雅思作文抢救（雅思小作文救急） - 学习作文网

雅思作文抢救【一】

虽然来源于身边社会，但不可让描述方式变的太鸡毛蒜皮，拿不上台面。其实这点非常容易办到，只需要把事件中某一个具体的你，我，他，变成是客观群体，比如说people across the globe, students, they之类的人称即可。

举例的常见表达方式：

for example,/for instance,（后加句子）

Such as/ like （后加词组）

Take... as an example,

A case in point is that......

其次，在举例时还应注意尺度。

1. 应避免使用第一人称和第二人称，为了加强客观性，应将人称写成第三人称。

改正：Those people who raise pets, such as dogs and cats, are more likely to gain happiness and relieve their loneliness.（那些养宠物，例如养猫和养狗的人往往更容易获得快乐并且缓解孤独感）

2. 应避免引用一项调查研究，并同时伴有过多数据。应将数据去掉，用含糊的方法表示。

改正：There is much evidence to show that the number of people smoking has increased at an alarming rate in China. （大量证据表明。。。）

3. 应避免将例子局限在一个国家，尤其是中国。应将范围放至全世界。

改正：Many children around the world like to sit in front of the screen for a long time, leading to their poor eyesight.（在全世界，许多孩子在屏幕前待太久，导致了他们的视力减弱。

“全世界”的表达方式：around the world, all over the world, across the globe

【写作真题】The advocates of international aid believe that countries have a moral obligation to help each other, while the opponents consider it necessary, because money is misspent by the governments that receive it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

【名师献计】This aid is essential to the homeless and useful in helping recipient countries return to their normal state after major disturbances. For example, with the humanitarian relief obtained worldwide on an annual basis, victims of natural disasters (such as tsunami, drought, flood throughout the world can recover rapidly and rebuild their homeland.

雅思作文抢救【二】

2. Many schools demand the students wear uniforms. Some people think that such a practice can undermine their personality and individuality. What is your opinion?

3. Some people believe that pet animals such as cats and dogs cannot be kept in the cities, especially in busy modern cities. Do you agree or disagree?

4. Nowadays, teenagers cause a lot of social problems due to lack of discipline. Some people think that parents should spend more time staying with their children. Do you agree or disagree?

5. Nowadays, many children have their part-time jobs. Some people say that doing part-time jobs is useful, but others argue that children should enjoy their childhood. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

6. Some people think if students want to learn a foreign language, it is advisable for them to learn it in the native countries where the language is actually spoken. Whats your opinion? Give your reasons.

7. In some countries, there are women taking the positions of police officers, while some people believe that women are not suitable to work in the police force. DO you agree or disagree? Write your reasons and give examples in your experience.

雅思作文抢救【三】

在五十年之后，地球的淡水资源已经到来了一个稀零的状态，逐年地减少，要是再这样下去，找不到适合人类的水资源，那么人类的生命就会到此为止。由此可知，人类已经危在旦夕了。

一天中午，屋外的艳阳似火，我正在为淡水资源的问题而感到很烦恼。就在这苦闷的时候，突然，我的电话响了起来。我把电话接到了电脑的屏幕上。原来是世界水资源局长打来的，只见一张十分严峻的`脸出现在了我的面前。"水局长，请问什么事？"我用标准的英语说。"现在，有一项十分严俊和艰巨的任务交给你，作为水利资源这一方面的出色专家，我想你就是最适合的人选。因为世界的淡水资源已经频临灭绝了，所以我们不得不寻找适合我们人类的水资源，今天，从北极那边传来了好消息，在北极的一个冰山里发现了大量的淡水资源，所以，我第一个想到的人选便是你，我相信你也一定会接受这一次挑战，而且还会用你的自信顺利地把这一项任务完成。"你放心吧，水局长，为了挽救我们这个可爱的地球，我一定会全力以赴。"

到了第二天，我带着我的部队来到了最接近北极的地方——荷兰的鹿特丹。这次与我们前行的还有来自法国的"凯塔"号船，俄罗斯的“战斗"号船，最重要的便是我乘坐的中国"巨龙"号船。

因为我们的船都是有最高科技的科技制造的，所以不到三天我们就顺利地来到了神秘的北极。首先，我先是派了上百艘小船探寻这里的情况，在探寻发现没有问题之后，我们便开始了取及淡水资源的工作。我吩咐了五十艘强力艇去击破那上百米后的冰封，在经过半小时之后，这些厚厚的冰层终于被击破了，随后，我便你在中国"巨龙"号上进行一系列的复查系统操作，最后终于完成了采集的任务，接着又派出了上百艘大艇，把北极里的淡水资源装满在了大艇里。因为我们这些英勇的部队战士的到来，北极也因此出现了第一次如此繁忙的景象。

在一个星期之后，我们终于顺利地回到了我们亲爱的地球。地球也及时地恢复了原来的面貌，人类不再为淡水之源而烦恼了，地球又呈现了一个美丽、舒适的状态。