(1)对未来事物的美好想像和希望
(2)对某事物臻于最完善境界的观念。
而职业又是什么?同样,在辞洋上,它的解释是:
(1)个人所从事的作为主要生活来源的工作,允许他选择他的职业
(2)指分内应当做的事。
理想和职业,就这样穿插在人们的生活中,构造出一个又一个的图画。
而我从小时候,就选定了一个职业,至今永不改变。那就是,作家。
作家,这个神圣的字眼,虽以写作为生,但永不放弃对生活的信念,他们是‘奇妙’的,用那普通的铅笔,构造出一个又一个汉字,最后组成一篇文章,一篇美妙的文章,让人阅读后为之动容。
但也可以说,作家是‘强大’的,尤其是小说家,他们在构造出一个个人物,让那些人物干什么就干什么,同样可以说,作家手里掌握着一个世界,一个奇妙的世界。
但作家也不是那么容易能够当成的。作为以写作为生的职业,他们必须拥有强大的文学功底;必须有才华;必须有丰富的想象力;必须理解和构造任何的语文描写方法;必须有深不可测的能力,能够在他的作品里建筑一个又一个的`迷宫,引导人们走进去,在里面迷失了方向,又突然找到光明的出口;必须有一对锐利的双眼,能看透这世间种种的一切;还必须懂哲学……诸如此类,作家可以说是百里挑一的人,他们可以且必须为自己而感到骄傲。
但是,现代人却不理解作家这个伟大的职业,在网络上,有的作家甚至因为上传作品慢了,而被鄙视,唾骂。当然,读者这种焦急等待的心情我是可以理解的,也可以因此说被鄙视得最多的就是最好的作品,但是,有些人却似乎做得太过火了。
目前,我在作家这个领域上认为最杰出的人是泰戈尔。很奇怪的是,他与我,竟有几分相似(当然这并不代表我以后也会成为一个好作家),同样擅长写散文,同样会作词作曲,因此,我立志将来要成为第二个他。
导入:
第1段:提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题
As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对
The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句,承上启下
正文:
第2段:First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的`理由
结论:
第3段:In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段,构成\"总—分—总\"结构
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
导入:
第1段:Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
正文:
第2段:There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势
结论:
第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论 オ
1。 头绪分明,脉络清楚
写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心,详略得当
在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:
One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice。 When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言,准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文:
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后:
The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home, he started and crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom, I go home。" said the boy, still crying。
"Don't worry, we'll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house。 With the help of a policeman, they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
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