初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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除夕晚上,我匆匆吃完饺子,拿着十几只礼花和一包百响电光炮对姐姐说:“走,咱们放花炮去。”来到屋外,只见天空五彩缤纷,一颗颗五颜六色的烟花撒满天空,时而如天女散花,时而如信号飞射,忽明忽暗;把夜幕点缀成鲜花的世界。这真是“火树银花不夜天,烟花飞舞迎新年”呀!
我和姐姐找了个安全的地方,准备放花炮。我给了姐一个“金猴飞天”,姐姐撕开包装纸,用香去点燃捻子。瞪大眼睛,急忙往后退了两步,等着看奇妙的景色。“味”的一声,花炮向四周猛地喷出金光闪闪的花,先形成一个黄色圈,又从黄色圈中冲出一个“小猴子”。这个“小猴子”蹿上了半天空,身后只留下一条白光带。看到了这景色,我不禁想起孙悟空大闹天空的情景。——啊,我可大饱眼福了。“再放一个‘铁扇公主’吧!”姐姐兴奋地对我说。我顾不上回答,一边点头一边找火点“铁扇公主”的捻子。我那捻子刚一燃着,一个明晃晃的盒子就自动张开了,先是吐出一股“火舌”,随后出现了一个女子。啊,那便是铁扇公主了!只见她手持一把美丽的大扇子,转着身子,活灵活现,栩栩如生。我指着这美丽的火花,情不自禁地拍手叫着:“真美呀!”
后来,我和姐姐又放了许多烟花,有空中笛轮,有百花迎春……个个都绚丽多彩,让我们看得眼花缭乱,目不暇接。“再有一分钟就十二点了!快挂好鞭炮!”姐姐催我了。我高兴得跳起来,忙去挂好了那串串鞭炮。还用颤抖的嗓音数着:“五十八秒,五十九秒,快点!”好,电光炮响起来了,震耳欲聋的炮声迎来了新的一年!千家万家的烟花交错升起,像夜明珠一样,把天空照得如同白昼。整个城市都沸腾起来了,它预示着来年的繁荣富强、幸福无疆!
秋天的天,高远而纯净;秋天的风,清新而凉爽;秋天的雨;绵密而灵逸;秋天的色彩,缤纷而绚丽;秋天的气氛,成熟而迷人不得不让人陶醉在秋的仙境之中。
秋天的来临让小草换上了黄色的衣裳,这时的小草虽然已不就是春天的那个嫩娃娃了,也不就是夏天那个穿着绿色衣服的小伙子了,但小草依然挺立着,风儿轻轻一吹,它们便把身体扭向一边,以优美的舞姿博得人们的赞赏。
秋天,树叶呈现出绚丽的色彩。枫叶好像一个个红色的小手掌,在风中轻轻摆动,仿佛在挥手与游人作别。梧桐树叶恍如一顶顶金色的皇冠,在枝头招摇。秋天就是树林,地上落满了树叶,有红的;黄的;绿的五彩缤纷,美丽极了。一阵风吹来,树叶纷纷落在地上,给大地披上了厚厚的“棉衣”。脚踩在枯叶上,发出吱吱的响声。奏响了深秋的“交响乐”。
红艳艳的`大苹果,撩开绿叶往外瞧,金灿灿的柿子像正月十五的灯笼压弯了枝头;小红灯似的枣子在枝头上一闪一闪的;玛瑙般的葡萄一串串地挂在葡萄架上荡秋千;有的荔枝太胖了,把衣服撑破了,露出白白的肚皮;玉米特意换了一件金色的新衣,咧开了嘴笑了,露出满口金黄的牙齿;大豆也许太兴奋了,有的竟然笑破了肚皮;西红柿为了让自我更漂亮,便把口红涂在了脸上稻田里一片片黄澄澄的稻谷随着秋风泛起了金波。绿油油的菜地里,肥嫩的菜叶上闪耀着晶莹的露珠。秋风过处,五谷飘香。那一片片庄稼,远看,好似翻滚着千层波浪;近看,稻谷笑弯了腰,高粱涨红了脸,玉米乐开了怀。
你难道不喜欢五彩缤纷的秋天吗?
有一个星期日,当我从课外培训学校走向车站,准备乘车回家时,突然想到今天没带钱包,我的心顿时紧了起来。脑子里一下子冒出了许多问题:今天怎么回家?难道要走回去?我立刻把浑身上下每一个口袋和书包的任何一个角落都翻了个遍。还好,还找到了九角钱。可是只有九角钱,还差一角钱,还是不够。我又把书包找了一遍,希望能找到遗留下的一角钱,可是却没有。这是我的脑子里闪出了一个主意,反正我坐的也是无人售票的投币式公共汽车,我塞进去九个一角钱,司机也不一定会注意到,说不定还能蒙混过关。好,就这么办!
等了几分钟,一辆车来了。有许多人上了车,我被夹在他们中间。前面的人都一个个把钱塞了投币口,快轮到我了,我的心就像揣着一个小兔子似的,“咚咚咚”地跳个不停。当我刚要往投币口塞钱的时候,排在我后面的那位叔叔对我说:“同学,我这里只有一张两元钱,没有一元零钱,你把你的钱给我,我帮你把钱投进去,可以吗?”
我的脸上感觉热热的。我不敢当着那么多人的\'面儿,告诉他我这里只有九角钱。面对司机以及乘客的一声声催促,我尽管心里有些害怕,但还是不由自主地把钱给了他。那位叔叔把钱塞进去后,就开始数我给他的九角钱,这时我浑身上下都在冒汗,脑子里也在想怎样回答他的质问。
当他数完九个一角钱的时候,刚才想到的那一大串为自己辩解的话,一下子都说不出来了。脸上火辣辣的。而那位叔叔只是浅浅地笑了一下,什么都没有说,然后走到车后面坐了下来。这一切来得那么突然,又平息地如此迅速。
这个叔叔用自己的微笑,使一个女孩子的自尊心不受伤害。也许在别人看来,这是微不足道的,但是,在我心中已为他树起一个高大的形象。这件事虽然不会令我热泪盈眶,但是这一生,我都会记忆犹新的。
昨天是除夕,这是我们中国年里的最后一天。对这一天,每个中国人都非常重视,所有人都争取回家和家人团聚,一起吃团圆饭、一起共叙亲情、一起感慨时光的流逝、一起规划美好的未来……
我们家也不例外。这一天,远在中山工作的伯父伯母和妹妹都赶回来了。餐桌上,大家边吃边谈心,说到今年取得的成绩时大家心情愉悦;说到爷爷奶奶的年纪和身体时大家深感担忧;说到明年的计划时大家雄心勃勃……我的心情也跟着起伏不定,既为自己的长大高兴,又为时间的飞速流逝感到恐惧。吃过饭后,妈妈提议说:“为了迎接美好的新年,我们今晚去逛花市吧!”大家都很赞成。于是我们立刻出门向设于市政广场的迎春花市走去。
虽然夜幕早已降临,但整个城市到处彩灯闪烁,再加上天空中绚丽的烟花此起彼伏,把这个世界点缀得如梦如幻,让我们的心情立刻畅快起来。
花市到了,虽然大家对热闹的花市早有心理准备,可是眼前热闹程度还是出乎我们的意外:广场上到处人山人海,找条缝儿都难。好不容易顺着人流挤了进去。在密集的人群里,真是寸步难行呀,这样一点一点地挪,半个小时后,我们终于挤进了花店。虽然天气寒冷,可花店里一派春天的景像,各种花卉生机勃勃。有金黄的菊花、白里透红的百合、树干像辫子似的发财树……“看,这盆玫瑰多漂亮。”妈妈挤到一盆玫瑰跟前,一边看一边闻陶醉地说。爸爸却走到一盆大盘景边,边点头边说:“这一棵榆树树干粗壮,造型奇特,很有观赏价值。”我呢?则走到一棵猪笼草前,好奇地摸起那一个个奇特的小猪笼,研究起它的捕蚊原理来。
就这样一路赏花,一路看烟花。我们度过了一个快乐的晚上。
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