十月三日天气晴朗,我们开车从临潼出发。进入铜川后,高速公路上已是车水马龙,两旁群山环绕,一路穿过山谷、隧道、桥梁蜿蜒前行。
中午,我们来到黄河壶口瀑布景区。一道壮观的瀑布呈现在眼前:灰黄色的大瀑布,巨浪翻滚,涛声如雷。瀑布溅起的水雾把游人的衣服都打湿了,水雾在阳光照耀下形成一道五彩缤纷的`彩虹,美丽极了!
傍晚,我们来到南泥湾。南泥湾大生产展览馆前竖立着一座高大的纪念碑,上面刻着***题写的:“自己动手,丰衣足食”。晚上我们赶到了延安宝塔山下住宿。
第二天,一大清早,我们就来到枣园革命旧址。大门旁边,一队身背腰鼓,腰系红绸的安塞腰鼓队员,向我们微笑着。他们的形象是那样的亲切和熟悉。我们随着导游参观了当年领袖们居住的窑洞,***的窑洞里两个书柜,一张床,一张木桌,几张木椅,那么的简陋。***在这样的环境里,指导中国革命取得了一个又一个的伟大胜利。
走进杨家岭中央大礼堂,一排排的长椅是那样的古老,到现在也有70余年啦。大礼堂是中国共产党七大会址,会标和***朱总司令的像挂在中间,两侧斜挂三面党旗。游人纷纷站上讲台拍照留念。
下午,我们去游览宝塔山。登上巍巍宝塔山,视野开阔,滚滚延河水和群山环绕的延安尽收眼底。宋代古塔,见证了延安那段激情燃烧的岁月。我们怀着激动的心情,在宝塔下合影留念。宝塔山下的纪念品都是红色文化,主席像章、十大元帅、陕北刺绣、革命歌曲光盘等等,一切都证明这里是革命圣地。
我们看宝塔山,看枣园,看杨家岭,听导游介绍杨家坪、南泥湾,越发怀念老一辈领袖们,他们在敌人的围追堵截下,经过万里长征来到延安,在那样艰苦的岁月里,为革命积蓄力量13年,最终取得抗战的胜利,接着又推翻了旧中国,建立了新中国。
我想,延安精神是一种人类在艰难困苦的条件下,依靠集体的力量,自己动手求生存,取得胜利的精神。我们应当世代发扬光大这种精神:面对艰难险阻,艰苦卓绝,实现中华民族伟大复兴的梦想!
1。 叙述的人称
英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者,使人到真实可信,如身临其境。如:
The other day, I was driving along the street。 Suddenly, a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast。 I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side。 But it was too late。 The car hit my bike and I fell off it。
用第三人称叙述,优点在于叙述者不受“我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制,而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者,直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前,文章的客观性很强。如:
Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella, for it was raining hard。 On the way, he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover。 Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her, but he was too short。 What could he do? Then he had a good idea。
2。 动词的时态
在记叙文中,记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高,且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的\',这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化,正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。
3。 叙述的顺序
记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙,都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作,较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙,读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果,让所叙之事跌宕起伏,使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃,从而为文章所吸引,深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当,则容易弄巧成拙,使文章结构散乱,头绪不清,让读者不知所云。
4。 叙述的过渡
过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如:
In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things。 Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao。 It is really a beautiful city。 There are many places of interest to see。 But what impressed me most was the sunrise。
The next morning I got up early。 I was very happy because it was a fine day。 By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red。 In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing。 The sun was very red, not shining。 It rose slowly。 At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball。 At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright。
What a moving and unforgettable scene!
5。 叙述与对话
引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述,可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态,使记叙生动、有趣,使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果:
I was in the kitchen, and I was cooking something。 Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front。 I thought maybe someone was knocking the door。 I asked who it was but I heard no reply。 After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor。 I realized it was the cat。 I felt released。
这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字,但经作者这么一写,就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式,没有人物语言,把“悬念”给冲淡了。可作如下调整:
I was in the kitchen cooking something。 "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front。 Thinking someone was knocking at the door, I asked, "Who?" No reply。 After a while, I saw my cat running across the parlor。 "It's you。" I said, quite released。
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第1段:Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题
Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧
正文:
第2段:Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点
Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由
第3段:However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点
Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由
结论:
第4段:Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点 オ
来到延安后,一阵香甜的红枣味儿扑鼻而来。没错,这就是延安著名特色小吃之一——狗头枣。拿起一个后,塞进嘴里。啊!外崔内黏,又香又甜,想吃的心情停不下。
再抬头一看,你会发现,原来一个个“剃了光头的大山”如今一个个却“带着绿色的假发”。没错,延安政府发现在科技发达以前,一座座大山却成了“光头”。于是,政府决定“还山归林”,还延安人民一个“绿色村庄”。
请再随我来参观延安三大宝山之一——宝塔山。
在爬山的\'过程中,你会发现,过去一个个小地摊,变成了一个个“古塔”。每个“古塔”里都记载着一段历史文化。因为延安是红色革命圣地,宝塔山又是延安三塔之一,所以,理所应当为外来游客陈述珍贵的历史。
登上山顶后,不用说,当然会有纪念品,但是,延安的纪念品可是免费的呦!在这期间,你可以拍照留念,也可以让我们学校的义务讲解员来为你讲解。
虽然这只是我的幻想。但是,我相信在不久的将来,这一定会成为现实的。因为老师说过:“有梦就有希望!”我还相信,在全市人民的努力下。这,就是现实!美丽的梦想,我正在通过自己的努力让想象成为现实。美好的未来,我来啦!
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第1段:提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题
正文:
第2段:Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法
结论:
第3段:These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法
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第1段:Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
正文:
第2段:There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势
结论:
第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论 オ
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