Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
How to prevent the H7N9?
As is well known,the A flu is spreading throught our country. However, if we negnect it, the deadly H7N9 may cause more infectors,or even more deaths. So what is the most important is that we should take some effective measures to prevent it.They can be listed as follows.
Firstly,it is necessary for you to realize the Avian flu can be prevented if you develop good living habits. For example,you shouldn’t forget to wash your hands before meals.Besides,don’t spit everywhere and try to cover your mouth or nose with paper or hankerchiefs when you have to cough or sneeze.What’s more, remember to wear the mouth-cover if you have to go to the public places, such as the crowded cinemas,supermarkets, buses,where the A flu may spread easily.
Secondly,of course, taking exercise more often and taking good sleep to build your body are wise choices for you to reduce the risk of being infected.
Last but not the least, if you are unlucky to be infected with the slight flu cold, try to stay at home,and take some medicine. Do pay attention to your daily body temperature. If you have a high fever, go to the hospital without delay for further treatment. Make sure you are not expected to come back to school before the cold or flu is cured.
Only by doing like this can you prevent or defeat the A flu in the end.
今天,看了邹越的演讲。这是我观看许多次演讲当中最精彩的一次,也是最震撼的一次,更是让我彻底流泪的一次。对我触动、影响、感染很深。不是因为演讲的口才有多好,也不是因为多么具有感染力,而是因为一种真实,一种情感,一种社会责任,一种人格魅力,一种爱的号召力。
“让生命充满爱!——爱祖国,爱老师,爱父母,爱自己。”多么简单而有影响力的话题,常在人群中谈起,也常在生活中见到,更引起社会的关注和倡导。因此,也引起了我和许多人的深思和共鸣。
当我观看到邹越一边演讲,一边流泪的时候,我感觉到这是一次真实而发自己内心地演讲;当我观看到听演讲的那些人被感动得热泪盈眶的时候,引起我的深思和共鸣。
邹越的这次演讲,之所以能引起许多人的深思和共鸣,说明许多人心灵深处是纯净的,善良的,灵魂深处也在追求着大善大爱。
在每个人的生命中,每个人的人生都是不一样的,因而,人生的体验也是不一样的。但在每个人的人生道路中,生存性质却是相同的,每个人都在为生存而疲于奔波。这样,往往容易忽略许多生命中重要的细节,以及忽视了生命中的爱、情感以及现在。
爱祖国,爱老师,爱父母,爱自己。多么简单的话语,却是要用心、用行动来完成的。
怎样用心爱祖国,爱老师,爱父母,爱自己?怎样付诸行动,才能做到真正地爱祖国,爱老师,爱父母,爱自己?这些都值得我们深思。
爱祖国。邹越讲了世界冠军的例子。的确那些世界冠军在夺金的最后关键时刻都是想到了自己的祖国;还有奥运会上一个来自己小国家的一名运动员,为自己的祖国而参赛,跌倒了爬起来,心中念着自己的祖国,这种精神值得我们学习。我们每个人都知道,我们的国家经历许多艰难困苦后,如一条巨龙崛起在世界民族之林,我们都为此感到自豪和骄傲,我们更要热爱自己的祖国。热爱祖国并不一定非要做轰轰烈烈的大事,只要我们从点滴小事做起,尊守公民法则,尊守社会公约,讲文明,爱护公物,爱护花草树木,多一些爱心,提高个人素质,也是为祖国建设添砖加瓦。
爱老师。邹越讲了油田实验高中一个普通的人民教师,在教育岗位默默无闻的工作了几十年,为一些贫困学生捐赠钱物的感人事迹。是呀,老师是每个人生命中都会遇到的。生命中的恩师,也如父母一样,会付出父母一样的慈爱。因而一定要用真心去爱自己的老师,感恩老师。
爱父母。不是一个“爱”字就能表达的。邹越讲了许多简单的事情。当他讲到,“父母在儿女小的时候,每天为儿女洗手、洗脚,可是我们每一个爱父母的人,却做不到每天为父母洗手、洗脚”时,我流泪了;特别是邹越讲到他为母亲洗脚的事情,母亲总是笑着让他离开,可当他真正为母亲洗脚的时候,母亲却泪流满面……邹越又问到:“我们每个人每天认真仔细地观察父母的脸了吗?我们每个人每天注意父母的衣着了吗?……”我再次被感动了,不但受到了启迪,还受到了教育和反思。是呀,我给予父母多少?我帮助父母多少?父母一生忙碌,每天起早贪黑,那是为了儿女们生活得更好、更幸福。可我们做儿女的每天起早贪黑,却是为了自己的儿女生活得更好、更幸福,我们从没有真正地考虑过父母,忽略了父母的感受,而父母总是默默地奉献,默默地支持。我们每个人都明白父母的恩情如高山大海,也懂得永远报答不了父母的恩情。可我们真正用心爱父母了吗?仔细回想一下,在和父母共同生活的每一个瞬间,有多少数不清的嘘寒问暖,有多少数不清的关怀,有多少数不清的洗涮……父母从不图回报,也从不责怪儿女,总是用慈爱、奉献和付出照顾、关怀、温暖子女,直到父母头发花白,直到父母步履蹒跚,直到父母弯腰驼背……是呀,父母给了我们做儿女的无尽的等待,等待儿女的温情,等待儿女的回赠。我们做儿女的一定不要留给父母更多的等待,应当尽早让父母享受到儿女的爱,给父母多一些温暖,多一些陪伴,多一些交流,每天早起一点,每天少睡一点,多给父母洗洗手、洗洗脚、洗洗衣、做做饭。用真心的爱回报父母的爱。千万别忽略了“现在”。
只有爱别人才能做到爱自己。
总认为自己爱身边的每一个人,也能够帮助身边的每一个人,毕竟能力有限,做到的也只是微乎其微。我思考并总结自己走过的人生路,总想活出自己的个性,活得有意义,活出有价值的人生,同时也希望自己能成为对国家、对社会有用的人……可三十多年过去了,学习了很多专业知识,从事了很多种工作,虽然积累了很多社会,但结果却是一事无成,也感觉到书到用时方恨少……在遗憾、叹息、艰辛中追问自己,是否达到了理想的人生?茫然的我,回答自己,离理想的目标远之又远之。所以觉得自己什么事情也没做好,也就没有做到真正爱自己。但一定要从现在开始更积极、更努力。
早在父亲的年代,经常有政治学习。今天观看邹越的演讲,相当于上了一堂生动的政治课。
我想,只有爱自己,才会爱别人;只有爱老师、爱父母,才会爱祖国。相信一个真正让生命充满爱的人,一定会活出精彩而与众不同的人生。
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