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Last winner holiday,I went to the Hongkong Disney Park。This is a fairy world,It has many famous characters。I travel in old American Town,It is very interesting。Ibought an ice cream to my sister,She like it。And then,I saw a beautiful princess,she is Snow White。I take a photoes to her。Last I saw GOOfy,he also has an famous character,because he is very interesting and lovely。
It is a funny day
I Like Disneyland
I get to know Disneyland a year ago,at the time,my mother took me to Hong Kong,I
was so happy,we went to Disneyland,I saw many lovely cartoon characters。I saw them
when I was watching TV,I felt so happy,I told my mother I wanted to come to here
again soon。I like Disneyland so much,I want to live in theDisneylandworld。
When we got there, it was lunch time. Baiyun Mountain looked very beautiful. Everywhere was clean and tidy. We could see green plants and colorful flowers here and there. Red lanterns were hanging on both sides of the road. But it was very crowded on that day. So after lunch, we decided to go up by acable car.
Baiyun Cableway is the first cable cars for sightseeing in our country. There are 80 cable cars, each can sit 6 people. The lower station is set up east of Yuntai Garden and the upper station at the Peak Park. The cars passed by such scenic spots as 'Pu Valley', ‘barbecue zone’, 'Nengren Temple' and so on. When gazing into the distance, the scenery of the City is right before our eyes.
In the afternoon we were at the Peak Park. We felt very relaxed and happy. I ate and drank and played bubble-blowing with my cousin. Baiyun Mountain is a good place to play too.
Going straight ahead, we came to Mount Davis. It is the highest peak of Baiyun Mountain. We climbed the summit of Mount Davis, overlooking the whole city.
In the evening, we walked down the mountain and saw the moon in the sky. We ate mooncakes, fruits and snacks in a restaurant.
My family and I were very happy because we had a special Mid-Autumn Day.
本文格式正确,意思表述完整,行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用,还使用了以‘which,’引导的非限定性定语从句,从而使文章层次分明,富于变化,不愧为考场佳作。
那天我起得特别早也特别兴奋,因为我和妈妈要去我梦寐以求的香港迪士尼乐园。
早就听说迪士尼乐园有很多好玩的项目了,一进入迪士尼乐园大门我们的`眼前就出现了一座梦幻城堡,那里有:驰车天地、小熊—维尼历险记、巴斯光年星际历险、飞越太空山、泰山树屋、森林河流之旅……,一个个精彩的项目让我们目不暇接。
最好玩的当然是森林河流之旅,这是一个水上游戏,我们坐在一个木船上,沿着一条河穿过一片森林,途中惊险而又刺激,大象喷水、火山爆发、“食人族”射毒镖……都是在你毫无防备之下突然出现的,船上的我不时发出阵阵尖叫声。
最恐怖的是飞越太空山,坐在一个小火车上在黑暗的太空中好似迷失了方向般到处乱窜,太惊险刺激了,妈妈都不敢玩。
最有趣是巴斯光年星际历险, 它是让你坐着一个小火车在宇宙中打枪,因为小火车在行驶中不停的摇动,目镖也在不停的晃动,在这种情况下要打中是很不容易的。玩了两次后我发现只有对着目标连续发射命中率就会提高,我最好的成绩是成为了太空技师,最棒的是太空战士。
夜晚,迪斯尼的上空放出了一朵朵的焰火。啊!美丽极了。怀着依依不舍的心情我们踏上了回家的路。迪士尼乐园给我带来了许多快乐,下次我还要去日本迪斯尼和美国迪斯尼。
I’m writing for more information about the day tour to London.
As a student at Oxford University, I’d like to know if you have any special price for students. As for the money you charge, does it cover the entrance fees for visiting the places listed? What about lunch? Is it included? Or do I need to bring along my own food?
How long will the tour last? Since I need to prepare my lessons for the next day, I’d like to know the time to return. Besides, is there any time for shopping? I really want to have a look at the big stores in London.
Yours,
Li Hua
尊敬的先生/女士,
我写的更多的信息,在伦敦的一日游。
作为牛津大学的一名学生,我想知道你是否对学生有特殊的价格。至于你所收取的钱,它是否包括了所列地方的.入场费?午饭怎么样?是否包括?还是我需要带上我自己的食物?
巡演将持续多久?既然我需要准备第二天的功课,我想知道的时间可以返回。再说,还有没有时间去购物?我真的很想看看伦敦的大商店。
你的,
李华
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