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我的家乡在江南,是一个鱼米之乡。
我的家乡有一个美丽的旅游胜地,名叫香湖岛。春天的香湖岛是一个生机勃勃的地方,夏天的香湖岛是一个热闹非凡的地方,秋天的香湖岛是一个落叶缤纷的地方,冬天的香湖岛是一个白雪飘飘的地方。这就是香湖岛一年四季的情景。
我家乡的香湖岛,春天的香湖岛一片五彩缤纷,那到处鸟语花香、生机勃勃的。夏天的香湖岛那里面一片人山人海,到处都是游客,游客多的.都快要堵塞交通了。我们在这些游客之间穿梭,我差一点点被游客拥挤的都喘不过气来了。那里的九曲桥上也都挤满了人,我们连上也上不去,更别说在上面欣赏美丽的香湖岛景色了,我们只好耐心的等待旅客散去后才能再上去欣赏美丽的风景了。在一个小亭子里,看到了四个小凳子,但是好做了八个人呢,其中有四个妇女,一个妇女抱着一个小孩子,四个妇女一共抱了四个小孩子,只有这一个地方不是那么拥挤的。
在我们先进来走不久的地方有很多大大小小、各种颜色很美丽的荷花。有红色的,像被红色的染料染过一样;有黄色的,像被黄色的油漆漆过一样;还有白色的荷花,像冬天里的雪一样雪白。秋天的香湖岛哪里面一片黄色的情景,遍地都是黄色的落叶,,像是给地上铺盖了一层黄色的地毯。冬天的香湖岛那里一片白色的情景,一片白色的大雪,像是给香湖岛铺上了一层白色的棉絮。在我们离开的道路旁边有很多小的蘑菇形状的垃圾桶。
我们离开的大门旁边有一块非常大的石头,上面雕刻了三个大字:“香湖岛”并且涂上了非常鲜艳的红颜色,非常醒目耀眼。我恋恋不舍的离开了这美丽的香湖岛。每天晚上,我都会梦到,我么以前去美丽的香湖岛游玩的情景,真美丽啊!
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界,
一花一天堂,
手中即无限,
永恒亦短暂。
八月底是秋季了是去九寨沟的好时节,我是今年暑假的这个时候去的,是从成都亲戚家出发的。
网上搜索了一些线路,不过到了就在那边还是一下子就蒙了,茫茫景区,从这个景点到那个景点的,怎样走最省时间,我们全无概念,幸好送我们去景区的出租车师傅对景区很了解,一路上给我介绍哪些景点的特色,怎么走,简直比导游还厉害,导游费又省了,这位师傅还很幽默风趣,给我们介绍了很多当地文化,让我们一下子对当地觉得亲切多了,后来去黄龙,我们也是坐的这位师傅的车,一路上帮了我们不少忙,为了感激这位师傅,也方便后来亲戚们出行,途中经过雪宝顶,听潘师傅说黄龙与九寨的水都是由雪宝顶的冰雪而来的,而且雪宝顶的水晶也是很有名的,但为了自然保护所以每年限量开采,这也是雪宝顶的水晶不被众人所知的原因,我想人们也不愿从此看不到黄龙与九寨沟的风景吧!
一路上我感受到藏、羌族的文化。路上有个藏族姑娘搭车,为了感谢我们她给我们唱了首歌,歌声让我震惊,那是雪域高原的歌声,优美动听,让我对藏文化产生了浓厚的兴趣。
提起我的家乡——诸暨同山镇。我就非常的来劲,你一定很纳闷,那我带你去看下我那风景优美的家乡,你一定就会明白了。
首先,我先带你去山上好了,想要去那座山,得先过一座桥,桥的两边没有栏杆,而且很窄,窄得只能一个人通行,但是桥很长,我每次走过这窄窄的长长的桥时,总会不由自主的惊慌不已。有些胆小的人甚至是爬过去的呢。走过这座桥就是山脚了。山很高,爬上去有点费力,但是山里有很多可爱的小动物,那之前的费力也就变得“累”有所值了。有一次我去爬山,看到了几只小野鸡,就抓了一只回来,但是没过几天我又把它给放了回去,因为它很不喜欢生活在笼子里。
爷爷的菜地就在山的旁边,爷爷种的菜可好吃了,每次我都会吃很多。菜地旁边还有块草坪,我们总爱在上面玩耍。
春天的时候,我们会在草坪上放风筝,燕子在天空叽叽喳喳的唱着,小草也从大地妈妈的怀抱里钻出了调皮的小脑袋,桃花、梨花也都开放了,到处都充满了生机和活力。
夏天,天气很热,知了在树上不停的叫着,让人感觉非常的烦躁,那时候我们就会跑去河里玩,冰凉的河水瞬间就会将我们的烦躁浇灭。
秋天,田野里可真是硕果累累,农民伯伯们都在开心的收获着自己的劳动果实,此时的人们,脸上无不洋溢着幸福的笑容。
冬天,冬雪一过,大地雪白一片,到处都被雪姑娘盖着厚厚的“被子”,他们一定很“暖和”吧。我们这些孩子们最喜欢在雪地里玩耍了,打打雪仗,堆堆雪人……虽然会很冷,但是我们玩耍的热情丝毫没有减退。
看,这就是我的家乡,风景是不是很美呢?
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