在家乡 My Hometown’>我的.家乡有一个小湖,那是我最喜欢的地方之一。我总是和我的朋友一起去湖边,我们经常游泳、玩耍。有时我们会去划船,享受安静的时刻。现在的湖因为污染已经不那么干净了。我意识到保护环境的重要性。
具体描述事件发生的原因、经过和结果
起因+经过+结果
第三段、对事件的分析
分析句1+分析句2+分析3
开篇句:Aboutnine O'clock one evening inMay, my roommate Li Ming was lying in bed, trembling with cold and having a cough.
扩展句:His head was aching so intensely that he kept groaning. His forehead felt very hot.We took his temperature. It was 38.5℃.(展开描述一下事件
结尾句:Is _______? Who can tell ? But ______.
扩展句:1、When ____ , people showed _____ spirit regardless of ____.
2、This kind of care between persons is the very kind giving, unselfish and priceless devotion or sacrifice.
3、And it is just because of this care that we can have warm families, a happy life and a beautiful world.
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