写文章时,边写边问自己有关人和事“怎么样了”,抓住引起人物和事件变化的前因后果,把故事的来龙去脉一步步追问清楚。俄国作家陀思妥夫斯基曾举出这样一个例子:“有个小银元落在地上”,他认为这话不够具体,应改为:“有个小银元,从桌上滚了下来,在地上叮叮当当地跳着。 ”为何要这样改呢?因为它具体形象地回答了:从哪里落的?怎样落的`?落地后的响声、动态怎样?同理,如果我们写“夕阳西下”,这样来追问:夕阳依着什么落下去的?怎样落的?给大地带来了什么变化?就可以写成:“红彤彤的太阳,紧贴着崇山峻岭,一步三回头,慢慢下坠,万道余晖撒满大地。爷爷的白胡子变成金胡子了,房子的百墙变成红的了,柳树的枝条变成黄的了。”“夕阳西下”这一情景就更具体,更形象,更有色彩和气势了。写一次活动,也可以边写边问:活动地点在哪里?天气、环境怎样?活动的内容是什么?同学们干得怎样?谁表现得最好?为什么最好,到底是怎样***?***结果如何?这样一步步追问,就能具体地追出人物肖像、动作、语言、心理,事件的起因、发展、经过、结果和重点景物的形状、颜色、动态、声音、气味。
1.主句是一般现在时,从句可以为各种时态。
2.主句是一般过去时,从句要用相应过去时态。
注意:从句描绘客观事实、真理、自然现象等,从句时态不受主句时态限制,仍用一般现在时。
例句:He answered that he was listening to me.
Father told me that practice makes perfect .
1.从句为陈述句,常选择引导词that,that引导宾语从句无意义,不充当句子成分常省略。例句:He told us (that they would help us through the whole work.
2.从句为一般疑问句,常选择引导词if或whether,表示“是否”。在whether … or not结构中不能用if替换。例句:I don’t know if there will be a bus any more.
3.从句为特殊疑问句,常选择what,when,where,which,who,how等的疑问代词、副词作引导词。例句:He didn’t tell me when we should meet again.
介词短语替代定语从句有两种方式:(1省略“关系副词+主语+be动词”,或“关系代词+be动词”;(2根据从句的意思改编。
例1:We have never forgotten the days (when we were at college.
我们从来没有忘记在大学对书的日子。
例2:I don’t know the person (who is in your office.
在你办公司的那个人我不认识。
例3:Those who have high expectations but do not have those relationship skills are likely to be brought down to earth fairly quickly as their Prince or Princess Charming falls off their pedestal.
改为:Those with high expectations but without those relationship skills are likely to be brought down to earth fairly quickly as their Prince or Princess Charming falls off their pedestal.
那些对婚姻期望太高却又不具备处理婚姻关系技巧的人,一旦他们心中的白马王子或白雪公主从神圣的光环里跌落,他们就会很快地回到现实中。
例4:He is not a person who likes to haggle over every ounce.
改为:He is a person above personal interests.
他不是一个斤斤计较的人。
陈述句语序,就是主语在前,谓语动词在后。
错误: He is wondering when can he finish this difficult job.
正确: He is wondering when he can finish this difficult job.
注意:宾语从句的否定转移
主句的谓语动词是think,believe,imagine,suppose,consider,expect,fancy,guess等,并且主句的主语是第一人称而且为一般现在时,从句的否定词一般要转移到主句上来,其反义疑问句一般与宾语从句一致.例如; I don’t think he will come to my party.而不能说成I think he won’t come to my party.
基本概念定语:用于修饰名词或代词的成分就叫定语。 定语从句:如果修饰某个名词或代词的定语是一个完整的句子,这个句子就叫定语从句。定语从句所修饰的名词或代词叫先行词。定语从句放在先行词后面。定语从句的引导:定语从句的引导词代替的是先行词。
1、当定语从句所修饰的名词是事、物时,用that/which引导,且that/which在定语从句中作主语或宾语。e.g:a.Thisisthepenthat/whichIboughtyesterday.
2.当定语从句所修饰的名词是人时用that/who引导,引导词再从句中做主语或宾语。
3.定语从句修饰的\'名词时地点时用which/that或where引导:若地点名词在定语从句中是作主语或宾语就用that/which引导,是作地点状语则用where引导,可与“介词+which”互换。作visited的宾语作介词in的宾语作work的地点状语
4.当定语从句修饰的名词是时间名词时:若在定语从句中作主语或宾语用that/which,作时间状语则用when,同样可与“介词+which”互换。
5.当定语从句所修饰的名词在定语从句中表示原因时用why。’tcomeisstillamystery.
6.当定语从句修饰的名词和引导词后面的那个词之间是所有关系时,用whose引导。女儿已经出国的那个人是位医生
7.一些特殊情况:
如果定语从句的时态与主句的时态具有同时性(包括谓语有情态动词或之后性,则可以用“关系代词或关系副词+不定式”来简化,或直接用“不定式”来修饰先行词。要注意的是,此时的不定式一定要是及物动词,如果是不及物,则需要在动词后面加上相应的介词,使之成为及物动词短语。这个结尾的介词可以提前到关系代词前面,也可以继续留在句尾。前者是正式说法,后者是非正式说法。
例1:We moved to the country so that the children would have a garden in which they could play in.
我们搬到了乡下,好让孩子们有个花园在里面玩。
改为:We moved to the country so that the children would have a garden in which to play.
或者:We moved to the country so that the children would have a garden to play in.
例2:He felt miserable unless he had neighbors (whomhe could quarrel with.
他要是没有可以吵架的邻居就难受。
改为:He felt miserable unless he had neighbors with whom to quarrel.
或者:He felt miserable unless he had neighbors to quarrel with.
例3: The conference which will be held this afternoon is bound to be a great success. 计划在今天下午举行的会议一定会取得成功。
改为:The conference which to be held this afternoon is bound to be a great success.
或者:The conference to be held this afternoon is bound to be a great success.
例4:At a ceremony in Honolulu on Dec. 29, Postmaster General John E. Potter gave a preview of the Lunar New Year Commemorative Stamps Souvenir Sheet, the grand finale of the Lunar Year stamp series, which will be available in 2005.
12月29日,美国邮政总局局长约翰·E·波特在檀香山从句了农历新年的纪念邮票小型张的揭幕仪式,这枚小型张将于2005年正式发行,它为农历新年的系列纪念邮票写下了完美的结局。(注意:与定语从句一样,也可以采用非限制性形式
改为:At a ceremony in Honolulu on Dec. 29, Postmaster General John E. Potter gave a preview of the Lunar New Year Commemorative Stamps Souvenir Sheet, the grand finale of the Lunar Year stamp series, to be available in 2005.
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