Dear English teacher,
I went on a trip to Hainan today with my family .We went there by plane. After we got off the plane, we went to the beach to see the beautiful sand and swim there. There were other people there too. Some people were surfing and some people were diving in the deeper part of the sea. Afterwards we had lunch at a seafood restaurant near the beach. We ate seafood like shrimps and craps, and drank some abalone soup.We all didn't want to go home because the scenery was so beautiful, and there were so many other exciting things to try,but sadly it was time for us to go. It was definitely an exciting trip.If I have a chance to go there again, i will be more than happy to visit the place again.
Best wishes for you!
yours,
确凿就是论据要准确真实令人信服。不论是叙述事实,还是引用名人,都要真实可靠,不能有半点出入。只有事实论据或理论论据具有较高的真实可信程度,才能以无可辩驳的力量说服人。如2010年高考浙江一考生作文《角色转换之间》,为论证“对于类似新潮的‘文化’,我们要坚决说不!”这一观点,选取了“慕容天天,一个以行为艺术家自居的女孩,曾一度裸着身体在铁笼内宣告人体之美。而她竟然说服了自己的母亲,与之共同拍摄那些所谓艺术的照片。在角色转换之后,她所传授的是什么文化?不是扯下了一块遮羞布,就能成为一种文化”。2010年高考北京一考生作文《仰望星空与脚踏实地》,为论证“脚踏实地这种面向土地的姿态,无疑更加深刻”这一观点,选用了“托尔斯泰的晚年就在脚踏实地的劳作中度过。托尔斯泰曾送给他的女婿一双亲手制作的皮靴,当时托尔斯泰文集共出版了十二卷,他的女婿戏称那双靴子为第十三卷,而托尔斯泰说那是他最喜欢的一卷,没有什么比他此时更有尊严了”,这些论据确凿可信,令人折服。
How bright the June sun is, and the bright sunshine brings us to the same heart. It's like this: Dad took a camera from school and took pictures for us these days. Dad organized us to play together today. In the afternoon, we rode on motorcycles and walked on the same road.
On the way, I was in a good mood when I suddenly saw a blue sea, the sea breeze blowing my body, comfortable, the sea breeze seemed to blow into my heart, blowing out all the unhappiness in my heart.
Soon we came to Shiyuan. We just walked into the poetry garden. Before I took the two step, I came to the gate. I thought, "Oh! How nice it is to take a picture here, so I hastened to shout, "Dad, please come and take Zhang Xiang to me." Dad hurriedly came over and took a picture of me with a click. Then we went on, when I found one of the rocks, just one that could make me do something, and when I was sitting, my father came over to give me a picture. We ran to the place where there was water and came to the side of the sea. I thought, why not take a picture with the sea? I put my posture ready for a picture. Dad came over again and gave me a picture.
At this time we came to the place where there was a pavilion, and everyone was ready to see this good place. You see your sister's posture so beautiful, and the brother also put a posture in the mother's arms. I started to prepare, when I suddenly saw a stone made goose. What I want to ride on it, how impressive and impressive. I got on the goose on top of it. Dad came to take a picture of me. My sister came to take a picture of the little fish next to him.
Then we came to the mosque, because we didn't have enough time, so we hurriedly made several photos.
When Dad took us to a place, there were two ships, and I wanted to experience the experience of the ship as a ship, but the steamer was not there. So we don't have a steamer.
I am very happy today.
September 25
Dear Li Hua,
Thank you for your letter dated September 16.It wasn't until yesterday that I got it,as I had been out on business for a week.
In your letter,you told me that you preferred your job to the city of Shanghai.In my opinion,Shanghai is an exciting and a beautiful place.Try to enjoy yourself in your spare time besides your devotion to work.
I'm sorry to say that I won't go to Shanghai because our school will hold an open-air party.I have to stay for the performances on the holiday.By the way,would you please come and join us in the party Hangzhou is so beautiful in autumn that I'm sure you will like it.
Yours
Zhang Hong
Today, as people live a better life, they chase for more enjoyment.
We can see from the news that when the holiday comes, there are so many people gather in the scenery site. People like to travel today, they can take a plane, take the bus or even take a bike. On my opinion, the best way to travel is by train.
First, it is very cheap. Compare with other ways, such as plane and bus, train is less expensive, people can save a lot of money.
Besides, taking the train is much safer.
People don’t have to worry about crush, which is more happen in the plane or bus. Second, we can enjoy the scenery in the train.
Though the train is very slow, we can have a good sight of the beautiful scenery, when we go to Tibet, we can see different colors and different mountains during the trip. Taking the train is the best way to travel.
今天,随着人们过上更好的生活,人们追求的娱乐。我们可以从新闻上看到当节假日来临的时候,很多人聚集在景点。现在,人们喜欢旅游,他们可以坐飞机,坐巴士甚至骑单车。在我看来,最好的旅游方式是坐火车。第一,这很便宜。和其他方式,如飞机和巴士,坐火车便宜很多,人们可以省下很多钱。而且,做坐火车也更加安全。人们不用担心坠毁,这地发生在飞机和巴士上。第二,我们可以在火车上欣赏风景。虽然火车很慢,我们可以好好看看美丽的风景,当我们去西藏的时候,可以在旅途中看到不同的颜色和不同的大山。坐火车是最好的旅游方式。
典型就是所选论据具有代表性,包容量大,能以一当十,具有很强的说服力。通常情况下,考生可以扣住“古今中外”四个字来选择。在时间上,涉及古代、近代和现代;在空间地域上,力求广泛全面。同时,事例中人物的身份、职业,人物的性别、年龄等都能作为选择的标准,尽量使其涵盖面广一些。还可以从正反两个不同的角度选择事例。如2010年高考北京考生的作文《仰望星空与脚踏实地》中的“仰望星空不是妄自尊大。希特勒妄图称霸全球,以失败告终;拿破仑怀揣征服欧洲的野心,最终倒在了滑铁卢战役中;日本企图三个月消灭中国,却也在投降书上签了字。仰望星空不应是夜郎自大,而是以脚踏实地为保证的。周总理能够在黑暗的旧中国拥有‘为中华之崛起而读书’的决心,正是因为他有脚踏实地从事革命事业的毅力,有必胜的信心和打‘持久战’的恒心。”所选论据极具典型性。再如2010年高考甘肃一考生的作文《重拾遗落的厚重》为论证“失去了厚重的文化支撑,一个民族很难立足于世界”,选取了四大文明古国中除中国外其他三国的没落与衰亡的例子与美国只有两百多年的建国历史却同样成为全球唯一的超级大国得益于那民主自由的先进文化的例子作为论据,正反对比,极具典型性。
The Best Way of Traveling最好的旅游方式
People travel by plane, by train, by ship, by bus. For me, the best way of traveling on a summer vacation is to go on foot.人们去旅游有的乘飞机、有的坐火车、坐船、乘公共汽车。对我来说在暑假,最好的方式是徒步旅行。
My preference depends on the purpose of the travel. On a summer vacation I travel to refresh myself and to see the countryside. When I use my feet and walk on a grass covered path along a river or among the hills I feel detached from the noise of the city and closer to the nature. And when I travel on foot I get more freedom. I can plan my own schedule. I can choose my own route. I can stop where I like. And I can see things and people that I might miss if I travel on a train or on a bus.我的偏好取决于旅行的目的.。在暑假我旅游是为了消除疲劳并欣赏乡村美景。当我沿着河流或在群山之间走在一条青草覆盖的路上时,我觉得我远离了城市的喧嚣、亲近了自然。徒步旅行,使我很自由。我可以自己安排行程。可以选择我自己的路线。我可以把车子停在我喜欢的地方。而且我可以遇到那些坐火车或公共汽车会错过的人和事。
When faster and more convenient ways for travel are becoming available, I still favor using my own feet. I get much pleasure from it. People travel by plane, by train, by ship, by bus. To me, the best way of traveling on a summer vacation is to go on foot.当更迅速、更方便的方式使旅游变得更便捷,我仍然热衷于徒步旅行。我从中得到许多乐趣。人们去旅游有的乘飞机、有的坐火车、坐船、乘公共汽车。对我来说在暑假,最好的方式是徒步旅行。
【words】
1、preference v.偏爱;倾向;优先权
e.g. I don't know your preferences, so please help yourself.
2、refresh v.使……恢复;使……清新;消除……的疲劳
e.g. I refresh myself with a cup of coffee.
3、detach v.分离;派遣 ;分开
e.g. A number of soldiers were detached to guard the building .
4、available adj. 有效的;可得的;可利用的;空闲的
e.g. The only time available is Friday.
5、convenient adj. 方便的
e.g. It is quite convenient for customers.
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