四级作文成功之道【一】
分析范文或优秀作文是我们学好写作的第一步。不要小看任何的优秀小短文，那其中一定有需要你掌握的内容。To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界，
一花一天堂，
手中即无限，
永恒亦短暂。
四级作文成功之道【二】
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先，提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段：提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段：正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段：摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次，提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性，连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity：段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛，也不可太具体，做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明，另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence：关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰，层层展开。
完整性(completeness：以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头，这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次，提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型：It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单，注意练习并接句的使用，会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as，如：
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头，句式简单，我们可以通过把since提前改变句式，如：
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后，提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法：millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论，辩论”的意思，而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.，相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略：使用最近所学的单词，如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后，我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文，以供参考：
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
四级作文成功之道【三】
Dear Mary,
You said in your letter that many of your classmates wore fashionableclothes, but you couldn\'t afford them so you felt very depressed. There are dif-ferent views on people\'s clothes. The followings are my ideas:
Firstly, you shouldn\'t put too much emphasis on physical appearance.
Remember that the most important task for you today is to concentrate on yourstudies. No matter what you wear, you will really look your best when youcome out first in your examinations.
Secondly, you should understand that it is a fine virtue to live in fru-gality. Just as a famous saying goes, Frugality is the mother of virtue.
Since your family can\'t provide you with enough money to buy fashionableclothes, it is all the more necessary for you to try to lighten the financialburden of your family. And you will find the virtue of frugality benefit youa lot in your future life.
I hope you understand what I mean. Hope you will take a positive attitudetowards life and will be happy again when you read my letter.
Yours,
Anne
四级作文成功之道【四】
??秀议论文欣赏人和的成功之道古人云，天时，地利，人和。
几乎每次提到这三者，都是关于战争的问题，其实人生又何尝不是一个无形的战场呢，在这场战争中，我们不仅要战胜他人，更要战胜自己，以取得辉煌的成绩。
舆论中、长辈口中、自己的思维中，我们都会佩服并羡慕那些成就的人们，他们是当代世界的基石，他们成就了当代科技。世界首富，中国首富，各领域顶尖人才，各行业的新兴霸主，这都属于他们的范畴。他们有过辛酸血泪，他们有过艰辛困苦，他们有过扎实奋进，他们用自己的双手创造了一个又一个奇迹。
他们中，有老一辈资本家，也有80后的年轻人，他们有着比我们更多的天时，地利。
天时，我们无法改变，连神仙都无法改变上天的旨意，何况我们这一介凡人呢。时间总是向前的，我们无法让时间停留，更不可能让世界倒回。上天安排了一天24小时，一年365天，纵使有着生死轮回，我们也轮在他们后面，我们也没能赶在他们，这就是天时。社会总是不断进步的，到了一个时代总有一个时代的人物出现，我们不属于那个时代，也就缺少了那个时代的“天时”。比尔盖茨未念完大学，就开办了微软公司，并且成为世界首富。不可否认，他用自己的勤劳与智慧获得成功。同时，我们也应该看到，当时的美国乃至世界，根本就没有成型的简便的电脑视窗操作系统，有的仅仅是DOS系统，正是这个机遇，比尔获得了他人没有获得的成就。美国华裔专家李昌钰博士凭借当年带去留学的两个箱子和五十美元而迅速成为当代国际刑事科学鉴识界的顶尖权威，这其中不乏他个人的勤奋刻苦。同时，当时尚待发展的刑侦工作也给了他这个机会。如果当时的理论与实践已经达到很高的水平，他又怎么可能迅速成为权威呢。我国的`改革开放初期，国人对一切事物都有着一种新鲜感，但大部分人只是感到新鲜而已，并没有实际行动，而现在的80富豪们，恰恰看中了这个新鲜，他们把这些引进国内，因此成就了自己的一番事业。这不是天时，又是什么呢？
也许有人问，和我们一般大的人们怎么也会有这么大的成就呢，他们或是商业精英，他们或是体育健儿。是的，这就是我要说的“地利”。地利是可以改变的，毕竟我们是行走于地球表面的人类，人们的各项科学研究都是从地层开始的，或者是在地层表面进行的，因此“地利”也是我们可以改变的因素之一。姚明，大家公认的篮球明星，他出生于一个篮球家庭，爸妈曾经都是篮球队员，同时也有着非比常人的收入，打小就接受着优秀的教育，试问这样一个拥有强势“地利”的人又怎么不会出成功呢。
世上身高的人多的是，但很多人的家庭都没有钱，甚至没有电视，甚至不知道篮球，你说他们又怎么能成为篮球明星呢。曾经看过这样一个新闻，李嘉诚死后分文都不会留给儿子，他只给了两个儿子一人一百万元去创造属于自己的事业。打小这两个人就接受着优越的教育，并成功的实现了一切教育梦想，就读于世界顶级学校，受恩于世界顶尖学者，同时也有着父亲建立的无与伦比的社会关系网络，试问这样的人不自己去成就，他还想要什么呢。这些地利，我们又缺了。
人和，这是一个最重要的因素，没有人，就算天时、地利再好，也不可能去实现梦想，成就辉煌。我们不曾有过他们的辛酸困苦，我们也不曾有过他们的优秀教育，但是我们不乏他们的刻苦与勤奋，我们同样能用自己的双手去创造属于自己的奇迹。也许这个奇迹不会有他们创造的那么大，也许这个奇迹在别人眼里只是微不足道，但是我们不怕，我们付出，我们流泪，我们欢喜，我们成功。
天时、地利、人和，我们三缺二呢。因此我们不应为自己的现状而感到困惑，感到彷徨，既然上天交大任于我们，那么我们必被苦心志、劳筋骨、饿体肤、乱所为，所以我们更应该坚强，奋进，那样我们才真正的掌握了“人和”，才真正勇于成功。
