莆田中考英语学霸作文（一本初中英语满分作文）

莆田中考英语学霸作文【一】

Last Sunday, Jim went out to fly a kite. The kite flew highly in the sky. Jim ran with it happily.

Suddenly the line was broken and the kite flew away. Soon it disappeared. Where was it?

Jim had no idea. So he had to run here and there to look for the kite. At last he saw it on the top of the tree. He tried to get it down. But he couldn’t. He felt sad.

莆田中考英语学霸作文【二】

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第1段：Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题

Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧

正文：

第2段：Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点

Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由

第3段：However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点

Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由

结论：

第4段：Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点オ

莆田中考英语学霸作文【三】

I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.

莆田中考英语学霸作文【四】

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第1段：Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.

正文：

第2段：There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因

第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势

结论：

第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论オ

莆田中考英语学霸作文【五】

通常，北方的冬天是看不到绿色的，叶子早已被送秋的顽童掳走了，只剩下了孤苦伶仃的树枝。随后到来的便是满天飞舞的鹅毛大雪，但在南方，却是另一派新生之景象。

福建莆田便是如此了。莆田是临海城市，与台湾隔海相望，放眼望去视线里装满了蓝色。秋的无情带不走绿的顽强，冬日里绿意浓浓随处可见，本是黯然失色的冬天在这里却透露出无限生机。

看！清晨，雾幽灵般披向大地，调皮地穿梭于树枝间，为绿树披上一层薄纱。从上往下看，淡淡的绿色隐约透出几分神秘感。街道上偶尔驶过孤寂的几辆车，将马路中正在嬉耍的鸟儿惊飞了。而此时的海，是最不寻常的，从高处看，城市就像一块宝石嵌入海边，拨开雾霾湛蓝的海水在旭日的光芒万丈下闪闪发光，就像一块蓝色的玛瑙。许多渔船停靠在海岸，浪花轻轻拍打着岸，几个嬉戏的孩子在暖洋洋的太阳光下已忘却冬日的寒意便赤足跑到岸边，尽管海水有些冰凉但孩子们仍然玩得不亦乐乎，投入了海的怀抱中，尽情的让浪花拍打自己的膝盖和双脚。小船在海的协奏曲下也忍不住和着音乐舞动起来。远处，蔚蓝色的天空与湛蓝色的海水溶为一体。几处小岛的一抹绿色此时也显得分外美丽，莆田的冬日并不寒冷，反而在和风煦日中多了一丝暖意，让阳光照在身上懒洋洋的。

傍晚，走在乡村的田间小路上，夕阳慷慨地照在每个人的身上，顽皮地追逐着人们的影子。当风儿奔跑过时，身边的枇杷树、橄榄枝嘻嘻哈哈起来，边笑边轻摇着婀娜多姿的枝条，金黄的芒果，青绿色的橄榄，此时也争先恐后的成熟。

尽管冬天已到，但冬天的寒意却从未来到。莆田的冬日没有满天飞雪，没有万物沉寂，更没有狂风呼啸的场景。它有的是胜似春天的柔和，夏日炎热后的惬意，以及秋天忙碌后的舒心。它的温暖永远持续，直到春天的来临。

莆田的冬天是多姿多彩的，是四季乐章的结尾，是春季前奏曲，更是乐章的反复记号。你要慢慢读，慢慢品味！

莆田中考英语学霸作文【六】

1。头绪分明，脉络清楚

写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。

2。突出中心，详略得当

在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：

One night a man came to our house and told me， "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。

When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。

I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer， "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"

3。用活语言，准确生动

记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。

原文：

One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。

修改后：

The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。

"Little boy， why are you standing here crying?" they asked。

"I want Mom， I go home。" said the boy， still crying。

"Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。"

And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。

When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。

莆田中考英语学霸作文【七】

美景，我想大家都有看过吧！我今天要讲的是莆田的美景，因为这里的景色实在太美了。暑假期间，爸爸妈妈把我和表妹接到莆田来同住。在一天，我和妈妈、表妹在傍晚的时候到我爸爸的工地去玩，我们无意间发现了一个小山坡，站在那儿，放眼望去，整片林地尽收眼底，那绿油油的树，挺立在土地上，令人深陷其中，更美的是，那泛着层层涟漪的湖面上，印着红彤彤的大圆球，那是什么呢？原来是夕阳倒印在湖面上，通过涟漪，夕阳仿佛在舞动，世界仿佛在舞动，令观者也想跟着动起来。你可能会说：“只有在远处景色才会这么美吧？”那你就大错特错了。

当我走进树林的时候，那美丽比什么都好，晚风吹过树稍，扑向我的脸，树稍的枝叶发出“沙沙”的响声，还不时地传来几声小鸟的叫声。“叽叽喳喳”“沙沙沙”“呼呼呼”，这简直就像一场音乐会，而在我看来，这就是一场优美的音乐会。山坡、湖畔、树林、小鸟、夕阳、石头、小路，在我看来，这些不是东西，它们是和人一样，会说话的，它们的声音是那么美，我觉得没有一个歌唱家唱出的歌会比它们美妙动听。莆田，我会永远记住你的。