暑假里的一天,晴空万里,耀眼的阳光把我的心照得暖洋洋的,因为我和妈妈即将开启一段难忘的连云港之旅。
坐了5个小时的车程,我们终于来到了期盼已久的连云港。在连云港,我们游览的第一个景点是花果山。因为花果山是齐天大圣孙悟空的老家,所以它成了连云港著名的旅游景点。
刚来到花果山脚下,只见一个头戴紧箍咒、惟妙惟肖的孙悟空头像出现在景点的大门上,这好像是它在捍卫花果山呢!
我们先坐车沿盘山公路开往半山腰。在途中,我突然发现太阳公公悄悄地躲在了阴云背后,天色也变暗了许多,纯净的空气中还弥漫着薄薄的雾,闻起来十分清新。“嗖,嗖”两个黑影从我眼前闪过,我定睛一看,原来是两只顽皮的小猴子好奇地打量着我们,还不时发出忽高忽低的叫声,好像在跟我们打招呼呢!
下了车,我才发现刚才的薄雾越聚越多,很快就变成了浓浓的雾。山上参天的大树被披上了一层乳白色的白纱,倒也增添了几分神秘的色彩。这些雾浓时像拨不开的棉花糖;淡时像轻柔的白纱,给人以仙境般的感觉。忽然,一股风卷着浓雾团团向我们扑面而来,宛如是孙大圣所驾的祥云,来去匆匆。虽然这次天气不太好,但却给我们一种新的视觉效果。
欣赏完一番美景后,我们又来到了孙悟空的水帘洞。其实水帘洞就是小型瀑布,晶莹透亮的水从山顶流下来,形成了一个天然的水帘,真是美不胜收!再看看人们在瀑布下不亦乐乎的样子,我也迫不及待地走向水帘洞。“哗啦,哗啦”的流水从我的头顶冲下来,清凉与刺激的感觉让我不禁呼喊了起来:“哇,好凉快、好刺激啊!”虽然我被冲成了“落汤鸡”,但却冲不走我心中的快乐。
第二天清早,我们来到了江苏最大的岛屿——连岛。连岛是海边的一座岛屿,自然就有了沙滩。沙滩边,沙鸥点点,金色的沙子与湛蓝的大海形成了鲜明的对比,我赤脚步入海滩,松软的沙子把我的脚盖住了,痒痒的,像沙子在给我挠痒痒似的。
海面上,雪白的浪花后浪推着前浪,真是美极了!我迫不及待地走进了大海,可我一靠近,一个调皮的浪头“蹭”一下就打湿了我的裤腿,我便“报复”性地跳过了接下来的浪头。飞溅的水花像一朵朵怒放的花朵在我身边出现。
看着这些水花,我突发奇想:书上说海水是咸的,我为何不亲自尝一下呢?我用手指沾了一下海水放进嘴里。顿时,一种从未有过的味道瞬间灌满了我全身的'每一个细胞和味蕾,我手舞足蹈地欢呼道:“咸的!咸的!
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
今年暑假,我们一家三口开车自驾游,第一站就选择了美丽的海滨城市——连云港。连云港位于江苏省东北部,东临大海,素有“东海第一胜境”之称。
来到连云港后,我们首先前往连岛海滨浴场。在这里,首先映入眼帘的是蔚蓝的大海和金色的沙滩,海滩上有许多海浪冲刷之后留下的贝壳、海螺、海藻,真是美不胜收啊!我们迫不及待地换上游泳衣,套上救生圈就直奔大海。啊!水好凉、浪好大啊!随着海浪的起伏,我感觉自己仿佛变成了一条自由自在游动的小鱼,真是惬意啊!游累了,我们就在海边玩沙子,把沙子堆成各种造型,充分享受着这优美的海边景色。
第二天,我们来到了我早已心驰神往的地方——花果山,这里就是传说中的齐天大圣的老家哟!花果山果然名不虚传,在登山的途中,不断有猴子在我们身边出没,有的在树藤上荡秋千,有的在路边吃着游客扔的零食,看上去非常调皮可爱。这里还有传说中的水帘洞,洞口有一条瀑布飞流而下,溅起片片水花,壮观极了!我们钻进水帘洞,欣赏着里面幽深的景色,仿佛自己变成了美猴王。
在连云港游玩了两天,转眼间就要结束这段愉快的旅程了,我们依依不舍地离开了这优美的海滨城市——连云港。
导入:
第1段:提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题
As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对
The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句,承上启下
正文:
第2段:First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的`理由
结论:
第3段:In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段,构成"总—分—总"结构
1。 头绪分明,脉络清楚
写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心,详略得当
在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:
One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice。 When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言,准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文:
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后:
The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home, he started and crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom, I go home。" said the boy, still crying。
"Don't worry, we'll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house。 With the help of a policeman, they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
这个暑假,我们去连云港旅行。去连云港有两个原因,一是给奶奶过生日,二是因为那儿有花果山,看了《西游记》之后,我就非常想去那儿了。
我们的汽车一路向北上了高速,旁边的农田里还是绿油油的,我猜想:那是不是农民伯伯们刚刚播种的庄稼啊?
到了涟水,我们开进了一条村子里,忽然我妈妈大叫一声:“这是养鹿厂吗?”我一听到养鹿厂就来了精神。我特别好奇,急忙让爸爸把车返回去,看个究竟。到了门口,我仔细一看,三只小鹿站在门口,像极了真的鹿,不过他们不是真的,而是玩具,我们一家人都哈哈大笑起来,妈妈更是连连说:“看错了,看错了,太不好意思了。”
不一会儿,我们就到了爷爷那儿。爷爷待的是北大荒的粮库,这里的房子都是几十米高的,里面装满了国家的储备粮。爷爷真厉害!奶奶早早地就做好了午饭等我们来,吃好饭,我们休息了一会儿,一行六人就向连云港花果山出发了。
到了花果山,天是那么蓝,山是那么高,水是那么碧。我们坐着车,开上了像龙一样的山路,开了大概半个小时,终于到达了山顶。一下车,雾气就扑面而来,就像到了神仙住的地方。一阵阵冷风吹在我身上冷冷的。我、爸爸、还有爷爷爬上了花果山最高的山峰,整个连云港尽收眼底。
下了山,我看见标有“齐天大圣”的棋子随风飘扬,拉着妈妈给我合影。出了花果山,天色已晚,我的肚子饿得咕咕直叫。
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