Directions:For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic The Day My Classmate Fell Ill.
1、简单描述一下这位同学生病的.情况;
2、同学、老师和我是如何帮助他的;
3、人和人之间的这种相互关爱给我的感受是....
[DIY写作模板:架构阶段]
结尾句:Ishe a suspedted SARS patient? Who can tell ? Butwedid't retreat.
扩展句:1、Whenthe savage SARS was spreading,people showedfearless spirit regardless of dangers to their own health.
2、This kind of care between persons is the very kind giving, unselfish and priceless devotion or sacrifice.
3、And it is just because of this care that we can have warm families, a happy life and a beautiful world.
1. 教室里传出一阵阵欢笑声。(改成夸张句 _________________________________________________________________________ 。
2. 薄雾笼罩着大山。(改为拟人句 _________________________________________________________________________ 。
3. 游人不解春何在?只捡儿童多处行。(用上恰当的关联词连成一句话 _________________________________________________________________________ 。
4. 友谊是一壶茶,细品慢咽有滋味;友谊是一杯水,君子之交淡如水。(请根据你对友谊的理解,仿写一句
_______________________________________________________。
5. 缩句:①我目不转睛地望着太阳从东方升起的地方。 ___________________________
②我们爬上半山的五松亭,看见在那恣态奇特的古松下整理挑儿的正是那个挑山工。_________________________________________________________________________。
6. 把两句话用关联词语合为一句话。
我们是为人民服务的。 ? 我们有缺点不怕别人批评指出。
______________________________________________________________________。
7. 改为转述句:小青石得意地想:“我就要到都市里去了。我将成为发簪和纽扣呢?” _______________________________________________________________________。
8. 反问句改为陈述句:这比山高比海还深的情谊,我们怎么会忘记?
________________________________________________________________________。
9. 将“把”字句改为“被”字句:
大水的到来,把大青石冲到深深的大海里去了。
_______________________________________________________________________。
10. 英、法联军把能拿走的东西全部运走了。
改成“被”字句:_________________________________________________________________ ?。
11. 圆明园是当时世界上最大的博物馆、艺术馆,因为她不但建筑宏伟,还收藏着最珍贵的历史文物。改成“因在前果在后”的.因果关系句:
_________________________________________________________________________。
12. 这比山还高比海还深的情谊,我们怎么能忘怀?
改成不用问号的句子:_____________________________________________________________。
13. 鸬鹚站在船舷上。
扩句:(至少扩两处)_______________________________________________________________。
14. 缩写: 深蓝的天空中挂着一轮金黄的圆月。
_________________________________________________________________________。
15. 扩写:沙地上种着西瓜。
_________________________________________________________________________。
16. 将句子换种说法。
在阳光下,大片青松的边沿闪动着白桦的银裙,不是像海边的浪花吗?
_________________________________________________________________________。
17. 成拟人句:小河的水哗哗地流向远方。______________________________________________。
18. 成夸张句:桂花开了,很远就能闻到香味。_______________________________________。
结尾句:Is _______? Who can tell ? But ______.
扩展句:1、When ____ , people showed _____ spirit regardless of ____.
2、This kind of care between persons is the very kind giving, unselfish and priceless devotion or sacrifice.
3、And it is just because of this care that we can have warm families, a happy life and a beautiful world.
[DIY写作模板:填充阶段]
主题句:Without hesitation, _____. It wasn't long before _____.
扩展句:1、One ______.
2、Another _______.
3、Our teacher _______.
主题句:Without hesitation, I dialed "120". It wasn't long before an ambulance arrived.
扩展句:1、One roommate brought a blanket for him.
2、Another supported him in the ambulance.
3、Our teacher insisted on giving him some money.
交代清楚故事涉及的人物、时间、地点:
主题句
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