迫不及待冲上前,欣喜地点了一盒章鱼烧,在老板翻来弄去的时刻,香味正紧紧地锁住我的鼻子,在烤盘上,章鱼烧”噗滋”的响着,不到一会儿时间,一盒章鱼烧就上桌了。
章鱼烧一盒有六颗,金黄色的外皮看不到任何焦黑的成分,一口咬下的瞬间,被包覆在内的热气瞬间升腾,嘴里满满的馅料,有Q弹的外皮,新鲜弹牙的章鱼块,香酥多汁的高丽菜,外皮上浇淋着香甜可口的美乃滋,及清爽不腻口的柴鱼片,浓度恰好的辣椒粉和起司粉携手,在味蕾不断的回荡着,混合在一起的香、酥、软、甜、浓及弹牙,在一颗小小的章鱼烧世界中全具备了,六种不同的口感组合成一首与众不同、独一无二的章鱼烧圆舞曲,总令人垂涎三尺,齿颊留香。
世界上还有许多令人惊艳的巷弄美食,即使只是一台小推车,也可以拥有响亮的名号及令人念念不忘的好滋味,重点只在于:这道菜很不同凡响,它们是属于自己的“人间好味道”。
美食DIY课程开始了,我们学习做包子,虽然我不爱吃,但这项技能挺有用的,能让我们的动手能力增强等。
我表哥说小升初面试的真题中有番茄炒鸡蛋怎么做?说不定我考试时有包子怎么做呢?好了,废话不多说,来看看包子怎么做吧。
第一步,准备好食材与工具,面粉五百克,糖二十克,酵母十克,泡打粉十克,清水或温水适量,盆一个,蒸格一个,香菇一百克,青菜三百克,盐二十克,菜板一个,擀面杖一根。
第二步,将青菜与香菇洗干净,烂菜叶扔掉,因为香菇蒂硬的像石头,所以扔掉,一定要洗干净。
第三步,将洗干净的菜与香菇切成小颗粒,不能太大,要小一点,大约半个小指甲盖儿那么大。
第四步,在青菜粒与香菇粒中放盐,这样能把他们的水分排出去。
如果不排,蒸好后的包子里就会全是水。
等一两分钟用手把青菜与香菇中的水分挤捏干,放在旁边备用。
第五步,把面粉倒在盆中,先把面粉做成像盆的样子,然后把酵母、糖都倒在中间,面粉上洒一圈泡打粉,加入适量清水,揉成像雪花、白棉布一样的样子,不要觉得粘手,多揉一会儿就好了。
第六步,继续加水揉面团,重复的一直揉,直到面团不干不湿,面光手光盆光,这时的'面团就像一只又大又肥的白鹅的身体,十分有光泽。
第七步,将面团搓成长条状,分成大小相等,十分均匀,大约40克的小剂子。
第八步,将小剂子擀成中间厚,四周薄的圆片,然后在中间放入做好的香菇青菜香菇馅料,一手拿着皮,一手捏出褶皱,最后封口,后面的以此类推。
第九步,每个包子大约隔两手指的距离,放在蒸锅里蒸熟。
第十步,大约10分钟后,大功告成。
可以吃了,我一口咬下去十分的美味,我也很开心,哈哈哈哈。
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