和谐的.工作氛围能极大地调动我们工作积极性和主动性,同样和谐的师幼关系能极大地调动幼儿参与活动的积极性、主动性和创造性,有利于幼儿个性的社会化发展,但是和谐的师幼关系的建立却并不是一件容易的事,除了要求把幼儿当成平等的独立的个体,热爱并尊重每一个幼儿,还要掌握一定得技巧。如:微笑、爱抚和拥他入怀来表示赞许和喜爱。运用积极地语言早已为我们所掌握,而积极地表情和身体语言更可以拉近我们与孩子的距离,孩子会从这些细小的地方感知我们的温情,从而真正的接纳我们。
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界,
一花一天堂,
手中即无限,
永恒亦短暂。
这种是以大班带小班的活动,不仅增进了孩子们的友情,而且最大限度地挖掘、升发了每名幼儿的潜能,新《纲要》中指出,幼儿园与家庭、社区密切合作,综合利用各种教育资源,如果我们每一个幼儿园、每一个班级的每一位老师都能做到综合利用多种资源那我们将会在贯彻实施新《纲要》的道路上迈出可喜的一大步!
每一个人,其实都是一棵草。每种草都是一种花,都有它开放的权利和空间;当然,花本来也是一种草,我们和其他人一样,都是一种草,都是一朵花,不一样的只是花朵儿的艳丽,有的草绽放出美丽的花,却终究昙花一现;有的草绽放出的花朵并不艳丽,甚至可以说是不该诞生在这大千世界上,却长久的开放。
吸收了无尽的日月精华,不知经过多久的辛苦劳作,艰苦奋斗,虽绽放出的花朵艳丽非凡,但却不能长久;不追求名利,荣誉,只尽力做好自己该做的事,不要太辛苦了,平淡些,绽放的花朵虽绽放出的花朵艳丽非凡,但却不能长久;不追求名列、荣誉,只尽力做好自己该做的事,不要太辛苦了,平淡些,绽放的花朵虽朴实无华,但经得起风吹雨打,风吹倒了,仍能挺直腰板,雨拍打着,当做养料,不像娇贵的花儿需要精心浇灌,只要有一线希望也能成功,花朵虽朴实,但绽放的长久,经得起时光的考验。
每个人其实都是一颗草,一朵花。不同的只是你绽放出的花朵。不管多么艳丽,多么娇贵的花儿,也只是短暂的生命,当它生命完结的那一刻起,它也就凋谢了,美丽的影子,从前的鲜艳,也只成为了几片伶仃的还未凋零的花瓣,美丽的花儿,惹起孩子们的注意,将它们摘下,使短暂的美丽更短暂;朴实无华的花儿,正因为不艳丽,引不起别人的注意,才得以长久地绽放。过好自己的生活就好了,何必关心别人是否注意你?过分的关注,却可能成为终结生命的***手。
所以,正好花儿的绽放一样。不必努力刻苦的去追求生活中所谓的富有,不要想着让别人在意自己,当你追求到这些时,也许已经华发早白,此时的你不正是昙花一现,稍纵即逝吗?
但是平淡无奇的生活,却往往长久。不追求功名,利益,只做好自己应该做的事,不引人注目的花朵,外表朴实,但真正绽放的是心中的花朵儿。
是的,每一种草都会开花。但是,开放的花儿是不同的……
教师平时可以引导幼儿将自己喜爱的玩具、图书等带到幼儿园与小朋友分享,并根据幼儿的需要创设“汽车展、小小图书馆”等不同的活动区供幼儿活动,在这些活动中,孩子们不仅知道玩具是谁带来的,而且还知道这些玩具背后的一个小故事,在小小图书馆里,教师引导幼儿将书中的最喜欢的内容介绍给同伴听,激发其他幼儿向同伴讲述自己所看图书的内容,这些活动的开展增大了同伴间的互动密度,使同伴关系更加融洽。
首先我的童年和妈妈的童年就有着天壤之别。童年的妈妈每天只有吃自家种的\'粮食和菜填饱肚子,想吃零食就简直是妄想。小学时,教室是泥巴墙,课桌是家里自制的长板凳,板凳就是几块砖头。作业本用完后擦了再写。为了节省纸笔,就用树枝在地上打草稿。所谓的小店,只有一样商品,那就是一位老太太从井里面打来的井水放上糖精,一分钱三杯,那就是所有学生最渴望最美味的“饮料”。而今的我每餐必有鱼肉,再也不用过妈妈那种填饱肚子的生活。我的教室也从泥巴墙过渡到了高楼大厦。现代化的多媒体设施取代了长条板凳。小店里的商品琳琅满目,应有尽有。妈妈常常羡慕地说“你真幸福”。
不仅我是幸福的,我们家也是幸运的。四十平方米的瓦房变成了一百二十平方米的楼房。黑白电视机换成了液晶大彩电。搓衣板换成了全自动洗衣机。微波炉、电磁炉、电脑这些在以前想都不敢想的东西,现在却成了我们每个现代家庭必备的东西。
我的生活在变,我家在变,我祖国也在变。改革开放三十年是中国航天事业不断创新的三十年!从一九七九年远程火箭发射试验成功,从二零零三年“神五”升天,首次载人航天飞行成功,再到二零零五年神舟六号载人航天卫星顺利返回,中国航天人在摸索中让祖国一跃成为了航天科技强国!二零零八年,我国首颗探月卫星““嫦娥一号”发射升空,炎黄子孙的千年奔月梦成籽现实!
我们坚信,在中华民族伟大复兴的征程上,必将出现一个又一个辉煌的三十年!中华民族的崛起,必将让世界为我们自豪!
评语:文章语言朴实无华,层次清楚,运用了对比的手法,深化了主题,展现了改革三十年来的变化。
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