初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:
互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:
从小就很喜欢绘画。
小时候,手捏蜡笔,快乐的在白纸上涂来涂去,画一个红红的太阳,再画几朵五颜六色的小花,最后,画一个扎着马尾辫的.小女孩正望着太阳傻傻的笑着。在我眼里,那是一幅很美的画,虽然太阳并不像现在画的那样可爱,也不像课本里那样圆圆的。但却有一种孩童般的纯真感。(小时候画的太阳就像是一个椭圆的鸭蛋,不过也没有人说太阳一定得是圆圆的吧!)
长大后,上了一年级。因为小时候上了绘画班,所以画的就好看一些。还当上了美术课代表,可最后却因为给老师交作业太晚被换掉了,现在想想,可真遗憾!
之后,爸爸妈妈让我去了高老师家里画画,拿着铅笔,一遍又一遍的修改着老师让我画的南瓜、海马,直到老师满意了,我才开始用老师教我的方法,把油画棒接色涂,这样效果很好,我也学会了绘画的很多种方法。刚开始很不喜欢这种麻烦的画法,心里总是想:这样涂多麻烦,涂单色多简单。可后来,终于发现,用老师的方法涂出来真的很漂亮诶。
不过我最喜欢的就是画水粉画。在我学水粉画的第一节课时,我认识了我的水粉老师,潘老师。我对水粉充满了好奇心,心想:水粉画是怎样的呢?我能画出来吗?接着,老师让我们拿出颜料和排笔,开始画画。我先把颜料挤出来,用笔蘸着就画,可是这笔好像不听我的话,在纸上画的干***,一点也不好看,可再看看潘老师的范画,天是那么的蓝,花是那么的红,十分漂亮。我一赌气,把笔扔向一边,干脆不画了。潘老师走了过来,亲切地说:“怎么了?遇到什么困难了?”我点了点头。潘老师又看了看我的画,顿时明白了,说:“怎么能遇到一点小困难就退缩、逃避呢!”潘老师拿起我的笔,先用笔蘸了一下水,再蘸了一下颜料,在纸上画了起来,那笔在潘老师手里变得乖巧起来,画起画来如行云流水,潘老师说:“这样不就行了!照着我刚才那样试一试。”我学着潘老师刚才那样:先用笔蘸一下水,再蘸一下颜料,在纸上画了几笔,嘿!果然不错,潘老师笑了笑,我也笑了笑。
我想绘画是伴我成长的最好的朋友,它带给我快乐,也让我懂得要勇敢的面对困难,不要退缩,不要逃避。绘画带给了我很多,它是我最好的朋友。
拿起一支笔,展开一张纸,手起笔落,用心去描绘,等待一幅画作的产生。
从幼儿园起,不知为什么,我就对绘画产生了强烈的兴趣。下课回家,既不玩玩具也不看电视,拿出颜料和纸,画粉色的.南瓜,画蓝色的小狗。每一张画都是那么富有童趣,那么可爱。也不说画得有多好看,但我一直为自己的画自豪。周末在家,也只是偶尔看看电视。看完,再拿纸,拿油画棒,把自己心中最喜欢的人物描绘在纸上。
老师说我画画非常认真,在涂颜色时,从来不涂到轮廓外边。
上小学后,在白纸上涂涂画画的时间一下子少了很多,更多的时间会用在家庭作业和看电视上。在外面的培训班也忽地多了起来,任务也多了起来,包括绘画的培训班。后来我在学校艺术节上绘画得了一等奖,只能说,我画得比较一帆风顺。
三、四年级时,可能是因为作业比较多、比较忙的原因,我逐渐对画画失去了兴趣,除了学校里的美术课和培训班,其他时间我都将画具丢在了一边,然后把时间花在看电视上。画具上积了一层薄薄的灰尘。随着时间的推移,美术上开始使用彩铅、水粉、水墨画工具了。曾经的笔和纸就这样孤单地被我“丢弃”了。
在家里的一次大扫除中,那些画具又被整理出来了。奶奶说我必须要练一练绘画了,单单在学校或培训班里画怎么行呢?我以前不是很喜欢画画吗?现在怎么一点也不感兴趣了?面对奶奶一连串的提问,我只是尴尬地笑了笑,并没有做出什么反应。画具依然躺在原位,等待寂寞的来临。
五年级了,第一节美术课,老师忽然要求每个人一个星期画5张速写,看到什么画什么。哦——速写呀!我在培训班可没少画,画速写要用画具里那种特制的笔!
回到家里,急忙开始翻找起来。咦?画具呢?我的画具呢?奶奶见了我这着急样,微笑着说道,我把它放在一个它该待的位置上了。往我的书桌上一望,那些东西正端端正正地在那里等我了。轻轻地拂去上面的灰尘,岁月并没有在上面留下什么痕迹。拿起画笔,轻轻描绘,用心去画。画出的线条是如此流畅,这种感觉又是如此的熟悉,停在笔尖的灵感顿时在纸上涌现出来。就好像是和童年的小伙伴重逢,用纸和笔在诉说一段故事。
笔停,画纸上出现的是——我的童年。
大家好!我是童语谣,短短的头发,亮亮的眼睛,挺挺的鼻子,翘翘的嘴巴,你们一定以为我是个男孩子吧!其实我是女生——可爱的女生,一笑起来,还有两个浅浅的酒窝呢!
别看我外表很调皮,我可是心灵手巧的哦!在班上我的绘画和手工制作数一 数二的,我是班里的美术课代表,也是老师的得力小助手。三年级的时候我已经取得了儿童画的最高级别了。我还经常参加校内外、省市及全国的一些美术绘画(包括电脑绘画、电脑flash制作的大赛,得了不少奖,比如在第一届中国青少年信息科学技术应用与创新大赛总决赛中获得了银奖。最近我还上了中国教育频道的动漫专访节目呢!你上网搜索一下“童语谣”就可以看到我的一些作品,也就可以更了解我啦。
因此,我在班上有个绰号叫“美术小能手”,大家都说我是天生的绘画料子。我非常喜欢绘画,每次作画,我就会两眼放光,思维顿时活跃起来,想象力也插上了翅膀,举个例子:
上一次我被选拔参加蔬菜水果绘画大赛,要求大家把蔬菜水果拟人化。一拿到画纸,一幅生动的《蔬菜水果的假日》图就浮现在我的脑海里了。我有条不紊地先用铅笔定稿,再用黑笔描边,然后将内容丰富,最后用五彩缤纷的蜡笔给图画加上美丽而鲜艳的颜色……
画面上,火红的萝卜用盘子在水池里冲浪,一旁的蘑菇小姐看得目瞪口呆。青菜姐姐在池中快乐地自由泳;西红柿兴奋得跳来蹦去;洋葱套着泳圈飘荡,悠然自得;蜜桃妹妹躺在海绵床上闭着眼睛晒太阳,小脸晒得红扑扑的;辣椒和茄子顽皮地打着水仗;苹果弟弟躲在绿叶花朵后眨眼睛;桔子瓣儿乘着橙黄的桔皮玩滑板……这样就组成了《蔬菜水果的假日》!
我喜欢美术,美术让我快乐!“予人乐才是真的乐”,愿我的绘画作品也能带给大家快乐!
如今,学校正在组织一场赢取“徽章”的比赛,我相信我一定能赢得“美术徽章”的。听了我的自我介绍,看了我的绘画,怎么样,投我一票吧!请支持未来的美术家——童语谣,谢谢!
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