“梦想永远离不开泪水和汗水,梦想需要脚踏实地”,这是我在观看《开学第一课》时感触最深的一句话。当我看到一个残疾的哥哥站在台上,大屏幕上放着他的故事时,我的泪水在眼眶里打转,他叫刘伟。
10岁时因为点击失去了双臂,这是一件多么令人痛苦的事情啊!但他为了实现自己音乐制作人的梦想,努力学习用脚趾弹钢琴,每天坚持练琴,这与他的泪水和汗水是分不开的,泪水是在一次次失败中产生的,而汗水又是在一次次刻苦练习中产生的,经过不懈的努力,他终于练成了用脚弹钢琴,而且脚趾像手指一样灵活。
当长城脚下传出他优美动听的琴声时,我不禁陷入深深的反思中:跟他比起来,我生活得多么幸福呀!我跟他一样,也需要每天练琴,我只需要花一点点时间就可以练好的曲目,相信大哥哥需要付出比别人几倍甚至百倍的努力!我知道练琴有多难,可哥哥为了梦想,不懈坚持,不懈努力,用自己的泪水和汗水,到达了成功的彼岸,他用自己的毅力证明了自己与正常人一样,我们也要像他一样,坚持梦想,实现梦想!而和他一样双臂截肢的男孩杨孟衡,很喜欢游泳,梦想能登上残奥会的领奖台上,他付出了泪水和汗水,满怀希望地参加了竞选国家队的比赛,可结果离梦想太遥远,他只取得了第九名的成绩,他修改了一下自己的梦想,他决定好好学习。虽然他已经两年没有上学了,跟着大家上高中也很吃力,但因为他的努力与勤奋,最终在今年的高考中以高分考取了中山大学。
事实证明,只要你努力,不论你多么与众不同,通过泪水和汗水,成功永远在你面前。每个人的成功都与泪水和汗水是分不开的,人有了梦想,就要朝着梦想的彼岸去努力,希望永远在前方。让我们设定一个自己的梦想,放飞梦想的雄鹰,一起努力!
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
在括号里填上适当的单位名称,使等号成立。
(1)13()+11()=1()
(2)40()+20()=1()
(3)30()+70()=1()
(4)200()+800()=1()
How to prevent the H7N9?
As is well known,the A flu is spreading throught our country. However, if we negnect it, the deadly H7N9 may cause more infectors,or even more deaths. So what is the most important is that we should take some effective measures to prevent it.They can be listed as follows.
Firstly,it is necessary for you to realize the Avian flu can be prevented if you develop good living habits. For example,you shouldn’t forget to wash your hands before meals.Besides,don’t spit everywhere and try to cover your mouth or nose with paper or hankerchiefs when you have to cough or sneeze.What’s more, remember to wear the mouth-cover if you have to go to the public places, such as the crowded cinemas,supermarkets, buses,where the A flu may spread easily.
Secondly,of course, taking exercise more often and taking good sleep to build your body are wise choices for you to reduce the risk of being infected.
Last but not the least, if you are unlucky to be infected with the slight flu cold, try to stay at home,and take some medicine. Do pay attention to your daily body temperature. If you have a high fever, go to the hospital without delay for further treatment. Make sure you are not expected to come back to school before the cold or flu is cured.
Only by doing like this can you prevent or defeat the A flu in the end.
9月2日晚上,全国2亿多中小学生一起收看了中央电视一台播出的.《开学第一课》。这节课分为四个部分:探索美、创造美、传递美、和谐美。这是一堂不同寻常的课,是这一课让我重新认识了什么是美:美不一定是华丽的外表,内在的美才是真正的美。
在这节课上,给我印象最深的是邓丽老师。以前我也从电视中看过关于她的事迹,昨晚当我通过电视再次看到她时,我又一次被她征服了,邓老师的美深深地感动了我,她不仅年轻貌美,心灵更美。邓丽老师在她大学毕业后,选择了到海拔1800米的环境恶劣的小山村里当了一名支教老师,在那个只有几个教师的学校里,她是唯一的女教师。邓老师除了教孩子们上语文、数学课,她还主动承担起学校里的美术、音乐、舞蹈等其它科目的教学任务。在孩子们心中邓老师是最美的,她无时无刻不在创造着、传递着美。
尤其令人感动的是,邓老师在支教任务圆满完成后,她完全可以选择离开,去条件更好的地方工作。可是,面对山里孩子的极力挽留,看着那一双双渴望的眼睛,邓老师选择了留下,无怨无悔地留下。电视里笑容灿烂的邓老师搂着自己的两个因为担心她会离开而不断流泪的学生,连声说:“从来没想过离开,不必担心这个问题!”这朴素的话语,让我深深感动,也让我心生渴望,如果我能成为邓老师的学生,也许生活会艰苦许多,但我一定会像邓老师一样充满阳光,每时每刻把微笑、把自信、把快乐传递给身边的每一个人!
有人抱怨现在的社会缺少美,其实我们缺少的是发现美的眼睛,缺少的是自己像邓老师一样主动创造美的心灵。
美就在你我身边,让你我都来发现美、传递美、创造美!
常用单位换算
A、1km=( m 1m=( dm 1dm=( cm 1cm=( mm
B、1m=( cm 1m=( mm 1dm=( mm
A、1m2=( dm2 1dm2 =( cm2 1 cm2=( mm2
B、1m2=( cm2 1m2=( mm2 1dm2=( mm2
A、1t=( kg 1kg=( g 1元=( 角 1角=( 分
B、1t=( g 1元=( 分
②知道147cm、1m47cm、1.47m,它们之间的联系和区别。
这三个数量表示的多少都是一样的.。
只不过单位不一样。147厘米和1.47米只有一个单位。像这样只有一个单位的名数叫做( 。
1米47厘米有两个单位。像这样有两个获两个以上单位的名数叫( 。在这个复名数中,米是( 。厘米是( 。
③复名数转化成单名数。
(在复名数中,高级单位前面的数不动,只需要把低级单位前面的数除以进率,最后将结果与高级单位数合并。也可以把低级单位的数不动,用高级单位数乘进率,再把结果与低级单位数合并。
④小数转化成复名数: 小数点前是高级数
小数 复名数
小数点后改成低级数
⑤单名数之间的转换: 进率
高 低
进率
5角=( 元。想:把角改成元,要( 进率( ,只要把5的小数点向左移动( 位。
0.5元=( 角。想:把元改成角,要( 进率( ,只要把5的小数点向右移动( 位。
提高练习
在括号里填上适当的单位名称,使等号成立。
(113( +11( =1( (240( +20( =1(
(330( +70( =1 ( (4200( +800( =1(
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