中考英语试卷作文烟台【一】
1。 叙述的人称
英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者，使人到真实可信，如身临其境。如：
The other day， I was driving along the street。 Suddenly， a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast。 I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side。 But it was too late。 The car hit my bike and I fell off it。
用第三人称叙述，优点在于叙述者不受“我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制，而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者，直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前，文章的客观性很强。如：
Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella， for it was raining hard。 On the way， he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover。 Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her， but he was too short。 What could he do? Then he had a good idea。
2。 动词的时态
在记叙文中，记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高，且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的\'，这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化，正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。
3。 叙述的顺序
记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙，都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作，较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙，读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果，让所叙之事跌宕起伏，使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃，从而为文章所吸引，深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当，则容易弄巧成拙，使文章结构散乱，头绪不清，让读者不知所云。
4。 叙述的过渡
过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如：
In my summer holidays， I did a lot of things。 Apart form doing my homework， reading an English novel， watching TV and doing some housework， I went on a trip to Qingdao。 It is really a beautiful city。 There are many places of interest to see。 But what impressed me most was the sunrise。
The next morning I got up early。 I was very happy because it was a fine day。 By the time I got to the beach， the clouds on the horizon were turning red。 In a little while， a small part of the sun was gradually appearing。 The sun was very red， not shining。 It rose slowly。 At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea， just like a deep-red ball。 At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright。
What a moving and unforgettable scene!
5。 叙述与对话
引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述，可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态，使记叙生动、有趣，使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果：
I was in the kitchen， and I was cooking something。 Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front。 I thought maybe someone was knocking the door。 I asked who it was but I heard no reply。 After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor。 I realized it was the cat。 I felt released。
这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字，但经作者这么一写，就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式，没有人物语言，把“悬念”给冲淡了。可作如下调整：
I was in the kitchen cooking something。 "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front。 Thinking someone was knocking at the door， I asked， "Who?" No reply。 After a while， I saw my cat running across the parlor。 "It＇s you。" I said， quite released。
中考英语试卷作文烟台【二】
Last Sunday, Jim went out to fly a kite. The kite flew highly in the sky. Jim ran with it happily.
Suddenly the line was broken and the kite flew away. Soon it disappeared. Where was it?
Jim had no idea. So he had to run here and there to look for the kite. At last he saw it on the top of the tree. He tried to get it down. But he couldn’t. He felt sad.
中考英语试卷作文烟台【三】
暑假的一天，我们全家一起去山东玩。那里有波澜壮观的大海，雄伟壮观的高山，哪里的空气真是清新。一上飞机，我的心情非常激动，因为这是我第二次乘坐飞机。这次坐飞机是深夜里坐的，那飞机一会儿往左摇，一会儿往右摇，就这样我就迷迷糊糊的带到了美丽而凉爽的烟台。
第二天早上，我们带着兴奋的心情来到了汽车站，乘坐公交车。不一会儿，就到了风景如画的龙口，一下车，我就看到了满山遍野的小草，在一座座山上显得格外耀眼。我们打了个粗驻车，来到了南山大佛，一抬头，就看到了一座高大雄伟的金色大佛，在不大高的山上挺立着。那座大佛好像在说：“一定要鼓起勇气上去!加油!”我们一下子充足了气，奋勇向前。当我们爬到了山上地时候，我们已经筋疲力尽了，再看看大佛，正在对我们笑呢!第三天，我们又带着好心情来到了威海的极地海洋公园，那里又是一派热闹的景象。那里有热带雨林、极地馆、鳄鱼湾等等。我最喜欢的是海洋剧场，里面是海豚、海狮表演。那里的海狮表演可真是精彩，它们会算数学题、会打击乐、会拍手……最让我大开眼界的是小海狮打击乐。他们能用自己的身体来弹奏乐器，有的用自己的小嘴巴来弹钢琴。有的用自己的前肢来打鼓，还有的用鼻子来跳舞。
真是有趣极了!大海也挡不住我们的心情，我们奔向大海的怀抱。那浪花一浪一浪的拍打着我的小脚丫，我经常踩着那细软的沙滩，在大海边尽情地喊着：“大海我来了!”时间过得飞快，我的小心眼里一直在想着再玩一会。我们趁上了飞机，从上往下看那汽车真像一颗颗小芝麻。房子像一只只大蚂蚁，人一点也看不见了。突然，飞机一下子向上飞了起来，你瞧!那一片又一片的白云轻飘飘的，一会儿往这儿飞，一会儿往哪儿飞，看着看着我真想相一致孙悟空一样踩着云朵上。下了飞机，我们坐上了轰隆隆的动车，来到了杭州火车站。这次旅游真是让我玩得痛快，下次我还要来烟台玩。
中考英语试卷作文烟台【四】
导入：
第1段：Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
正文：
第2段：There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势
结论：
第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论 オ
