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High school is regarded as the best time in a person's life. As a senior 3 student, it won't take long before I graduate.
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High school is regarded as the best time in a person's life. As a senior three student, it won't take long before I graduate. Now, I have much to share with my fellow students.
高中被认为是一个人一生中最好的时间。作为一名三年级的学生,在我毕业前不需要很长时间。现在,我和我的同学们分享了很多。
Firstly, I would like to show my appreciation to those standing by me all the way, teachers, parents and friends included. Without their help and advice, my life would be different. Secondly, it's high time to say sorry to classmates whom I hurt or misunderstood. Communication and smiles act as bridges to friendship. Above all, I've made up my mind to make every effort to study, for I believe hard work is the key to success. Just as the old saying goes, "no pains, no gains."
首先,我想对我所有的方式,教师,家长和朋友包括我的赞赏。没有他们的帮助和建议,我的生活将是不同的。其次,是对我伤害或误解的同学说对不起的时候了。沟通和微笑是友谊的桥梁。最重要的是,我已经下决心要尽一切努力去学习,因为我相信努力工作是成功的关键。正如俗话所说:“没有痛苦,没有收获。”
Finally I hope that all the younger fellows can make full use of time, because time and tide wait for no men.
最后,我希望所有的年轻人都能充分利用时间,因为时间和时间等待任何人。
你们好!我是新世纪学校五年级一班的张菡容。在我每天放学上学的路上,总会看到一些亮着“空车”的出租车行驶在不太畅通的马路上。我想给你们提个小小的建议:
我在瑞士生活期间,发现马路上没有空着的出租车,他们是怎么打车的呢?我十分好奇,便问了爸爸妈妈,他们说:“每一辆出租车的车顶上,都会有订车电话,号码简单易记。比如222222。如果要乘坐,就拨打,公司就会派一辆最近的车来,尽快地把乘客送往目的地。”我觉得这种方式非常好,值得推荐给你们。
现在我们地球上的石油资源越来越少,我们应该节约资源,但是出租车空车行驶,就会浪费宝贵的资源,而且排出的`尾气还会加剧大气污染。它也给我们的交通造成更大的压力。为了岛城的蓝天白云,绿树红瓦更美丽,以最美的容貌迎接奥运,请叔叔阿姨们考虑一下我的建议,谢谢!
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我想把整钱存起来,不想动开。便让他给我便宜便宜。他看我这么着急,而且又是个孩子学生,便答应了。上了车之后,发现它的驾驶座后面,有一个急救箱,里面放着纱布、碘伏等急救物品。干嘛要放个急救箱?也许是为了客人的安全着想吧,真是个细心的司机,我朝他投去赞赏的目光。闲着无聊,我便拿出手机刷了个朋友圈,跟朋友聊天来消除路途的寂寞。
忽然,出租车的速度慢了下来。透过司机摇下的车窗,怎么回事?我抬头一看,哦,原来是我们已经到了一个路口。透过司机摇下的车窗,我看到一个瘦弱的老太太躺在地上,在那***,这老太太看上去六十岁左右。许多汽车赶快绕开了这个老太太,唯恐避之不及。就怕被讹上。看到这情况,我告诉司机“叔叔,快走,别管?”“对不起了,小朋友,我得先救救这个老奶奶,耽误一下你的时间。”我话没说完,就被司机打断了。我连忙阻止他:“这个老太婆也许是讹钱的,不要管她,这样的人社会上有的是,专门骗你这样的好心人。”
司机听了,不假思索地说:“不行,万一她真是旧病发作,耽误了最佳抢救时间,那就麻烦了。”没等我搭话,他便下车了,赶过去把老人扶了起来,背到了车上。打火,踩油门,调转车头,朝医院奔去。我很不高兴,大声嚷嚷着:“那我怎么办?”司机说:“等会把你送目的地,不收钱。”
虽然我还有些不情愿,又想早到姥姥家也没什么事,而且还能省下车费,正好也想看看这事怎么收场,便不再说什么。反正不收钱,耽误就耽误吧。我心里想着。到了医院,司机给老人挂了号,仔细地询问了她家人的电话号码,并且帮忙打了电话……后来,经过了一阵抢救,老太太已无大碍,她的\'子女也赶到了医院,听了他们母亲的说明,非常感激司机,不停说着谢谢。司机最后把我送到了目的地,并再三向我道歉,果然,也没收我钱,我把从医院离开时准备好的三十元钱塞给他,但他坚决不收,望着出租车远去的背影,我陷入了沉思……我想多给的十元钱算什么呢?算奖励吗?我有资格奖励他吗?他离开了,消逝在我的视线里,但他的身影去越来越清晰,越来越高大。
本文格式正确,意思表述完整,行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用,还使用了以‘which,’引导的非限定性定语从句,从而使文章层次分明,富于变化,不愧为考场佳作。
I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
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