Sunny Company
34 Zhongcheng Road
Jinlian Building
Shanghai
September 12, 2001
Sales manager
Elegance Clothing Company
45 West Street, Nanjing
Jiangsu Province
Dear Mr. Chang:
On September 10, our order for 280 women?s cotton sweaters was duly received, but we regret to say that 40 cotton sweaters in white color were seriously soiled.
We had the case investigated immediately, and the result shows the damage was due to improper packing, for which the suppliers are definitely responsible.
Needless to say, we have suffered a great loss from this, as we cannot sell the sweaters in this condition to our customers. We ask you to conduct investigation at your end and reply to us.
Sincerely yours,
Sunny Lee
Manager
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Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely
Li Ming
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