社会万象类作文（社会万象类作文素材） - 学习作文网

社会万象类作文【一】

在中厅我发现有许许多多的海洋生物，有海藻、珊瑚、海龟、贝壳、鲸鱼、鲨鱼等等，鲨鱼就有大白鲨、日本扁鲨、暗体真鲨等等，它们都生活在不同温度的还是中。再往前看是两架飞机模型，其中一架是气球的真好看，我看着看着，牛通社的两位老师来了。

两位老师叫小记者们来登记，于是我们都在老师那里去登记了，登记好后我们再看了一会。两位老师把我们叫在一起，问你们平时在学校玩些什么游戏？大家你一言我一语。然后，老师带我们做了两项游戏，在最后一项还没做完我们就进去比赛了。

我带着既高兴又好奇的.心情进入赛场，进入赛场后，我们坐在海绵坐垫上，坐成四排、每排五人，工作人员把我们每人前面放了一个粉底黑字的号码牌。然后，主持人走出来，首先向我们问好，接着宣布本次活动的主题：童心放飞中国梦。再就是活动的内容和游戏规则，内容是拼装飞机模型并且还要在模型上画上自己喜欢而又有创意的画。听到这里，我便慌了神。因为我从来没做过飞机模型。我正在发愁时，飞机模型材料已发下来，我赶紧把材料打开，刚打开听到主持人说比赛开始。

这时，我急得像热锅上的蚂蚁，拿起这也不是那也不是，整个材料都翻了个底朝天，突然，看见有一张步骤图，这时，我既高兴又紧张地把步骤图按在地上仔细地看了一遍又一遍。然后，按照步骤图一步一步的做起来，我的飞机模型也一点一点的成形。遗憾的是我的尾翼没装好，画也没画，比赛就结束了。飞机模型比赛的冠军是一个男同学。

最后，主持人宣布冠军的奖品是由航天公司颁发的迪拜的往返机票一张，其余的同学都由万象城和航天公司各发礼品一份。

今天，我的飞机模型虽然没有成没能拿到冠军，但是我还是很高兴。因为我了解了飞机的基本结构。我想我们从现在起，一定要好好学习，长大后为国家制造出世界最好的飞机，让我们的飞机飞得更快、更高、更远

社会万象类作文【二】

那天，阳光洒向大地，透过叶缝，洒下斑驳的影儿。微风徐徐吹来，令人心旷神怡。

约上上好朋友，柒，一起去游玩。一路上欢声笑语，来到了万象城。我们首先玩的是“太空漫步”。只听名字就很有趣，玩起来肯定会更令人心惊胆战吧！买上票，终于坐上了朝思暮想的“太空漫步”。“太空漫步”就是一条轨道上一个脚踏车，可以选择自动行驶，也可以选择人工驾驶。我们选择了自己脚踏驾驶。有趣的事情便从这里开始了：我们吃力的蹬着，可我们却力不从心，半天了也出不去一米，我决定还是调成自动，这一举动便被她阻止了。她说：“乐趣融为其中也！好好体会便是！”说吧，便继续吃力的蹬起来。听了她的话，我既有些吃惊，又有些灰心。弯弯曲曲的轨道，足足还有一大圈，我们现在走了好不到十分之一，却早已经满头大汗了。天理难容也！无奈的我看着依旧坚持的柒，摇了摇头。“胜利就在前方，一起加油吧！”不情愿的我只好蹬起来，不知是心理作用，还是真的`努力有了结果，我们竟然走了走了小半圈。我霎时激动了起来，吧放弃早早抛在了九霄云外。随着越来越有力的步伐和一颗积极向上的心，竟轻而易举得蹬到了终点。

坐完“太空漫步”我们又玩了惊险刺激的“丛林飞鼠”，令人毛骨悚然的“鬼屋”，又玩了有趣的“碰碰车”，还完了能俯视整个游乐园的“摩天轮”。

万象城果然名不虚传，伴着阳光的抚摸，回想着今天的经历——到了家。

社会万象类作文【三】

队伍整齐有序地前进着，一路上大家欢声笑语，期待着目的地——万象山公园。“万象山到了!”随着老师的声音，大家越发兴奋起来，你一言我一语地议论着，顿时队伍里一片沸腾。

首先，映入眼帘的是万象山脚下的那一块硕大的石门。石门上还刻着栩栩如生的图案，我们走进石门就听到几声清脆的'鸟叫，扑面而来的是阳光的洗礼。台阶两旁芬芳扑鼻的鲜花，同学们立刻被这一派美丽的景象所陶醉。

队伍继续前行着，满是绿树的浓荫石阶上长着深绿色的青苔。我们来到了革命烈士墓，一走到这里，仿佛眼前出现了革命烈士的身影，一股令人肃然起敬的感觉油然而生，几名严肃地站在石碑的两侧。我们缓慢地在一块块石碑前行进，严肃地望着这一个个革命先辈的名字，不禁心中升起一种敬畏感。

我们离开了革命烈士墓。突然，远处的歌声吸引了我们。寻着歌声，我们找到了歌声的主人——老爷爷老奶奶们。如果他们与现在的年轻人相比，可真是一点也不逊色。歌声悦耳动听，就好比一只只黄鹂鸟。等爷爷奶奶们唱完之后，迎接他们的是一阵又一阵雷鸣般的掌声。一位脸上还洋溢着笑容的指挥员爷爷还向我们挥了挥手，表现得和个小孩子似的……

今天我所看到的听到的，都会让我久久不能忘怀。

社会万象类作文【四】

【习作题目】

Students Grading of Their Teachers

1．学生给老师打分已很普遍；

2．人们对其持不同态度（肯定或否定的态度）；

3．你的看法。

【习作解读】

显然，此任务是写一篇议论文，主题为对学生给老师打分的现象进行议论，开放性较大。学生应根据实际情况，从多个方面阐述其原因并表达自己对这种现象的观点和态度。该话题更加贴近学生的实际生活，但有一定的语言难度，也有一定的思想深度。通过此文的写作，也从侧面提示了学生在注重写作基础训练的前提下，也应该注重培养积极思考、灵活运用、自由发挥等能力。

此次的写作任务出题相当巧妙，写作内容涉及的词汇和句型都属于新课程标准范围。题目在考查学生写作能力的同时，也在考查学生的分析判断能力及高度概括能力。富有想象力的学生写出的文章可能生动而富有灵性。此题目能引发学生对平日习以为常的行为进行反思，学会换位思考，这对中学生的性格和品德培养非常重要。

【习作展示】

Students Grading of Their Teachers

Nowadays, a lot of schools ask their students to contribute to grading their teachers. As a teacher, it is their responsibility to satisfy their students in all aspects. Meanwhile, it is admirable that school teachers prefer to expose themselves to their students.

If the system of grading of teachers by students is introduced, it will benefit students, teachers and the administration of the school for a number of reasons. For one thing, the system will give teachers and the administration of the school an insight into the minds of the students and show whether the teachers are successful in getting their lessons understood by the students; for another, it will also encourage the good teachers to continue their efforts and motivate themselves. What is more, it will expose those who are not doing enough and will lead them to correct their teaching methods as well as their attitude towards students. Thus the quality of teaching will certainly improve.

In a word, it is a promising concept and will bring surprisingly good results if applied with the right conditions.

【习作点评】

作者观点明确，赞成学生给老师打分。作为老师，就要做一个让学生满意的老师。这样，不仅对学生、学校有利，而且对老师本人也有利。这样，老师就会从另一个角度重新审视自己，看自己是否是一个成功的老师。如果得到学生的认可，这将是对自己的一次鼓励，为继续前行增添动力。如果学生的认可度不高，老师就应进行反思，调控教学方法和教学态度。这样，教学质量肯定会提高。作

者用简洁、明快的语言以及自己的经历列举了充分的论据，内容充实，贴近生活。For one thing, for another, what is more, in a word等过渡词的使用，是短文结构清晰，层次分明。最后，最值得一提的是，文中多次正确运用的高级词汇和复杂句式，给文章增添了不少文采。综上所述，这是一篇不可多得的佳作，值得向大家推荐。

二、写作模板

此模板适用于社会现象类议论文。参考模式如下：

Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental There are a couple of reasons behind this problem/phenomenon. For one ；Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people

Nowadays, there exists a common phenomenon—with the development of the Internet, more and more people tend to send electronic cards instead of paper ones to their friends and relatives when an important holiday comes.

There are a couple of reasons behind this phenomenon. For one thing, compared with the traditional cards, electronic cards are more lively and interesting. They can give not only pictures but also sound and animation. For another, there are many websites online which offer varieties of cards for you to choose from. What is more, with the popularity of the electronic cards, less paper is used in making paper cards, which does good to our environment.

Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that sending greetings by using electronic cards will be accepted by more and more people, not only the young ones.

三、写作指导

写作思路是先列出一个具体的社会问题或者现象，然后分析产生的原因和产生的影响，最后提出解决问题的办法，或者得出结论，或者提出个人看法，或者预测前景。

论点、论据、论证是议论文的三要素。论点是作者对所议论问题所持有的见解和主张，论据是用来证明论点的事实和道理的根据；论证是用论据来证明论点的方法和过程。一般来说，议论文每段都有主题句来确定论点。论证的方法很多，但最常用的是因果分析法。即：分析事实与论点的因果关系，指出取得结果的原因是所要证明的论点，从而达到论证的目的。

在近几年的高考中，议论文的比重占得越来越多，议论文的.出题形式可以多种多样，有看图写作、图表、表格、书信等各种类型，但文体实际是议论文，而有时是夹叙的议论文。议论文的写作要点是：

1. 观点鲜明，文章一定有一个明确的中心论点。

2. 层次分明，一个中心论点通常有几个分论点支持，不同层次之间要分明，过渡清晰自然。

3. 最后一段一般要总结全文，得出一个符合逻辑的结论，突出中心思想。

4. 一般采用一般现在时。

5. 语言简洁有力，一般不采用口语。

四、巩固练习

1.【练习题目】

2010年上海世界博览会期间，上万的青年志愿者参加志愿工作，请你谈谈对此现象的看法。

【参考范文】

During the period of holding the 2010 World Expo in Shanghai, tens of thousands of young citizens are participating in volunteer work, hoping to devote themselves to the grand occasion. As far as I am concerned, everyone ought to enter for it. Here are the reasons I want to mention.

It can be argued that the advantages of doing unpaid volunteer work are enormous, because volunteer work is actually a two-way street. First of all, volunteer work should always benefit people who need help. Those who need help will feel happier due to our immediate help. On the other hand, as far as the young people ourselves are concerned, we have more opportunities to develop the sense of responsibility, independence as well as interpersonal skills in the process of helping others.

Through this kind of work, we become confident and mature. In addition, we can make many friends and increase our chances of getting the jobs of our dreams. Furthermore, volunteer work plays an active role in building up a harmonious society.

In a word, it is of great value for the young adults to offer volunteer work. The youth volunteers do make a difference by the voluntary work! Why not join them and do something for our country?

2.【练习题目】

某些中学生为了显示自己成熟或表明自己醋而吸烟。请写一篇120词左右的短文，列举吸烟的危害，并提出建议。

【参考范文】

I am sorry to know that more and more middle school students begin to smoke. I think it is wrong to believe that smoking is cool and even think that smoking makes you appear to be mature. In fact, smoking is not cool but very dangerous.

First, smoking can do much damage to health. Scientific researches show that smoking can lead to heart diseases, cancers and other problems. It is reported that about 5 million people die of diseases related to smoking each year all over the world.

Second, it is a waste of money to smoke cigarettes. Smoking can cost a great deal of money. Once you are addicted to it, it is difficult to give it up.

What’s more, smoking can cause fires easily, which may do great damage to your life and your surroundings.

So give up smoking at once! Only in this way can you keep healthy forever.

3. 【练习题目】近年来，越来越多的中学生出国学习，出现了所谓的中学生“出国热”。请根据以下提供的信息，谈谈自己的看法。

1）良好的语言环境，更利于语言学习。

2）拓宽视野，学习国外先进的科学技术。

3）传播各民族间的不同文化。

参考词汇：媒介，中间人：mediator

【参考范文】

In recent years, studying abroad has been popular. Tens of thousands of Chinese middle school students have gone to foreign countries to study．Many people are trying their best to apply to go abroad.

There are a number of reasons for attending schools abroad．First, students who are studying abroad can act as mediators between people of different cultures. They can communicate with each other directly and learn about different cultures. Second, they can learn much more advanced knowledge of science and technology from foreign countries and experience different education methods．Third, they live in foreign countries and take classes given by foreign teachers. As a result, they can learn foreign languages much more quickly.

Therefore, it is advisable to attend schools abroad.

4.【练习题目】随着经济和社会的发展，道路上的私人小汽车越来越多。请根据自己的观察和理解，谈谈自己的观点。

【参考范文】

With the fantastic development both in economy and in society in China, the number of people who own private cars is on the rise. Some people have bought cars of their own, and others are planning to buy cars. But I strongly object to the increase in developing private cars.

I hold that automobiles will give rise to a series of problems. In the first place, as more and more cars are produced and run on the road, a large volume of poisonous gas will be given off, polluting the atmosphere and causing actual harm to the health of people. Next, private cars contribute to traffic jams so greatly that the advantages gained in comfort and freedom are often cancelled out by the frustration caused by traffic jams. The last problem is the increasing number of car accidents that have killed and will kill a lot of people in a friction of a second.

In a word, although automobiles have been playing a vital part in the daily activities of our society, they also bring us numerous troubles such as more serious environmental pollution, more traffic accidents and more energy consumption. They drink up huge amounts of fuel and throw out huge amounts of pollutants. Jams waste our precious time. Therefore, I am against developing private cars.