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亲爱的李华:
很高兴收到你的来信。一切都好吗?你上一封信中说你才刚跟你父母从夏威夷度假回来。我真的很开心你能有这个开心的一段旅途。从你跟我对夏威夷的'描述来看,那真的是一个很美的地方。我希望有一天我也能到那里旅游。我最近有点点压力,因为我准备要考期末了。我对英语,语文还有数学很有信心,但是很担心化学。你知道的,我化学一直都不好。我很怕因为化学把这次期考给弄砸了。噢,别想我的烦恼了。圣诞节就要到了,你现在肯定是在忙着准备吧。提前祝你圣诞节快乐。
李
I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
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