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高中生英语作文练习册【一】

In the 21st century, the talent quality of hardworkingand dependable is no longer the only thing that the enterprise required. Infact, those two qualities are the basic constitution, now the requirement oftalent is more comprehensive. The perspective to define a talent is differentnow.

在21世纪，人才品质中的勤奋和踏实不再是企业唯一要求的品质了。事实上，这两个品质只是基本的个体素质。现在的人才要求更加全面。定义人才的视角也不一样了。

First,the enterprise prefers the one who could combine innovate and practice. Basically,the value comes from innovate, but only after combined with the innovation andpractice, can the value work the maximal effect. We can not be restricted tothe repetitive tasks. We should always keep creating new ideas.

第一，企业喜欢能把创新和实践结合起来的人。从基本上说，价值源于创新，但只有把创新与实践结合起来，价值才能发挥最大的成效。我们不能局限于重复的工作中，我们应当时时想着创造新的点子。

Second,the enterprise is more fancy the cross-domain talent. 21st century isthe century that combines different field and industry. The modern society andenterprise is no only require specializing to the professional field, but alsoto know about the relevant major and field, combine them and solved theproblems effective.

第二，企业更喜欢跨领域人才。21世纪是结合不同学科，不同产业的世纪。现代社会和现代企业不仅仅要在某个专业领域有造诣，还要知道相关的专业和领域，结合它们，有效地解决问题。

Finally,the IQ, EQ, SQ issue. When we define one man is successful or not, we do notlook into his academic record or intelligence quotient (IQ, but the balance developmentof intelligence quotient, emotional quotient and spiritual quotient.

最后，IQ，EQ，SQ的问题。当我们定义一个人成功与否，我们不仅仅看他学科成绩和智商，二世要看智商，情商，灵商的均衡发展。

Tosum up, if we want to survive in this competitive society, we need a comprehensivedevelopment to adapt to the requirement of the modern enterprise, or we willeliminated by the society.

总之，如果我们要在这竞争激烈的社会中生存，我们需要全面地发展去适应现代企业的要求，不然我们就会被社会淘汰。

高中生英语作文练习册【二】

There are a small number of people called “the moonlight clan” in our society, who always run out of their income each month and have no plan to save money. Concerning with this kind of consumption conception, some consider it as a fashion while other oppose it.

在我们的社会中有一小部分人叫“月光族”，他们每个月总是没有钱剩余也没有存钱的计划。关于这种消费观念，有人认为是时尚而其他则持反对态度。

Those who are in favor of this kind of consumption conception point out that being moonlight clan let them have more chances to enjoy lives and live in a high-quality life. However, the opponents argue that it is not a kind of rational conception because those called “the moonlight clan” may have no ability to cope with their rainy day. In addition, this kind of consumption habit put a premium on extravagance and waste to some extent.

那些支持这种消费观念的人指出成为月光族让他们有更多的机会享受生活，过高质量的生活。然而，反对者则认为那不是理性的概念，因为那些所谓的“月光族”在他们低迷的时候可能没有能力应付。此外，这种消费习惯在某种程度上形成了奢侈浪费。

Taking the two opinions into consideration, I am inclined to agree with the latter one. From my point of view, the life of the moonlight clan is more luxurious or high-quality but they may be lack of sense of security, especially in their rainy day. Therefore, I still advocate that all of us should keep some money at any time so that we will not be too difficult in our rainy day.

考虑到以上两个观点，我倾向于同意后者。从我的角度来看，月光族的生活更豪华或质量更高但是他们也许会缺乏安全感，尤其是低迷的时候。因此，我仍然认为我们所有人在任何时候都应该存一些钱，这样在困难的时候就不会过得太艰辛。

高中生英语作文练习册【三】

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一简述

1. 当过去分词在句末时，不管有无逗号，都是就近修饰名词;

2.现在分词在句末时，无逗号是就近修饰的名词的定语；

3.当现在分词在句尾且前有逗号时,修饰邻近句子的\'主语,做主语的伴随状语或做句子的伴随结果.因此不能用句尾现在分词修饰前面句尾的名词. 所以OG127说C选项:"the phrasehaving been assigned...is uncertain in reference,making the sentence unclear."-->就是说这个现在分词本来是应该修饰前面的employee的,却变成了修饰主语governments了. (另外在GMAT里,having been done的用法错误,应直接用done

避免上述错误的方法:所修饰的名词在句尾用定语从句修饰--OG127正确选项B (而不用加逗号的现在分词修饰.其实分词是定语从句的省略形式,在句中无逗号分词(注意是无逗号的,有逗号的在句中有歧义就比定语从句简洁还有 OG120也是同样道理:修饰句尾名词,正确选项A用定语从句.E选项的句尾现在分词错误.

4.当现在/过去分词在句中且前没有逗号,修饰前面紧邻名词;

5.当现在/过去分词在句中且前后都有逗号,有歧义:1修饰前面紧邻的名词,2向后修饰后面句子的主语.

这种结构在GMAT肯定错,如果修饰某句主语,则避免将该分词置于以名词结尾的句后.避免方式:1用定语从句/介词短语明确修饰对象.2可将分词提到句首,所修饰主语及所在句子紧跟其后-->形成句首分词修饰句子主语.见OG179

6.在前面有多个名词如名词1+介词+名词2结构,而要用分词修饰名词1时,为避免歧义要重复名词1即用同位语结构:名词1+介词+名词2,名词1+分词.见OG208

二．

1、doing/done,SVO 注意分词的逻辑主语与S一致

2、介词/连词+doing/done,SVO 也要注意分词逻辑主语与S一致

3、S,doing/done,V 分词作定语修饰主语（前后一对逗号隔开，相当于定语从句）

注意：如果出现: “名词,doing,名词”，则会有分词前后的修饰歧义，如179DE，245E

4、SVO doing 分词作定语修饰主语，如 96AC，121C，146E，222A，234B，237E

5、SVO,doing

A、分词优先作状语

1）修饰主语（与分词在句首一样，注意逻辑主语），如 33B，39C，44B，120E，163D，256B

2）修饰主句动作，如 78BD，119B，154A，259A

B、其次作定语，但没有定语从句清晰，会有修饰歧义，如 253DE，（“，including”除外 249）

6、SVO done 分词作定语修饰O（同4）

7、SVO,done

A、分词作状语修饰S，如大全558

B、分词作定语修饰O，如 127A（分词相当于形容词 253A）

some people base on sth是绝对错误的。但是有sb. base sth. on sth.的用法. 三．

1.SVO+doing,无逗号的情况下doing是针对宾语的动作,96AC(OG says : assuring针对主语有问题，121C，146E，222A(OG says: enabling很好的修饰了宾语，234B，237E -------以上证明了ets的偏好,svo+doing修饰主语是模糊的,修饰宾语是清晰的

2.SVO, doing有逗号,33B，39C(Og says:protecting很好的

解释了主语的行为，44B，120E(Og says:错误选项有可能混淆的指代主语而不是逻辑上正确的宾语，163D(Og says:sleeping正确的修饰了主语，256B --------以上证明了在Og中svo,doing的doing多指代主语

3.svo,doing有逗号,78BD(doing指代了前面整个句子的行为，119B(同前，154A(*，259A(同前------------以上证明了Og中svo,doing的doing多指代前面的整个句子

四．例子

产生participle phrases原点是为了to reduce wordiness by replacing longer adverbial or relative clauses，另外要强调的重要讯息不会写成participle phrases，因为分词修饰语属于次等地位(The

modifier is subordinate to the main clause。也就是说A….and B…(A与B一样重要，如果A…V..,B...Ving (就重要性而言A>B

简单一句：分词构句是主要句子的意义延伸。

目前我看到有几种句意：

1. 因果(★★★★★

2. 补述：解释某事(★★★、描述状态并列或伴随(★★、纯举例

participle

phrases如此具困扰性是因为可以改写的来源多

1.由adj. clauses (如who, which开头可改写成分词词组。考题中可分形容词子句限制性、非限制性改分词的考法。

2. 副词子句(有连接词开头的也可改分词词组，所以有因果关系或时间关系，单纯就时间关系看，可以有先后或同时，会有动作是伴随或是并列关系。

3.当三个以上的动词用and相连时，后面的部分也改写成分词(V, Ving... and Ving...。

我看过的说法中，觉得Manhatan GMAT备考网站，里面指导员所讲的分词概念不错，但是他的目的在卖书，所以讲的真的不多。

1.当分词构句放句首，修饰后面句子的主词。前几天看到有人发帖的整理，讲到分词在句首，表示此动作先于主要句子的动作，讲的真好。

2.当分词构句不放在句首时:

there's NO COMMA before a participle, then the participle creates an adjective phrase that modifies the noun immediately

preceding.

there's a COMMA before a participle, then the participle creates an adverb phrase that modifies the action of the preceding

clause.

PS：逗号的产生可能是插入语，遇到插入语可以跳过不看，不代表分词修饰这个插入语。

判断上抓前句的动词与主词，如果用中文想就是「此主体这个动作的行为导致或表示.....」(to modify the action of。而且不可以只有思考主词或动词。如果遇到前句有数个动词，以找最近的动词为主，譬如V1 to V2，分词构句修饰V2

participle (V-ing after the comma can not modify the subject of the preceding clause's

noun.

這個考「什么情况下不可以改成分词构句?」除了需要有对等连接词的句子，不可改分词构句，因为句意重要性会被改变外，

打逗号的Ving分词，无法修饰逗号之前的名词，所以非限制的形容词子句最好不要改分词Ving构句(有7個考題，但是Ved分词例外(有两个考题。

高中生英语作文练习册【四】

按要求改写句子知识点梳理

一、概述

按要求改写句子主要考查学生对句子结构的掌握以及用不同句型表达同一意思的能力。考查所涉及到的句子类型有一般疑问句、否定句、反意疑问句、选择疑问句、对划线部分提问、感叹句、保持原句意思、合并成一句、简单句和复合句之间的互换以及改为被动语态等。

二、解题时需注意的几个要点

1、时态：不同的时态相对应的助动词

一般现在时：谓语动词用原形（主语为第三人称单数时，动词加s或es，变否定句、疑问句时助动词为do或does）

一般过去时：谓语动词用过去式，变否定句、疑问句时助动词为did.

现在完成时：助动词have/has+动词的过去分词

过去完成时：助动词had+动词的过去分词

一般将来时：will/be going to +动词原形

过去将来时：would/was or were going to +动词原形

现在进行时：am/is/are＋动词的现在分词

过去进行时：was/were＋动词的现在分词

2、语态：主动语态变为被动语态的谓语结构

一般现在时：am/is/are＋动词的过去分词

一般过去时：was/were+动词的过去分词

一般将来时：will be+动词的过去分词

情态动词：can/may/must/need等情态动词＋be++动词的过去分词

3、改反意疑问句时注意hardly, never, seldom, few, little, no等词表达的是否定意义，变反意疑问句时用肯定形式。

4、在合并句子时，有些连词如not only…but also…, neither…nor…, either…or…是就近原则，连接两个主语时动词形式取决于与动词邻近的主语。而both…and…连接两个主语时,主语是复数。

5、简单句和复合句之间的互换常见的有：带有疑问词的宾语从句改为特殊疑问词＋to＋动词原形的不定式；结果状语从句so…that…改为enough to或too…to…的简单句。

6、保持原句意思改写句子时注意时态不变。

三、习题

练习一

1. We do our homework every evening. （改为否定句）

We _________ ________ our homework every evening. 对划线部分提问

________ ________ do they have a class meeting?

3. She could hardly understand this passage. (改为反意疑问句

She could hardly understand this passage, _________ __________?

4.The manager told him how to get useful information. (改为否定句

The manager _________ _________ him how to get useful information.

5. Tom’s sister can speak English and Japanese very well. (改为反意疑问句

Tom’s sister can speak English and Japanese very well, _________ _________?

对划线部分提问

_________ _________ he live twenty years ago?

7. Sam does some cleaning in the morning. (改为否定句

Sam _________ do _________ cleaning in the morning.

对划线部分提问

_________ _________ have the students worked on the survey?

9. Your father used to ride a bike. （改成反意问句）

Your father used to ride a bike, _______ ________? （对划线提问）

__________ ___________ the population of Germany?

11. Mr. Wang washes his car once a month. （改为一般疑问句）

Mr. Wang (对划线部分提问

will Susan come back from Athens?

13. My friends lost their way when they were traveling in Hong Kong. (改为一般疑问句

________ your friends ________ their way when they were traveling in Hong Kong?

14. 对划线部分提问

________ ________ has Yao Ming been in the Rocket Team?

15. She put the digital camera on the bed just now. (改为否定句

She _________ _________ the digital camera on the bed just now.

16. Mark's flown to Hainan Island for winter holidays. (改为反意疑问句

Mark's flown to Hainan Island for winter holidays, _________ _________?

(专辑. (划线部分提问

_________ did Super Girl Zhou Bichang _________ to Vienna?

18. I’ve already saved enough money to buy a new car. (改为否定句

I ________ saved enough money to buy a car ________.

19. Lily used to have long straight hair. (改为反意疑问句

Lily used to have long straight hair, ________ ________?

20. He has already been there .(改为一般疑问句

__________ he been there __________?

21.They decided that they wouldn't have the picnic because of the bad weather. (改为简单句

They decided __________ _________ have the picnic because of the bad

weather.

22. The English people hardly ever shake hands between the strangers .( 改为反意疑问句

The English people hardly ever shake hands between the strangers, __________ __________?

23. They grew some sunflowers in their garden last year.（改为否定句）

They __________ __________ any sunflowers in their garden last year.

24. Jane drinks milk every morning.（改为一般疑问句）

_________ Jane ___________ milk every morning? （就划线部分提问）

___________ map ___________ to Class 4?

26. You can choose only one of the two: a mini-TV or a DVD player. (改为选择疑问句

you want a mini-TV a DVD player?

27. That detective film is so amazing. （改为感叹句）

___________ ___________ amazing detective film!

28. He has some money left.（改成否定句）

He money left.

29. （划线部分提问）

do the members of the film society meet?

30. His mother knew why the little boy was unhappy all day. (改为一般疑问句

_______ his mother _______ why the boy was unhappy all day?

31. He looks very funny with that hat on. (改为感叹句

_______ _______ he looks with that hat on!. 对划线部分提问

_______ _______ they build this factory?

33. I have already finished the test paper.（改为否定句）

I ________ finished the test paper ________.

34. Johnson denied cheating in the competition.（改为反意疑问句）

Johnson denied cheating in the competition, ________ ________? （对划线部分提问） ________ ________ the story need to be funny?

36. Sam does some cleaning in the morning. (改为否定句

Sam _________ do _________ cleaning in the morning.

对划线部分提问 _________ _________ have the students worked on the survey?

38. （对划线部分提问） _________ _________ has he been a top fashion designer?

39. 对划线部分提问

________ ________ will they move into the new school?

40. to go to the People’s Square by underground. (对划线部分提问

________ _______ did it take you to go to the People’s Square by underground?

练习二：

1. Gold is less valuable than diamond. (保持句意不变

Gold is ________ ________ valuable as diamond.

2. He told the children to go and watch his tank of Ghost fish. (改为被动语态 The children ________ ________ to go and watch his tank of Ghost fish.

3. Unless I have a quiet room, I cannot do any work. （保持句意不变）

I cannot do any work ________ I _________ have a quiet room.

4. The manager arrived here a few minutes ago. （保持句意不变）

The manager has _________here ________ a few minutes.

5. They will send him to work in Japan for one year. (改为被动语态

He will ________ _________ to work in Japan for one year.

6. The words on the notice board are very small. I can’t see them clearly.(保持句子原意

The words on the notice board are small I can’t see them

clearly.

7. We can solve the problems with the help of the teacher. (改为被动语态 The problems can _________ _________ with the help of the teacher.

8. We can’t finish the work in such a short time. (保持原句意思

It’s _________ _________ us to finish the work in such a short time.

9. We must keep the noise under 50 dbs.(分贝（改成被动语态）

The noise must ________ _______ under 50 dbs here.

10. Mike doesn’t like classical music. Billy doesn’t either. （合并成一句） _________ Mike nor Billy __________ classical music.

11. The room is so dirty that we can’t live in it.（保持句意不变）

The room isn’t __________ _________ for us to live in.

12. No one knows when we will start tomorrow. （保持原句意思）

No one knows start tomorrow.

13. The Smiths will invite the professor to take part in the party. (改成被动语态 to take part in the party by the Smiths.

14. If you are not brave, you’ll lose your last chance.（保持原句意思）

you are ’ll lose your last chance.

15. They store much information in the computer. (改成被动语态

Much information ________ ________ in the computer.

16. Don’t throw rubbish here and there. Our teacher said to us. (合并为一句

Our teacher told us ________ ________ throw rubbish here and there.

17. If John doesn’t apologize for what he did, I will tell the teacher about his bad behavior.

（保持原句意思）

_______ John _______ for what he did, I will tell the teacher about his bad behavior.

18. I don't know where we can grow vegetables in the city. (改为简单句 I don't know _________ _________ grow vegetables in the city.

19. People used to enjoy themselves chatting on MSN when it worked well. (保持句意基本不变

People used to _________ a lot of _________ chatting on MSN when it worked well.

20. If you don’t improve your handwriting, you will lose marks in the exam. (合成同义句

You will lose marks in the exam ________ you ________ your handwriting.

21. To go fishing is fun. （句意不变）

_____ is fun _____ ______ fishing.

22. Dick was so short that he couldn’t touch the top of the bookshelf.（保持句意基本不变）

Dick wasn’t __________ __________ to reach the top of the bookshelf.

23. “Can I borrow your bike for a while or not?”（保持句意基本不变）

Tom asked his sister __________ he __________ borrow her bike or not for a while.

24. The couple couldn’t decide which flat they should choose at first. （保持原句意

思）

The couple couldn’t decide which flat at first.

25. Meaningless information is difficult for the little boy to remember. （保持原句意思）

is difficult for the little boy remember meaningless information.

26. People throw away millions of plastic bags in our city every day. （改成被动语态）

Millions of plastic bags away in our city.

27. She was so careless that she couldn’t find the mistakes in her test paper. (保持句意基本不变

She was _______ _______ to find the mistakes in her test paper.

28. We will hold the next Olympic Games in Beijing in 2008.（改为被动语态）

The next Olympic Games will _______ _______ in Beijing in 2008.

29. The elderly man pushed the birds into the river.（改为被动语态）

The birds ________ ________ into the river by the elderly man.

30. Dolphins are so clever that they can follow the instructions.（保持句意基本不变） Dolphins are ________ ________ to follow the instructions.

31. We can’t finish the work in such a short time. (保持原句意思

It’s _________ _________ us to finish the work in such a short time.

32. They invited the astronaut and his wife to the party on Christmas Eve.(改为被动语态

The astronaut and his wife _________ _________ to the party on Christmas Eve.

33. The little girl didn’t go to bed unless the grandmother told her a story. (保持句意基本不变

The little girl didn’t go to bed _________ the grandmother _________ tell her a story.

34. The plane is so big that it can carry 300 passengers at one time. （改为简单句）

The plane is big _________ _________ carry 300 passengers at one time.

35. Did they know the answer to the question? Ididn’t know… (合并为一句 I didn’t know ________ they had ________ the answer to the question.

Keys

练习一

1. don’t do 2. How often 3.could she 4.didn’t tell 5.can’t she

6.where did 7.doesn’t any 8.How long 9.didn’t he 10.What is

高中生英语作文练习册【五】

灯塔法”是指高瞻远瞩，其光亮不只照脚下一片，还可远及周围相当的距离。即不只懂一点写作知识，而且对文学和其他门类的艺术也都熟悉，对哲学、社会科学、自然科学都有涉猎，古今中外都有研究。这样就不是手握灯笼只照眼前，而是四野八荒了了在目，尽可纵横驰骋；群峰迭起，逶迤不绝，随时都可借来他山之石。

高中生英语作文练习册【六】

该生语言基本顺畅，亦有真实感受，扣住了本次作文要求的关键词语——“我”、“翅膀”，可是它又是一篇颇为典型的考场空泛之作，因为老师读完后，不禁为他（她）今年的高考语文作文分数担忧。原因有：

其一，下笔前心中没有规划，想到哪儿写到哪儿，凑够800字，大功告成，或许对分数也没有具体的期待；如此作文中心难以突出；

其二，不懂剪辑素材，因为思想的散乱而使作文中旁逸斜出的文字太多，跳跃性的思维方式使语言碎片化、夸饰化、娱乐化，如此作文内容难说充实；

其三，虽然该生选材（父亲的送学、我的复读）大有可做，但是脑中一团乱麻，条理不清也是“理固宜然”；

如果他（她）扣住六年前父亲的送学、一年来复读的`不易，将这其中感悟到的“希望”“力量”以具体的细节生动地展现，删掉旁枝杂叶，最后再交代这“希望”“力量”是父母送与子女的羽翼，让他们在生活的艰难中闯出一片天地，这种深沉的爱谱写了生生不息的赞歌，作文分数该是另一个档次了。

2．开学以来的随笔和大作文反映出来的问题：

①立意浅俗，情感单薄；

②面面俱到，没有角度；

③只见概述、不见细节；

④选材俗套、没有“独我”

⑤匠气十足、难求突破

⑥文体不明、情感泛滥

“将一些琐屑的没有意思的事故随便填成一篇，以创作丰富自乐。”——鲁迅

如：写自己能从呱呱坠地粗线条一直拉到15岁；写爱好，能把从小到大的兴趣班（放弃的、坚持的、硬逼着的、感兴趣的等等）一一道来；叙事只停留于事件本身（如：夜遇劫匪，“我”吓得怕死；帮助小孩子被孩子的妈妈误会，感叹：今天真倒霉；或者就是痛说成长史，把自己骂个狗血喷头；撷取记忆中的画面，只剩下初三为搏功名而长跑、做题，功利心污染了立意）；在“难忘的记忆”中“为赋新词强说愁”，常见得伤感的泪水让少年男女变得孱弱，情感在雷同虚构和无病***中走向苍白；写作在应试训练中成为流水线上的同一规格，上面还都打着“货真价实”“训练有素”的标签；当学生的语言变得愈加华丽丽，我们却看不到有性格的主体、对自身生活的洞察、对精神层面的追思……

我们语文老师有责任亦应该让孩子们把荡漾在心底最柔软的丝丝缕缕心甘情愿地编织成有个性的华章，让他们有创作的习惯、思考的深度、生活的热情和美好的记忆，而我们收获为师的喜悦和骄傲。

3．教师的反思——万丈高楼平地起

激发学生的写作热情要从高一开始；

规范学生的写作章法要从高一开始；

引导学生的思想认识要从高一开始；

指导学生的写作技法要大盘明晰、具体而微；

整合所有素材、读写结合探求新天地，教师要成长为“灯塔”一般的巨人。

我们要扎下深深的生活的根须，才能培植起自己的大树；要架起高高的知识的灯塔，才能使之舟冲出死寂的港湾，搏风击浪，扬帆远航。

——梁衡《黑箱·灯笼·灯塔》

我们任重道远，唯有埋头苦干！慧心巧干！

4．简单介绍梁衡《黑箱·灯笼·灯塔》

我认为写有三法，简称之：黑箱、灯笼、灯塔。