我们的人生就好似一杯饮品,有时如平淡无奇的白开水,有时如散发着清香的普洱茶,有时如甜甜的草莓汁,有时也会如冲劲十足的啤酒,这些饮品都会让我们的生活丰富多彩,但仅仅靠这些酸甜苦辣也是无法谱写出优美的人生旋律,最动听的音符,应当是那一次次的挑战,一次次的比赛。
前几天,班主任老师让我去竞选学生会委员,我心里是既紧张,又兴奋,成为学生会的一员是我一直以来的理想,没想到这次竟然有机会参加竞选,我仿佛一下步入了云端,开心似乎包裹了我每个细胞。回到家,我就迫不及待地准备演讲稿,我将以前所演讲过的内容挑出最好的部分,全部都集中在这张稿上。
盼星星,盼月亮,终于该演讲了。我的编号是十七,比较靠后。第一个演讲的也是个七年级的同学,她的演讲可谓是糟糕透顶,这时我的心里也开始打鼓,我会不会和她出现同样的状况,会不会忘词,干脆不要背了,就像小学国旗下演讲一样,拿出稿读一遍好了,既然有机会参加竞选,她自然是班上老师和同学公认的好学生,她都演讲成这样我会不会……不行,我不能再这样想了,这样下去只会打磨我的意志,减少我的勇气和信心。
我不能够胆怯,不能因为她的失误就认为自己差,拿出些实力来,证明自己不比别人差,你们不如我,想想小学当着全校两千多师生是怎么做的吧,那时都没有失利,现在仅仅只有二十多人,你怎么可以失利,怎么能不拿出些实力,怎么能落后!
我拼命的告诉自己要冷静,深深地呼吸了一下,现在好多了,我终于平静了一些。十四,十五,十六,下一个就是我了,在演讲之前,我没有再去熟悉一遍稿,而是就静静的坐在哪,让自己那忐忑不安的心收敛一点。
人生没有彩排,只有现场直播,机不可失,失不在来,把握住机会。该我了,我不能失利,我走上台,就像平时讲课一样,不去想坐在下面的评委,只想下面是自己班的同学,下面又不是妖魔鬼怪,何必胆怯,何必紧张。就这样,我流利的读出了自己的演讲稿,没有胆怯,没有紧张。
这次演讲比赛,是我进入初中以来,第一次当这领导演讲,通过这次演讲,我明白了,人的敌人就只有自己而已,战胜了自己,就战胜了一切,如果我真的没有选上,我不会伤心,因为我问心无愧,至少,我对得起自己。
How to prevent the H7N9?
As is well known,the A flu is spreading throught our country. However, if we negnect it, the deadly H7N9 may cause more infectors,or even more deaths. So what is the most important is that we should take some effective measures to prevent it.They can be listed as follows.
Firstly,it is necessary for you to realize the Avian flu can be prevented if you develop good living habits. For example,you shouldn’t forget to wash your hands before meals.Besides,don’t spit everywhere and try to cover your mouth or nose with paper or hankerchiefs when you have to cough or sneeze.What’s more, remember to wear the mouth-cover if you have to go to the public places, such as the crowded cinemas,supermarkets, buses,where the A flu may spread easily.
Secondly,of course, taking exercise more often and taking good sleep to build your body are wise choices for you to reduce the risk of being infected.
Last but not the least, if you are unlucky to be infected with the slight flu cold, try to stay at home,and take some medicine. Do pay attention to your daily body temperature. If you have a high fever, go to the hospital without delay for further treatment. Make sure you are not expected to come back to school before the cold or flu is cured.
Only by doing like this can you prevent or defeat the A flu in the end.
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
A man walking in the night slipped from a rock. Afraid that he would fall down thousands of feet, because he knew that place was a very deep valley, he took hold of a branch that was hanging over the rock. In the night all he couls see was a bottomless abyss. He shouted, his own shout reflected back--there was nobody to hear.
You can imagine that man and his whole night of scare. Every moment there was death, his hands were becoming cold, he was losing his gripand as the sun came out he looked down and he laughed. There was no abyss. Just six inches down there was a rock. He could have rested the whole night, slept well---the rock was big enough---but the whole night was a nightmare.
Fear is only six inches deep. Now it is up to you whether you want to go on cling to the branch and turn your life into a nightmare, or whether you would love to leave the branch and stand on your feet.
There is nothing to fear.
苹果教父————史蒂夫·乔布斯,这个改变世界的天才,这个身上充满了传奇故事的天才,于20xx年10月5日安详地离开了这个世界。虽然他的离去对这个世界来说可能是一个无法弥补的遗憾,但是这丝毫没有影响他生前为这个世界所创造的一切价值,而他在斯坦福大学所作的演讲正是他对自己传奇般的人生所进行的总结,这一著名演讲让我们深深地被他的精神魅力所吸引,所感染。
之前对于乔布斯的认识,仅仅是停留在感性认识的层面上,通过阅读他在斯坦福大学所做的演讲,我对他才有了一个比较深入的了解。在阅读的过程中,让我联想到自己在即将毕业的这一个学期里整个状态和心理变化过程,让我有了很多的感悟,让我对人生有了不一样的认识。
乔布斯讲了三个故事,这三个故事每一个都是很值得去慢慢体味的。他的第一个故事是:关于如何把生命中的点点滴滴串连起来。发生在乔布斯身上的一切巧合,其实不是巧合,而是生命中的点滴串连出来的结果。这个故事让我最近一直在烦恼的问题迎刃而解。由于在大学期间兼修了一门会计双专业,很多人都说我这样很有优势,至少还多了一个选择,但是我内心真实的声音告诉我:我并不想从事会计方面工作,人力资源管理方面的工作才是我真正想要的。我把我的想法告诉了父母,父母并不支持我,他们说我白白糟蹋了这四年所学的会计知识。父母的反对,让我觉得很困扰,甚至有时连我自己都怀疑自己这样做是对父母的不负责,更是对自己的`不负责。不过乔布斯的第一个故事告诉我,生命中的点点滴滴早晚会被串连在一起的,虽然在前进的过程中我还不能预知过往的一切将给我未来的生活带来什么,但是未来的某一天当我再回头看看之前走过的路时,就会发现当时的一切对于那个时候的我来说有着多么重要的意义。所以,我不再让这个烦恼反复地纠缠自己了,我要坚持我想要的,但是我不放弃过往所赋予我的一切,会计学赋予我对数字的敏感性或许能让我以更快的速度去适应和完成人力资源绩效与薪酬两个板块的工作,并成为这两大板块的专业人士。至于会计学还能给我未来的生活带来的其他影响,现在还不得而知,但乔布斯富有戏剧性的人生故事告诉我们人生是由许多不同时期的片断拼凑而成的。
乔布斯的第二个故事是:关于爱和损失的。这是让我深有感触的一个故事,在没有阅读乔布斯的这篇演讲之前,我的情绪一直处在一个比较低迷的状态,焦虑的情绪包裹着我,这可能就是所谓的就业前的综合症吧。在校期间,各方面表现都还不错,让我一直都有种优越感,开学前期对于找工作我还自信满满,满以为找到一家比较好的公司并不困难,但是后来事实的结果表明要进一家知名企业并没有想象中那么顺利。这样结果给我带来了强烈的心理落差,我一直认为那些好的工作岗位应该属于我的,优越感、自信心一下子被打击得所剩无几。与乔布斯在面对被自己亲手创立的苹果公司炒鱿鱼时的豁达胸怀相比,我在深感惭愧的同时也豁然开朗了。乔布斯即使失去自己一直拥有的东西,甚至是被视为全部支柱的东西,都能保持如此淡定和坦然的态度,而我竟然纠结于一些本就不属于我的东西。我明白了那些东西只有自己努力争取才能得到,即使没有争取到也无怨无悔了,至少我尽力了,我相信这个争取的过程会使我成长,在未来的某一天我会感激上天赋予我这么美妙的一段经历。坚持自己所热爱的事业,不要轻易放弃,即使这个过程很艰难,也要正确看待这个过程中的得与失,因为它们只是暂时的,不必为一时的失意而深陷泥潭无法自拔。
乔布斯的第三个故事是:关于死亡的。“记住你即将死去”,看到这句话不禁会让我思考,如果今天是我生命中的最后一天,我最想做什么?我发现我想做的事情好多,而且是很重要的事情。我还没跟爸妈说声我爱他们,我还没跟最好的朋友通宵达旦的聊天,我还没跟很多人说对不起,我还没从事过我一直向往的工作……原来自己还有这么多事情没做,亏欠自己的亲朋好友这么多事情,甚至都不能给自己一个交代。当乔布斯在死亡边缘徘徊的时候,或许对他来说他的人生应该没有什么大的遗憾了,但是他还是觉得时间可能不够,因为他要把未来十年对小孩说的话在几个月里面说完,要把所有的事情搞定,让家人过的轻松。对于这样一个历尽人间沧桑的人物是如此,更何况我这样一个涉世不深的大学生呢?
生命的奇迹把乔布斯从死亡的边缘拉了回来,让他得以重生,在这个过程中所有的事情,包括荣誉、骄傲、难堪、对失败的恐惧,对他来说已经不重要了,在死亡面前这些都不算什么了。乔布斯让我清醒地看到,还有什么比死亡更可怕的吗?答案是没有。放下所有的心里负担,才能更好地朝着既定的目标前进。
乔布斯最后说的那句:“Stay Hungry,Stay Foolish”,提醒我要坚持学习、不断学习,才能加快达到我最想要到的地方的速度,才能做好我最想做的事。我想学习对于任何人的意义都是重大的,我会继续坚持我一直以来勤勉好学的学习态度,终身学习。
乔布斯的精彩演讲,让我明白:我该趁着年轻,拿出所有的勇气,把所有的包袱和负担放下,本来就一无所有,已经失无所失了,还害怕失去什么。学着不断去尝试、去冒险,坚持学习和自己的人生目标,把该完成的、最想做的做到最好,不要给自己的人生留下任何的遗憾。
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