测验英语被老师发现的作文(英语作文老师没看直接给了16分)

测验英语被老师发现的作文(英语作文老师没看直接给了16分)

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测验英语被老师发现的作文(英语作文老师没看直接给了16分)

测验英语被老师发现的作文【一】

我不知道,如果考生在作文中说趋利避害是人的本性,遇到这种情况他会选择保全自我,或者考生讲述现实生活中“触动心灵”的选择时,并没有表达出舍己为人的高尚情操,这样的作文会不会被判为“跑题”或中心思想错误?

估计没有多少考生敢这样写,实际上他们别无选择,不管内心是怎样想的,他们都只能乖乖地就范于命题者预设的主题和思路,用崇高、正义、勇敢、无私等冠冕堂皇的辞藻去抒写“毫不利己、专门利人”的动人篇章。

实际上,即使是成年人面对这样生与死、为己与为人的非此即彼的道德考险,也很难作出果敢的选择,何况是18岁上下的高中毕业生?他们中间有多少人切身体验过“触动心灵”的选择?又有多少考生能写出真情实感来?我真的很同情考生们,本来高考的压力就非常大,现在又要他们在闷热的考场里,在短短的时间里化解道德难题,消除道德焦虑,作出“心灵的选择”,这简直是一种近乎残忍的苛求。

在这种情况下,考生们惟一可选择的,就是编造虚假的'道德故事,抒发虚泛的道德情感,表达虚夸的道德理想。我不能说考生们选择舍身取义是错误的,更不能说所有考生说的都是假话,但至少大多数考生是不敢写出自己真实想法的。

回忆一下,近两年的高考作文(全国卷试题,都和伦理道德有关,无论是今年的“心灵的选择”还是去年的选择“诚信”,都是极其艰难的选择,都象是在借高考作文“考验”学生的道德水准,让考生陷入虚拟的道德困境之中。实际上,作文就是作文考试,它首要的任务是考察考生的文字组织能力,作文考试不是政治考试,更不是道德测验。即使政治考试和道德考试,也只能考察一名考生对于书本上的政治知识和道德知识掌握得如何,没有任何一种考试能准确测量一个人实际道德水准的高低。

明明知道考生们的真实想法及实际道德水准与预设的作文主题有差距,却为何硬要“拔苗助长”地设置一些连成年人都回答不了的道德试题?但愿今后的高考作文能回复“言为心声”的本来面目,让考生们真正有话可说,让他们的心灵真正能够自由地选择。

测验英语被老师发现的作文【二】

Dear Mrs Hu,

I am very glad to write to you about what I think in my mind. First of all, I think I have to admit that you have excellect command of English and teach us much knowledge, which is not only English but also lots of thinking on life .

Next,You help us how to see the world and even how to apply for a good job.

But I think what impressed me most was the way you work. You do everything so patiently and carefully, which is highly thought of by all the classmates...All of these leads us to respect you very much.

Well,AS for me,I think full of humor is your another impressed charactistics.You know, I just regard your class as a very enjoying meal. I guess It’s widely acknowledged that all of your students like It very much.

To conclude,I think you are a very good teacher. I hope you will pay more attention to your health and be happy every day.

Sincerely,

Zhao Zhouxing

测验英语被老师发现的作文【三】

苏小弈趴在桌子上努力地演算那些数学题,却怎么也静不下心来。同桌林果果看出了她的异样,于是扬起手中那本封面斑斓的杂志,神情暧昧地说,“丫头啊,有没有兴趣做个心理测验啊?很准的哦”苏小弈没好气,吼她,“一边去,没见本姑娘正在好好学习,天天向上么!”

林果果碰了个钉子,却也没往心里去,她是出了名的心宽体胖。她知道苏小弈身上背着很大很重的包袱,不像她,好像永远都是一副没心没肺的样子。林果果有时候看着苏小弈咬着笔杆皱着眉头却怎么也征服不了那些数学题的样字,心里就毛茸茸的温暖,青春岁月里,一切都以真实而美好的姿态出现。

过了几分钟,苏小弈突然觉得眼前的函数方程式烦透了,于是把那本厚厚的《历届高题荟萃》一摔,咬咬牙,揪起林果果长长的辫子,“今天心情好,就和你玩一把,说,什么测验?”林果果斜着眼鄙视她,“你不是要做祖国的花朵么,不是要好好学习天天向上么,一点都不坚定呐!”苏小弈觉着不太好意思,于是装傻,“叫你说你就说,哪来这么多废话啊?”林果果吐了吐舌头,便开始念那个心理测验。“听着啊,假如给你六样东西让你选,分别是皮手套,杯子,卡通枕头,蓝色玫瑰,西红柿,眼镜,你觉得什么可以代表我?”林果果兴致勃勃地看着苏小弈,扑闪着近视几百度的眼睛,等待着她的回答。苏小弈脸上不动声色,心里却早已乐开了花,这个测验她早在N年前就做过,并且现在还记得格外清楚。

选皮手套代表两人是一般朋友,杯子代表相爱的人,卡通枕头代表贴心的人,蓝色玫瑰代表可信赖的人,而西红柿和眼镜分别代表可做一辈子朋友的人和互相利用的人。苏小弈眨眨眼,他决定逗一下这个梳着小辫子,胖嘟嘟的可爱同桌。

“呵,你戴眼镜的样子很特别呢,我呀,就选眼镜吧”

就选眼镜吧。

可是,你知不知道,选眼镜就意味着我俩是互相利用的人。那些曾经以为细碎而又美好的事情就那么砰地一声碎掉了。原来,你一直是利用我的人。

苏小弈心里偷笑的`正欢,却没看到林果果猛然失色的花容。

林果果猛地吸了口气,努力扬扬嘴角,把那本色彩斑斓的杂志丢到窗外,又拍拍苏小弈的脑袋说,“丫头啊,你可真会选呢,看来我们真是有缘啊,书上说我们是一辈子的朋友呢!”

苏小弈呆了半晌,她以为林果果一定会哇哇大叫的跟她拼命,然后赌气地和她绝交,这样才符合剧情么。她就想,林果果,这个胖丫头,是不是也已经长大。她想告诉林果果,人可以信命,却不能认命,让那些劳什子心理测验见鬼去吧,那些该死的数学题终究会被她征服,而她和林果果却真的真的可以做一辈子的朋友。

测验英语被老师发现的作文【四】

李老师是我的语文老师。她大约三十岁。她非常漂亮和年轻。她的头发是棕色的卷发。

Miss Li always wears a blue coat . I think her favourite colour will be blue .

李小姐总是穿着一件蓝色的外套。我认为她最喜欢的颜色是蓝色的。

Miss Li is very friendly and kindly .Her classes are very interesting ,we all like to have Chinese class .

李小姐是非常友好和善良。她的`课很有趣,我们都喜欢上语文课。

She always smiles when she speak to us .Sometimes she is very strict with us,when we make a mistake,she often makes us stand up .

她总是微笑的时候,她对我们说的。有时候她对我们非常严厉,当我们犯了错误时,她经常让我们站起来。

Miss Li often sticks to have lessons when she is ill , She looked weak,but still beautiful .

李小姐常常上课时,她病了,她看起来很虚弱,但依然美丽。

Miss Li love us very much, she teaches us so carefully .I think she is a good teacher. We all love her,too .

李老师很爱我们,她非常细心的教我们。我认为她是个好老师。我们都爱她。

I think teachers are like candles , giving off light for others by burning themselves 。

我想,老师就像蜡烛,照亮别人燃烧自己。

测验英语被老师发现的作文【五】

Dear Mr Guan,

How time flies. In the blink of an eye,the semester has been on for almost three months ,and you also teach our English for almost three months.Maybe you can’t call my name ,but you have a deep impression on me.

It's my honour to get the chance to write to you. "Approachable and amiable " is my first impression to you, because you always keeps smiling. You always arrive at the classroom early, from which we could imply that you are a diligent man with regular habit. In general, when we are professional courses, the atmosphere of the class have a

little bit nervous, boring.But in your class,we feel very relaxed. And if we knew the answers to the questions,we can enthusiastically answer,without worrying about making mistakes.When learning a new unit,you will let us to prepare for a ppt or a direct speaking which we can express our own ideas and interact with other students more frequently.At first,we feel embarrassed ang don’t have enough courage.But under the teacher's encouragement step by step,we make enough preparations to have positive statements.

I remember that you have said one thing that a lovelorn senior in department of history talked with you and you encouraged him to be a doctor for further education.I don’t know wether the senior will be a doctor or not,but I must study hard and deep to be a doctor. I was always worrying about that my boyfriend will break up with me before.Through this,I know that as long as you ability is strong,there is no necessary to worry about it. We appreciate you for not only improving the ability of our English ,but also teaching us some truths with your personal experience. Nous vous remercions enseignants.

Life's a journey, you shine our light of hope, enrich our minds, adding to our intelligence. At last, I hope everything goes well with you. Please give my best regards to your family.

Sincerely yours,

xxx

测验英语被老师发现的作文【六】

Dear MS Hu,

It's my honor to get the chance to write to you. Nowadays, people seldom write letters, instead, they make a call or send a SMS. However, in some circumstance, writing letters is indispensable.

In the class, you know well how to keep the class active. You've got such an open mind that you can keep leading us to talk about the topic during the whole class. I learned not only the listening and writing skills but also the presentation skills as well as the knowledge of the concerned areas.

In addition, It seems that although I have been studying English during the last many years, I can’t speaking English fluently and precisely like the local people. Would you like to give me some suggestions on how to pronounce English like local people?

Yours sincerely,

Xia Wenjie

测验英语被老师发现的作文【七】

dear teacher:

this is a special day, we have presented a bouquet of flowers, gifts to the world of your peaches and plums, spectrum a ode to joy, for your eyes flicker disperse tired, for you loosen the amount of wrinkled patterns.

the singing is a blessing: teacher, happy holidays! insatiable in learning, be tireless in teaching, peaches and plums fragrance, their music is happy and harmonious. i wish you a happy holiday! not only in the teachers day today, there is a tomorrow, the day after tomorrow, tai houtian, i wish your life every day, every minutes, every second, the surface is always the same smile.

the singing is concerned about: the teacher, you worked hard! your use of sweat, nurturing the tender shoots of spring have just ground-breaking. your care is like the genial spring, warm our hearts and minds. let us protect your healthy growth, formed in the autumn fruit.

lifes journey, you shine our light of hope, eich our minds, adding to our intelligence.

thank you, teacher! i wish you healthy forever! happy! happiness!

测验英语被老师发现的作文【八】

Dear Miss Wang:

I am writing to express my sincere gratitude for your help in my study. Without your help , my study would not be the top three in my class. It was you who always standed by me when I am fall. You pointed my mistakes and told me how to make them right. You always worked tirelessly to train my patience.Your continuous encouragement is my greatest motivation.

I sincerely hope that you can have a good health and stay happy. In addition, I wonder if you can pay a lot of attention to your health, get more rest.

Again, I sincerely thank you for your help!

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