读过《教师人文读本》这本书,感受最深的是爱,对教育,对学生贯穿始终的是爱,最多的爱。读过这本书,经常思考的问题是:如何在人生的大航船上确定自己的位置,是船员还是舵手,是大副还是士兵。每个人在世界上所扮演的角色不同,关键在于定位。冥冥中有双大手在指挥着我,从师范中学习的艺术到工作中教的课好似是风马牛不相及的事情。但要想教好课不也是一门艺术吗?
有句话说:“活在当下”。其实,每个人的命运还是掌握在自己的手里。虽然从出生到长大,基本是家长在为自己做主。但今后还有漫长的几十年,仍然有自己选择的机会,是选择努力踏实地度过还是空虚而归,全在自己。在学校所学的专业直到现在也拾不起来。工作上的杂事与生活中的事情搅得没有时间,没心情(其实我知道这些都是找借口。
既然经常思考,我想这件事很快会提上我的生活日程的。
每看到书上的某一个片段,总在不停地在反思自己,自己在对待学生的态度,对待家人的态度。我慨叹自己太平凡了,平凡得没有一双慧眼,去发现学生的长处与潜力。平凡得没有一双巧手,把学生引领到更加广阔的天地中去。
工作几年,能够得到学校领导和家长的肯定,心里自然很高兴,但又觉得自己做得实在是太少了,有点愧对家长的信任,领导的表扬。
“公平公正”“爱心”“教师的发展”“教师的`专业”等等,新教育为教师提出了那么多的努力方向。所谓坚持,所谓勤奋,所谓的所谓。教师自身的前进动力,外在的推动力.不论怎样,都去做一个问心无愧的教师,努力的教师。
《教师人文读本》同时也为我们指明了新的教学观。这就是教师不仅要向学生传授知识,培养学生的能力,提高学生的品德,更主要的是培养学生的创新精神和实践能力。注重在教学中创设使人思考、激励探索的教学情境,引导学生自己去发现问题、思考问题、解决问题,使学生获得知识信息的过程真正成为学生心智发展的过程。与此同时,作为“传道、授业、解惑”的教育者也应成为实践“终身学习”理念的楷模。重视和加强继续教育,这是时代发展的必然要求。总之,终身学习是我们教师能走在时代前列必不可少的前提。
《教师人文读本》给了我很多新的启示,我将在自己平凡的岗位上尽职尽责、努力向上。最后,让我用徐匡迪先生的一句话来结束此文吧!——教育是事业,事业的意义在于献身;教育是科学,科学的价值在于求真;教育是艺术,艺术的生命在于创新。
【习作题目】
Students Grading of Their Teachers
1.学生给老师打分已很普遍;
2.人们对其持不同态度(肯定或否定的态度);
3.你的看法。
【习作解读】
显然,此任务是写一篇议论文,主题为对学生给老师打分的现象进行议论,开放性较大。学生应根据实际情况,从多个方面阐述其原因并表达自己对这种现象的观点和态度。该话题更加贴近学生的实际生活,但有一定的语言难度,也有一定的思想深度。通过此文的写作,也从侧面提示了学生在注重写作基础训练的前提下,也应该注重培养积极思考、灵活运用、自由发挥等能力。
此次的写作任务出题相当巧妙,写作内容涉及的词汇和句型都属于新课程标准范围。题目在考查学生写作能力的同时,也在考查学生的分析判断能力及高度概括能力。富有想象力的学生写出的文章可能生动而富有灵性。此题目能引发学生对平日习以为常的行为进行反思,学会换位思考,这对中学生的性格和品德培养非常重要。
【习作展示】
Students Grading of Their Teachers
Nowadays, a lot of schools ask their students to contribute to grading their teachers. As a teacher, it is their responsibility to satisfy their students in all aspects. Meanwhile, it is admirable that school teachers prefer to expose themselves to their students.
If the system of grading of teachers by students is introduced, it will benefit students, teachers and the administration of the school for a number of reasons. For one thing, the system will give teachers and the administration of the school an insight into the minds of the students and show whether the teachers are successful in getting their lessons understood by the students; for another, it will also encourage the good teachers to continue their efforts and motivate themselves. What is more, it will expose those who are not doing enough and will lead them to correct their teaching methods as well as their attitude towards students. Thus the quality of teaching will certainly improve.
In a word, it is a promising concept and will bring surprisingly good results if applied with the right conditions.
【习作点评】
作者观点明确,赞成学生给老师打分。作为老师,就要做一个让学生满意的老师。这样,不仅对学生、学校有利,而且对老师本人也有利。这样,老师就会从另一个角度重新审视自己,看自己是否是一个成功的老师。如果得到学生的认可,这将是对自己的一次鼓励,为继续前行增添动力。如果学生的认可度不高,老师就应进行反思,调控教学方法和教学态度。这样,教学质量肯定会提高。作
者用简洁、明快的语言以及自己的经历列举了充分的论据,内容充实,贴近生活。For one thing, for another, what is more, in a word等过渡词的使用,是短文结构清晰,层次分明。最后,最值得一提的是,文中多次正确运用的高级词汇和复杂句式,给文章增添了不少文采。综上所述,这是一篇不可多得的佳作,值得向大家推荐。
二、写作模板
此模板适用于社会现象类议论文。参考模式如下:
Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental There are a couple of reasons behind this problem/phenomenon. For one ;Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people
Nowadays, there exists a common phenomenon—with the development of the Internet, more and more people tend to send electronic cards instead of paper ones to their friends and relatives when an important holiday comes.
There are a couple of reasons behind this phenomenon. For one thing, compared with the traditional cards, electronic cards are more lively and interesting. They can give not only pictures but also sound and animation. For another, there are many websites online which offer varieties of cards for you to choose from. What is more, with the popularity of the electronic cards, less paper is used in making paper cards, which does good to our environment.
Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that sending greetings by using electronic cards will be accepted by more and more people, not only the young ones.
三、写作指导
写作思路是先列出一个具体的社会问题或者现象,然后分析产生的原因和产生的影响,最后提出解决问题的办法,或者得出结论,或者提出个人看法,或者预测前景。
论点、论据、论证是议论文的三要素。论点是作者对所议论问题所持有的见解和主张,论据是用来证明论点的事实和道理的根据;论证是用论据来证明论点的方法和过程。一般来说,议论文每段都有主题句来确定论点。论证的方法很多,但最常用的是因果分析法。即:分析事实与论点的因果关系,指出取得结果的原因是所要证明的论点,从而达到论证的目的。
在近几年的高考中,议论文的比重占得越来越多,议论文的.出题形式可以多种多样,有看图写作、图表、表格、书信等各种类型,但文体实际是议论文,而有时是夹叙的议论文。议论文的写作要点是:
1. 观点鲜明,文章一定有一个明确的中心论点。
2. 层次分明,一个中心论点通常有几个分论点支持,不同层次之间要分明,过渡清晰自然。
3. 最后一段一般要总结全文,得出一个符合逻辑的结论,突出中心思想。
4. 一般采用一般现在时。
5. 语言简洁有力,一般不采用口语。
四、巩固练习
1.【练习题目】
2010年上海世界博览会期间,上万的青年志愿者参加志愿工作,请你谈谈对此现象的看法。
【参考范文】
During the period of holding the 2010 World Expo in Shanghai, tens of thousands of young citizens are participating in volunteer work, hoping to devote themselves to the grand occasion. As far as I am concerned, everyone ought to enter for it. Here are the reasons I want to mention.
It can be argued that the advantages of doing unpaid volunteer work are enormous, because volunteer work is actually a two-way street. First of all, volunteer work should always benefit people who need help. Those who need help will feel happier due to our immediate help. On the other hand, as far as the young people ourselves are concerned, we have more opportunities to develop the sense of responsibility, independence as well as interpersonal skills in the process of helping others.
Through this kind of work, we become confident and mature. In addition, we can make many friends and increase our chances of getting the jobs of our dreams. Furthermore, volunteer work plays an active role in building up a harmonious society.
In a word, it is of great value for the young adults to offer volunteer work. The youth volunteers do make a difference by the voluntary work! Why not join them and do something for our country?
2.【练习题目】
某些中学生为了显示自己成熟或表明自己醋而吸烟。请写一篇120词左右的短文,列举吸烟的危害,并提出建议。
【参考范文】
I am sorry to know that more and more middle school students begin to smoke. I think it is wrong to believe that smoking is cool and even think that smoking makes you appear to be mature. In fact, smoking is not cool but very dangerous.
First, smoking can do much damage to health. Scientific researches show that smoking can lead to heart diseases, cancers and other problems. It is reported that about 5 million people die of diseases related to smoking each year all over the world.
Second, it is a waste of money to smoke cigarettes. Smoking can cost a great deal of money. Once you are addicted to it, it is difficult to give it up.
What’s more, smoking can cause fires easily, which may do great damage to your life and your surroundings.
So give up smoking at once! Only in this way can you keep healthy forever.
3. 【练习题目】近年来,越来越多的中学生出国学习,出现了所谓的中学生“出国热”。请根据以下提供的信息,谈谈自己的看法。
1)良好的语言环境,更利于语言学习。
2)拓宽视野,学习国外先进的科学技术。
3)传播各民族间的不同文化。
参考词汇:媒介,中间人:mediator
【参考范文】
In recent years, studying abroad has been popular. Tens of thousands of Chinese middle school students have gone to foreign countries to study.Many people are trying their best to apply to go abroad.
There are a number of reasons for attending schools abroad.First, students who are studying abroad can act as mediators between people of different cultures. They can communicate with each other directly and learn about different cultures. Second, they can learn much more advanced knowledge of science and technology from foreign countries and experience different education methods.Third, they live in foreign countries and take classes given by foreign teachers. As a result, they can learn foreign languages much more quickly.
Therefore, it is advisable to attend schools abroad.
4.【练习题目】随着经济和社会的发展,道路上的私人小汽车越来越多。请根据自己的观察和理解,谈谈自己的观点。
【参考范文】
With the fantastic development both in economy and in society in China, the number of people who own private cars is on the rise. Some people have bought cars of their own, and others are planning to buy cars. But I strongly object to the increase in developing private cars.
I hold that automobiles will give rise to a series of problems. In the first place, as more and more cars are produced and run on the road, a large volume of poisonous gas will be given off, polluting the atmosphere and causing actual harm to the health of people. Next, private cars contribute to traffic jams so greatly that the advantages gained in comfort and freedom are often cancelled out by the frustration caused by traffic jams. The last problem is the increasing number of car accidents that have killed and will kill a lot of people in a friction of a second.
In a word, although automobiles have been playing a vital part in the daily activities of our society, they also bring us numerous troubles such as more serious environmental pollution, more traffic accidents and more energy consumption. They drink up huge amounts of fuel and throw out huge amounts of pollutants. Jams waste our precious time. Therefore, I am against developing private cars.
最近,空余时间在看《教师人文读本》。这套书所选编的文章确实堪称一流。本书编委会的成员都是教育工作者,是一群爱读书、爱思考的人。他们将自己平日读书的心得和自认为最有价值的文章,汇集在一起与广大读者交流,按照“感性——知性——理性”的层次,汇编成本书。这套书的特色正在于此,全书上下两册各安排了八个相对独立的单元,每个单元选取古今中外名家名篇若干。阅读这套书的好处在于,可以将不同作者对生活的感悟文字对照起来读,如此相互参照,相映成趣。
在看似不相***各单元之间,全书又以“感性——知性——理性”的层次加以串联,犹如一根细线,串起了一颗颗珍珠。足可见编选者的“匠心”与“苦心”。他们试图使每一位读者(可能并不是教师),在阅读的过程中实现“本我”、“自我”向“超我”的转变。
如果从职业的角度来阅读这些文章,或许你会遗憾,在这套书中,并没有直接传授教学经验的篇目,对于那些试图从此书中找到一些教书技巧的人来说,会感到废时与无用。即便是和教育有关的专题,也不过十分之一的容量,且都不涉及具体的学科内容。其实,大可不必抱有那么功利的心态去对待阅读,我看重的,正是类似于“凡有所学,皆成性格”的阅读——越是那些看似无用的、远离我们现实功利的书籍,就越接近我们的心灵世界。如果,非要从这套书的阅读中,获得一些所谓“有用”的东西,我倒是觉得可以从中收获一些温暖人心的人文关怀,给自己日益紧张的身心以暂时的慰藉。
读了《教师人文读本》只后,我的感触颇深,一代名师的教诲和许许多多的和我们一样的老师的心得体会,都让我受到了洗礼和教育。不错,我们是教师,都是些普通的人,但我们从事着神圣的事业。
先辈、前辈和同辈中有不少楷模,为我们树立起精神的支柱,究其核心,那就是一种人之所以为人的精神,即人文精神。它博大精深,但首先是爱,惟有了爱,我们才能成为一个育人之人。
《教师人文读本》里面的文章是经过精心挑选的。每篇文章好像都在写我们教师。在读“夫子循循善诱人”之时,第一篇文章《名师》就深深打动了我。文章中记述到的几位老师,都是一些知名的大师,从一些零碎小事,从不同的角度,表现出一个老师的不俗之处。从这几位老师身上我们不但看到了无愧“老师是太阳底下最崇高的职业”这句话的亮点,而且深切感到教师是每一个学生学习和生活的榜样。
自从参加教育工作开始,就希望自己做一个好老师。然而就我一个人的力量,一个普通的小学教师,传递文明、光耀民族说不上,但是为人师表深刻记在我的心中,总希望能够尽自己的一些微薄之力去帮助一些需要帮助的孩子,让他们的生活能够丰富多彩一些,对社会多做一些有益的事,国家尽可能少一些负担,他们的后代同样能够得到爱和幸福。如果做到了这些,那我就无愧“人民教师”这光荣称号。虽然我无法作一个伟大的名师,但是我可以做一个响当当的好老师。
教师也是我人生中的一张对照表,如果让我的学生要去做什么,自己首先要能够做到。所以我必须具备合格的人格。这样,我在教育学生的时候,我才能够理直气壮,让他们能有个明确的道德方向,能够有辨明是非的能力,成为一个正直的人。虽然我不能保证我所有的学生都能够永远不犯错,每个人做什么事都讲原则,但我希望他们有自己独特的气质的同时,同样不失人格。一个老师,不是能够回答学生的所有问题,而是能够对学生的学习和生活提出很有效的独特的建议……在不到一年的实际教育工作中,渐渐发现这才是学生最需要的,并且能够感觉到学生什么时候需要什么帮助,因为学生往往不习惯去请教老师。这是教育中存在的一个矛盾。找学生谈话时,偶尔也能够给学生帮助,让他改变了一段时间。可是正当我有成就感而感到满足时不禁感叹,一个学生不是只有教师在教育,而是全社会在教育,是人类的共同责任。只有这样,人类文明才能得到延续、进步和发展。
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