初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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二年级的上学期,老师把钟安钰调到我旁边坐,我满不在乎,便立刻在桌子中间画了一条分界线。有一次,我们正在上美术课,我画完了画,便写起作业来,突然,她用力挤我一下,作业本上就出现了一条直直的、长长的、粗粗的直线。我大声地问她:“为什么挤我?”“谁叫你超过分界线!”她毫不示弱地反驳我。我一看,果然超过了一大截,于是,我立刻把手缩回去。从此,我对这条分界线十分警惕。
还有一次,我们班正在进行数学考试,我突然碰到一道连线题,我看了一眼文具盒,铅笔、橡皮、卷笔刀放的`好好的,唯独没有尺子,我想:是向同学借,还是勉强划线呢?正在我左右为难的时候,她说:“尺子借给你用吧!”于是,我毫不犹豫地接过尺子,迅速完成了连线题。试卷发下来,鲜红的98.5。多亏我的同桌钟安钰。
有一天,她在回家的路上发现,前面那位叔叔的米袋漏米了,于是,她赶紧告诉他:“你的米袋漏米了!”叔叔一回头,才发现米袋破了一个大洞,现在还在漏米呢。她助人为乐的精神真值得我们学习!她不愧是我的同桌,我也要做个像她一样的好同学。
转眼间,我已经是一名三年级的小学生了,换了新班级,换了新同学,当然也换了新同桌。我的同桌长得非常帅气,个子不高也不低。头发乌黑发亮,眉毛细细的',弯弯的,长着一双水汪汪的大眼睛。
他是一个乐于助人的人,星期二,是美术课。老师讲完课,让同学们自己画。我勾完边,在书包里找彩笔,我翻来覆去,怎么也找不到彩笔。我的同桌看到了,悄悄的把彩笔放在了我的面前,说道:“我们共用一盒彩笔吧!”我说: “谢谢你!”他说:“不用谢!老师不是说过要乐于助人吗!”我听了同桌的话,心里暖暖的。
我的同桌不仅仅是乐于助人,而且还是讲卫生的人。
有一次,我吃完东西,把垃圾随手扔在地上,我的同桌急忙拦住我:“要保护环境,不能乱扔垃圾。”我听了赶紧把垃圾拣起来,扔进垃圾桶里。
我的同桌就是一个乐于助人、讲卫生的的人,也是我学习的榜样。你喜欢我的同桌吗?
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