高中生英语作文评分【一】
In the 21st century, the talent quality of hardworkingand dependable is no longer the only thing that the enterprise required. Infact, those two qualities are the basic constitution, now the requirement oftalent is more comprehensive. The perspective to define a talent is differentnow.
在21世纪，人才品质中的勤奋和踏实不再是企业唯一要求的品质了。事实上，这两个品质只是基本的个体素质。现在的人才要求更加全面。定义人才的视角也不一样了。
First,the enterprise prefers the one who could combine innovate and practice. Basically,the value comes from innovate, but only after combined with the innovation andpractice, can the value work the maximal effect. We can not be restricted tothe repetitive tasks. We should always keep creating new ideas.
第一，企业喜欢能把创新和实践结合起来的人。从基本上说，价值源于创新，但只有把创新与实践结合起来，价值才能发挥最大的成效。我们不能局限于重复的工作中，我们应当时时想着创造新的点子。
Second,the enterprise is more fancy the cross-domain talent. 21st century isthe century that combines different field and industry. The modern society andenterprise is no only require specializing to the professional field, but alsoto know about the relevant major and field, combine them and solved theproblems effective.
第二，企业更喜欢跨领域人才。21世纪是结合不同学科，不同产业的世纪。现代社会和现代企业不仅仅要在某个专业领域有造诣，还要知道相关的专业和领域，结合它们，有效地解决问题。
Finally,the IQ, EQ, SQ issue. When we define one man is successful or not, we do notlook into his academic record or intelligence quotient (IQ, but the balance developmentof intelligence quotient, emotional quotient and spiritual quotient.
最后，IQ，EQ，SQ的问题。当我们定义一个人成功与否，我们不仅仅看他学科成绩和智商，二世要看智商，情商，灵商的均衡发展。
Tosum up, if we want to survive in this competitive society, we need a comprehensivedevelopment to adapt to the requirement of the modern enterprise, or we willeliminated by the society.
总之，如果我们要在这竞争激烈的社会中生存，我们需要全面地发展去适应现代企业的要求，不然我们就会被社会淘汰。
高中生英语作文评分【二】
In everybody’s eyes, I am a good girl, because I make the good marks in the exams and help my parents to do things. Unlike other students, who will go against their parents, I follow my parents’ words. I don’t think that to do something goes against the adults is the wise choice, but I do want to do something new. Recently, I want to cut my hair and make the short style. My mother doesn\'t agree with me, because she thinks a girl should have the long hair. This time, I insist on my idea. Finally, she supports me. Trying something new makes me feel happy and be myself. The short hair makes me look like a cool boy and I like this style. My friends admire me to have the courage to change my image.
在大家眼中，我就是一个好女孩，因为我考试成绩好，还帮助父母做事。不像其他学生，会和父母作对，我很听父母的话。我认为做一些违背大人们的.事情是不明智的选择，但我想做一些创新。最近，我想把我的头发剪了，留短发。我妈妈不同意我的做法，因为她认为一个女孩就应该留长头发。这一次，我坚持我的想法。最后，她支持了我。尝试新事物让我感到预约，做我自己。短发使我看起来像一个很酷的男孩，但是我喜欢这种风格。我的朋友都羡慕我有勇气去改变自己的形象。
高中生英语作文评分【三】
For thousands of years， animals have trodden a slow path， their spirits together with the body。 But our human being\\'s transportation is too fast。 The body moves but the soul is left behind。 We try to free ourselves in convenience， but we only imprison the soul。 Since we invented how to count hours， we do everything to short the time， short the deadline。 But the time saved can\\'t be shorten。 Nowadays， we spend lots of time staying in front of a TV just changing the channels， while we have no time to talk with a good friend or play with our family。 We have plenty of time to search old news on the internet， while we hardly think about our life。 In the end， the only thing apparent is our loneliness。
Take your time， please。 Try to follow the natural steps and have your own clock。 Try to share your time with everybody you love， share your mind， your happiness and sadness。 Try to read the world we live in， do not only catch a quick glimpse at the society。
Someday， when we know how to spend every second in our life， we can then live our own life。
