Dear Miss Morgan,
(1 I am so sorry to tell you that I won’t be able to attend the lecture on American history tomorrow afternoon. (2 Now, I’m writing this letter to show my deep regret (3 I do hope you can understand me and excuse me for my absence.
(4 I will be very grateful if you are kind to listen to my explanation. (5 The reason for my absence is that my uncle is returning home from France, and I have promised to meet him at the airport at 3:30 tomorrow afternoon. (6 Therefore, I will have to give up attending your lecture tomorrow afternoon.
(7I wonder if it is possible for lecture to be recorded, and if so, could I borrow the tape? Sincerely yours Li Hua
幽幽碧云天,满地黄花损。西风渐紧,北雁南飞。铁蹄绕堤沙,误踏霜林碎。马儿疾行,车儿快随,恨不倩疏林,挂不住斜晖。 遥望见十里长亭,西风更紧,拂起泛黄的枫叶,有谁知那是点点离人泪。
杨柳枝,芳菲节,所恨年年赠离别,一叶随风忽报秋,纵使君来岂堪折? 昨夜红窗花烛,昨夜恩谢天地,昨夜刚圆百年梦,奈何上天,今朝要让你我千山相隔,万水阻挡!昨日今朝,望尽沧桑。
黄叶纷飞,衰草萋迷,对此苍白小亭,我眉头紧蹙,心绪悠悠。猛抬头,见你阁泪汪汪,无语凝咽,长吁气,推整素罗衣。 合欢未已,离愁相继,昨宵此翼,今日别离,望这淡淡的红装,柔柔的霓裳,这次第,怎一个愁字了得?
你且誓曰:“青霄有路终须到,金榜无名誓不归!”盼只盼你休要忘我情意浓,不论你位居皇臣卿相亦或位卑于民,我终等你归家来! 一斛清酒无心饮,相视泪眼凝丝情,怕待劳燕纷飞时,眼中流血心成灰。 别离情诉于谁?愁无寐人憔悴,流年羁恨两相催。
夕阳滑过霜林,青石古道,衰柳长堤。荒烟蔓草年头,烟雨思谁瘦?断烟霏雨,怎生去得?又一回眸,雨婉约,恨了没?
晚来独登楼,恨字锁眉头,残月长空,寒潭无声,望雁字过时,凉袭心头。
思,绝一笔,望,寒枝静月。等风景都看透,天高云洁,细水长流。我在天涯这头,遥望海角那头,愁!愁!愁!
例如:碧云天,黄花地,西风紧,北雁南飞。晓来谁染霜林醉?总是离人泪?
改诗:是谁丰富了湛蓝的天空?又无情地飘离?是谁装点了苍白的大地?却是路上带寒的秋菊?风,肆意狂乱了思绪?碎片也由南飞的大雁携去?看得林中霜叶也悄然醉了?哪是霜叶自醉?是染上了离人红泪。
改诗无疑很优秀,是创新的最好诠释。原曲前一句是具有深秋特征的四种景物的直接罗列,后一句设问点题,情景交融,含蓄而深沉。改诗则活用原诗意象,加入更多神奇的联想、想像,突破了原曲意象,丰富了原曲意境:云彩在无情地飘离,化静为动、化含蓄为显露;大地变得苍白,由带寒的秋菊装点;西风可以肆意吹碎离愁别绪,而被吹散的离愁的碎片正被南飞的大雁携去;林中红叶看了这一切,如痴如醉。这些意象想像新奇,情感表达热烈而真挚。而且承载这一切的诗歌语言及表现手法也极具现代诗的风采。
再如:霎时间杯盘狼藉,车儿投东,马儿向西。两意徘徊,落日山横翠。知他今宵宿在那里?有梦也难寻觅?
改诗:转眼间已是酒杯横睡?马蹄声重重地踏在我的心上?载着我的留恋相背而行?落日也随他而去?怎知他今宵酒醒何处?我在梦里寻他?可怎能寻觅?
改诗运用联想、想像和拟人的修辞手法,巧妙地改变了原曲意象。原曲只有车马,改诗则马蹄声重重地踏在我的心上,简练而形象,真是离愁渐远渐无穷;原曲杯盘狼藉,改诗酒杯横睡,更具愁绪、更具人情;原曲有落日,改诗则落日也随他而去,夕阳的落下竟是随着张生的离去,可谓精彩之笔。
优秀的改写必须凭借卓越的联想力、想像力,才能够入乎其内又出乎其外,缘于原诗又脱于原诗,创新意象、丰富意境。而在改写过程中,借助修辞手法可以较容易地把古诗变成符合现代审美情结、极具表现力的现代诗。
比如:青山隔送行,疏林不做美,淡烟暮霭相遮蔽。夕阳古道无人语,禾黍秋风听马嘶。我为甚么懒上车儿内,来时甚急,去后何迟???
改诗:青山你为何挡住去路?是在挽留谁呢?苍翠的.树林呀?你为何如此憔悴?傍晚的云气为何要急于挥洒你的身影?小道伴着落日沉静?秋风抚过农田?偶尔听见马蹄声飞扬?将离去的车儿定格。
原曲语言极尽华美,氛围十分忧伤。改诗则通过连用四个疑问,组成排比,加上拟人的修辞手法,意象鲜活,情感直露、热情。其中把疏林改为憔悴,夕阳古道无人语改为小道伴着落日沉静最为优美。
再如,[收尾]四围山色中,一鞭残照里?
改诗:层层的山峦中,响彻云霄的鞭声响起,将那夕阳也击打破碎?
无论如何,在残阳里闪现了一下又随即隐没在群山暮霭中的张生的鞭声,是很难被莺莺听见的,更不可能击碎夕阳,但运用超现实的夸张却将莺莺的痛苦表现得淋漓尽致,鞭声扩大了千万倍,是莺莺极目远望、心力交瘁的形象外化。
Dear professor Jackson:
I am indeed very sorry that I missed the examination you gave on Moby-Dick last Wednesday. I feel badly about it and want you to know what happened.
On my way to class that day,I had a flat tire,and I had to go with the mechanic when he repaired it. It took me more than one hour to get it done. A copy of the bill is enclosed.
I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation. I would appreciate your allowing me to take a make up examination. I will #e to your office during your office hour on Monday to discuss this possibility with you. Once again,I''m sorry fro any inconvenience caused.
Sincerely yours,
Alice
送别,诗中的送别看上去很简单,几句话就带过了,也许有人觉得,“送别”并不是很痛苦;而细细体会就会感到那样依依不舍。
中间一段“天之涯,地之角,知交半零落;一杯浊酒尽余欢,今宵别梦寒”似乎表现诗人,实在是太重这份情谊。天涯海角,在哪我们都是一辈子的友人。遥望现在,身边有着许许多多的朋友,但天下没有不散的宴席。他们终究会离开,如果你住在那段时光里定会觉得心中空落落,一时一刻都不想大笑,因为朋友之间的情谊太重了,太重了,就像烙铁一样深深的,被印在了心中。
就让这首诗,见证朋友之间的友谊,见证朋友世纪的友谊,见证朋友千代万代的友谊。
Dear Dad,
Thank you very much for your letter written to me. In your letter , you not only expressed your expectation to me , but also showed all your love to me . I was deeply moved . Thanks again ,Daddy .You said ," I hope you get bravery and perseverance, and can quickly grasp living skills like a lion ". Now I want to tell you that I will try my best to do everything well and live up to your expectations . Dear father , you are a great lion in my mind .
When I am absent mind , when I am depressed, you , my dear father is always there . Your advice and encouragement guide me through many difficulties . Thank you , Dad, for your help and understanding.
I love you , Dad ,forever!
Dear dad,
It’s so late,almost 11:00 at night.Have you entered into the sweet dream yet?I haven’t seen you for a long time.I miss you so much.Can you hear my sincere words?Maybe you’ll never know I miss you so much!
Do you still remember the happy days when we were all together?During those days we were full of sunshine.You and mum often took brother and me to the park.We always saw the ice-cream tear.Sometimes,you stayed at home and cooked some delicious food for us.We often waited for you and played with you.You could lift me very high.We always had a good time.You also concerned about my lesson.But you have never chastised me and lectured me.You were full of thoughts for me.What’s more,you were my best father in my heart.You were the envy of my friends.I was happy for a long time.But now,all things have changed.You can’t take care of me.You aren’t at home all day.Sometimes,I go to bed late,but I still can’t see you.Are you busy?No!you often play cards with your work friends in the factory.So you can’t go back home early.I’m angry to hear that!Do you know?If you don’t come back,we’ll worry about you.I often see you and mum should divorce in my dream.I’m very scared,because I want to have a happy family.I can’t control my tears and often suffer from insomnia the whole night.
Dad,I want to see you and talk with you.But I have no courage to tell you.But I hope you can care our family.Dad!Could you hear my voice?
Hope you keep healthy and best wishes.
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