社会温情类作文结尾【一】
根据材料所述，交警大队民警在西山路口执勤时，对于汽车驾驶人进行了酒精测试，该汽车驾驶的你是酒驾。可其驾驶人的母亲却挡到求情，该民警为了应对这一事件，也向其母亲下跪解释酒驾行为的危害。对于这一件事，我更支持那位民警的做法，在这法治社会，每一个人都是平等的，人人遵守法纪，不要让无谓的“温情”害人害己；唯有遵守法纪，才能让社会更健康地发展。
诚然，这位驾驶人有一位爱他的好母亲，可以当众为了帮助他而下跪求情，这位母亲的做法，站在人性的角度上看，她的行为是正确的，是对孩子无私而又伟大的爱，但她的爱的方式是正确的么？盲目的偏袒包庇孩子只会造成对孩子更大的伤害。并且在法治面前，这显得苍白而又无力，我们深知“法律面前，人人平等”。高官也有落马的时候，何能为温情而不顾法，不守法呢？因此，我规劝人民莫要做“无谓的温情”来试图动摇法律、莫要企图撼动权威。
在这样的法治时代下，我们的社会变得更加美好，道路上少了闯红灯的现象，打架伤人的事件少有发生，这一切都是在“法力”努力下的共同成果。如果这位民警单单是因为那驾驶的母亲儿求情而不严于法，那如果社会上只以“温情”执法，社会将会如何发展？就如老人倚老卖老般，社会将会乱成一套，法律会遭到人们的肆意践踏，人们心中那还有法？所以法治大于温情，有法才有国，国。才能施以温情，而不是让无谓的“温情”捆绑了法。
网上也有相关记载：成龙的儿子——房祖名由于吸毒危害社会，被强制送去拘留所、戒毒所，成龙作为父亲，不但没有为其求情，反而赞成这一处理结果。这样的举动令人大吃一惊的同时，何尝不是守法的另一种表现呢？又如税收部门因个人小惠小利而让企业偷税、***。甚至不惜代价造假账，这使我国国家财政赤字严重，这样的温情难道是人们想要的吗？在法治社会下，每个人都逃不了被法约束的命运，遵守法纪是每一个公民应该做到的事情，是人们应尽的义务。没有法治，就不会有中国的强大！
那位民警面对突发情况，忠于职守。不惜降膝，晓之以情，动之以理，如果方式粗暴执法执意罚款，可能会激发矛盾和带来严重的后果。材料中所述母亲的做法，这反应了她法治意识的缺失，每个人都不能抱有侥幸心理，“法不可违，执法必严”，若想要发展，就必须严格守法，树立正确的法制观念，切勿因“温情”害人害己！
社会温情类作文结尾【二】
当我看到你们这张母子照片时，也许距离们你们拍照的时间已有十余年了，作为见证着这个时代改变的人，我看到你们充满温度的照片，脑海中浮现四个字：时过境迁，以及心中难以名状的怀念感情
我并非是饱经世事的人，但生活的变化确实超出了我的认知。你们一定不会想到，在十多年后的今日，商场里是这样一番景象：柜台前挤满紧握手机人们，他们气定神闲地将支付二维码放到扫描仪中，“嘀”一声后，不紧不忙的拿着商场走开，这个过程，没有现金，不需要找零，更高效，更安全。这与照片中的你们的情景截然不同，但我凝视这你们的相片，你们身边的黑熙攘攘的人群，让我想起那个时候温暖。
我的温暖也来源于母亲的手，我也曾是你们照片中的一员，但我的背最并非熙熙攘攘的超市，而是人山人海的菜市场。我的母亲紧拉着我的手在人群中穿行，年前市场总是喧闹，而我所感受到的“年味”，便是各种奇特的味道一猪肉味、鸡类味。我母亲一手抓着一大把毛票，一手抓住我，嘴里还念念有词与卖家讨价还价，一阵唇枪舌战后，单手扔下几张毛票，同时拿起菜又钻出人群，我的手一直没有放。
我十分能理解你那位可爱的儿子的感受，我的情况比他糟糕，但我们对妈妈温暖的手的感觉肯定是样的，小时候我时常望着熙熙攘攘的屁股思考：为什么不能有不用给钱的市场？我承认我当时异想天开，然而如今的的确出现了“无现金”的支付方式，钱却依旧要给。当这些奇怪的念头消散，我在看着你们的照片我明白了原来那难以名状的感情来源于母亲温暖的手。
生活在变化，社会在发展，经济在转型，物价上升，我却很久没有握过母豸的手了，这令我怅然。所以我见到你们充满温情的合照，我也在思考：移动支个冲淡了人与人之间的温情吗？我看着母亲发给我的微信转账记录，深信不疑。而，我发现原来母亲给我的红包，转账上面都写了文字，大多是：“身体健康，学业进……”我再看着母亲发给我那些60秒语音以及一大堆错别字的信息我又一次怅然。原来母亲抓着我的手一直没有放，这与移动支付、科技进步、活水平、猪肉降价涨价无关，与爱有关。
其实，无论科技如何进步，机器、数字如何冰冷，人与人之间的温情决不减弱，尤其是亲人之间的感情，虽然我手上已经没有了像你们照片上那只温暖手，但母亲的关爱，仍牵着我在大千世界中穿行。
社会温情类作文结尾【三】
【习作题目】
Students Grading of Their Teachers
1．学生给老师打分已很普遍；
2．人们对其持不同态度（肯定或否定的态度）；
3．你的看法。
【习作解读】
显然，此任务是写一篇议论文，主题为对学生给老师打分的现象进行议论，开放性较大。学生应根据实际情况，从多个方面阐述其原因并表达自己对这种现象的观点和态度。该话题更加贴近学生的实际生活，但有一定的语言难度，也有一定的思想深度。通过此文的写作，也从侧面提示了学生在注重写作基础训练的前提下，也应该注重培养积极思考、灵活运用、自由发挥等能力。
此次的写作任务出题相当巧妙，写作内容涉及的词汇和句型都属于新课程标准范围。题目在考查学生写作能力的同时，也在考查学生的分析判断能力及高度概括能力。富有想象力的学生写出的文章可能生动而富有灵性。此题目能引发学生对平日习以为常的行为进行反思，学会换位思考，这对中学生的性格和品德培养非常重要。
【习作展示】
Students Grading of Their Teachers
Nowadays, a lot of schools ask their students to contribute to grading their teachers. As a teacher, it is their responsibility to satisfy their students in all aspects. Meanwhile, it is admirable that school teachers prefer to expose themselves to their students.
If the system of grading of teachers by students is introduced, it will benefit students, teachers and the administration of the school for a number of reasons. For one thing, the system will give teachers and the administration of the school an insight into the minds of the students and show whether the teachers are successful in getting their lessons understood by the students; for another, it will also encourage the good teachers to continue their efforts and motivate themselves. What is more, it will expose those who are not doing enough and will lead them to correct their teaching methods as well as their attitude towards students. Thus the quality of teaching will certainly improve.
In a word, it is a promising concept and will bring surprisingly good results if applied with the right conditions.
【习作点评】
作者观点明确，赞成学生给老师打分。作为老师，就要做一个让学生满意的老师。这样，不仅对学生、学校有利，而且对老师本人也有利。这样，老师就会从另一个角度重新审视自己，看自己是否是一个成功的老师。如果得到学生的认可，这将是对自己的一次鼓励，为继续前行增添动力。如果学生的认可度不高，老师就应进行反思，调控教学方法和教学态度。这样，教学质量肯定会提高。作
者用简洁、明快的语言以及自己的经历列举了充分的论据，内容充实，贴近生活。For one thing, for another, what is more, in a word等过渡词的使用，是短文结构清晰，层次分明。最后，最值得一提的是，文中多次正确运用的高级词汇和复杂句式，给文章增添了不少文采。综上所述，这是一篇不可多得的佳作，值得向大家推荐。
二、写作模板
此模板适用于社会现象类议论文。参考模式如下：
Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental There are a couple of reasons behind this problem/phenomenon. For one ；Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people
Nowadays, there exists a common phenomenon—with the development of the Internet, more and more people tend to send electronic cards instead of paper ones to their friends and relatives when an important holiday comes.
There are a couple of reasons behind this phenomenon. For one thing, compared with the traditional cards, electronic cards are more lively and interesting. They can give not only pictures but also sound and animation. For another, there are many websites online which offer varieties of cards for you to choose from. What is more, with the popularity of the electronic cards, less paper is used in making paper cards, which does good to our environment.
Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that sending greetings by using electronic cards will be accepted by more and more people, not only the young ones.
三、写作指导
写作思路是先列出一个具体的社会问题或者现象，然后分析产生的原因和产生的影响，最后提出解决问题的办法，或者得出结论，或者提出个人看法，或者预测前景。
论点、论据、论证是议论文的三要素。论点是作者对所议论问题所持有的见解和主张，论据是用来证明论点的事实和道理的根据；论证是用论据来证明论点的方法和过程。一般来说，议论文每段都有主题句来确定论点。论证的方法很多，但最常用的是因果分析法。即：分析事实与论点的因果关系，指出取得结果的原因是所要证明的论点，从而达到论证的目的。
在近几年的高考中，议论文的比重占得越来越多，议论文的.出题形式可以多种多样，有看图写作、图表、表格、书信等各种类型，但文体实际是议论文，而有时是夹叙的议论文。议论文的写作要点是：
1. 观点鲜明，文章一定有一个明确的中心论点。
2. 层次分明，一个中心论点通常有几个分论点支持，不同层次之间要分明，过渡清晰自然。
3. 最后一段一般要总结全文，得出一个符合逻辑的结论，突出中心思想。
4. 一般采用一般现在时。
5. 语言简洁有力，一般不采用口语。
四、巩固练习
1.【练习题目】
2010年上海世界博览会期间，上万的青年志愿者参加志愿工作，请你谈谈对此现象的看法。
【参考范文】
During the period of holding the 2010 World Expo in Shanghai, tens of thousands of young citizens are participating in volunteer work, hoping to devote themselves to the grand occasion. As far as I am concerned, everyone ought to enter for it. Here are the reasons I want to mention.
It can be argued that the advantages of doing unpaid volunteer work are enormous, because volunteer work is actually a two-way street. First of all, volunteer work should always benefit people who need help. Those who need help will feel happier due to our immediate help. On the other hand, as far as the young people ourselves are concerned, we have more opportunities to develop the sense of responsibility, independence as well as interpersonal skills in the process of helping others.
Through this kind of work, we become confident and mature. In addition, we can make many friends and increase our chances of getting the jobs of our dreams. Furthermore, volunteer work plays an active role in building up a harmonious society.
In a word, it is of great value for the young adults to offer volunteer work. The youth volunteers do make a difference by the voluntary work! Why not join them and do something for our country?
2.【练习题目】
某些中学生为了显示自己成熟或表明自己醋而吸烟。请写一篇120词左右的短文，列举吸烟的危害，并提出建议。
【参考范文】
I am sorry to know that more and more middle school students begin to smoke. I think it is wrong to believe that smoking is cool and even think that smoking makes you appear to be mature. In fact, smoking is not cool but very dangerous.
First, smoking can do much damage to health. Scientific researches show that smoking can lead to heart diseases, cancers and other problems. It is reported that about 5 million people die of diseases related to smoking each year all over the world.
Second, it is a waste of money to smoke cigarettes. Smoking can cost a great deal of money. Once you are addicted to it, it is difficult to give it up.
What’s more, smoking can cause fires easily, which may do great damage to your life and your surroundings.
So give up smoking at once! Only in this way can you keep healthy forever.
3. 【练习题目】近年来，越来越多的中学生出国学习，出现了所谓的中学生“出国热”。请根据以下提供的信息，谈谈自己的看法。
1）良好的语言环境，更利于语言学习。
2）拓宽视野，学习国外先进的科学技术。
3）传播各民族间的不同文化。
参考词汇：媒介，中间人：mediator
【参考范文】
In recent years, studying abroad has been popular. Tens of thousands of Chinese middle school students have gone to foreign countries to study．Many people are trying their best to apply to go abroad.
There are a number of reasons for attending schools abroad．First, students who are studying abroad can act as mediators between people of different cultures. They can communicate with each other directly and learn about different cultures. Second, they can learn much more advanced knowledge of science and technology from foreign countries and experience different education methods．Third, they live in foreign countries and take classes given by foreign teachers. As a result, they can learn foreign languages much more quickly.
Therefore, it is advisable to attend schools abroad.
4.【练习题目】随着经济和社会的发展，道路上的私人小汽车越来越多。请根据自己的观察和理解，谈谈自己的观点。
【参考范文】
With the fantastic development both in economy and in society in China, the number of people who own private cars is on the rise. Some people have bought cars of their own, and others are planning to buy cars. But I strongly object to the increase in developing private cars.
I hold that automobiles will give rise to a series of problems. In the first place, as more and more cars are produced and run on the road, a large volume of poisonous gas will be given off, polluting the atmosphere and causing actual harm to the health of people. Next, private cars contribute to traffic jams so greatly that the advantages gained in comfort and freedom are often cancelled out by the frustration caused by traffic jams. The last problem is the increasing number of car accidents that have killed and will kill a lot of people in a friction of a second.
In a word, although automobiles have been playing a vital part in the daily activities of our society, they also bring us numerous troubles such as more serious environmental pollution, more traffic accidents and more energy consumption. They drink up huge amounts of fuel and throw out huge amounts of pollutants. Jams waste our precious time. Therefore, I am against developing private cars.
社会温情类作文结尾【四】
亲爱的儿子：
读了你的信我们深深为之一动。我们深思，反省了很久。
是呀我们活在世上，这一生莫过于金钱、美貌、品德、诚信、权利、荣誉，可是这一切的一切如果没有生命作保障那些全都等于零，所以生命是一个所拥有的最宝贵的东西，因此我们要关爱生命。
人的生命只有一次。如果我们注意交通安全，那么我们就可以平平安安的、健健康康的生活；如果我们不注意交通安全，那么灾难会随时落到你的头上，你就可能在那一瞬间失去生命，所有的理想都会变成泡影，这是多么可怕的事情呀！可见交通安全是多么的重要呀！每当我们开车走在大街上的时候，我们随时随地都可以看到有一些人为了赶那么一点点的时间，就攀越路栏；又有些人，他们为了早点去上班，就一边开车，一边抢道，连闯红灯；更有甚者，那些载客摩托车，一看见客车将要停下来，便争先恐后、汹涌而上，把客车堵个水泄不通，随时都有被撞车的危险，这是多么可怕的事呀！
看了你的信，我们开始学习安全知识。也翻阅了许多有关资料，一个更为残酷的现实告知人们，自第一辆汽车问世至今，已有4000多万人惨死在那些飞旋的车轮下。平均每6分钟就有一人死亡，平均每一分钟受伤1人。XX年，我国发生道路交通事故66。75万起，死亡人数达10。4万，受伤49。4万人，直接经济损失33。69万元，今年上半年，全国发生道路交通事故25。46万起死亡4。95万人，受伤21。16万人，直接经济损失13。14亿元，其中一次死亡10人的特大交通事故34件起，造成488人死亡，590人受伤。
就在这些惊人的数字后面，有多少家庭失去亲人，幸福化为乌有！在事故的背后，有多少人在悲痛的时候，更多的\'是叹息和无限的悔恨！人的生命只有一次，人世间没有比生命更珍贵的东西！
通过这些天的学习，我们深深体会到了交通安全的重要性，在此我们向你――我们的儿子郑重承诺，决不酒会驾车，一定会严格遵守交通规则，珍爱他人，保重自身，珍惜自己和他人的生命，人的生命只有一次！
爸爸、妈妈
