暑假的每一天我都过的特别充实、开心。最难忘的要数——七月里一个晴朗的午后,我们睡午觉后,觉得没啥事干,舅妈突然说:“我们去滨湖的公园里玩玩沙子吧!我和弟弟们顿时大声欢呼起来。
舅舅开车带着我们几个来到了公园,下车走进一看,眼睛顿时亮了起来,这里的风景可真美啊!远处,几只小鸟在天空中飞翔,鸟飞过的地方,有一个许多树枝搭成的鸟巢,周围郁郁葱葱的树木把鸟巢遮挡住了,只露出了一点点。近处,有一片金黄色的沙滩,沙滩旁有一条像镜子一样的小河,河水是碧绿碧绿的。我迫不及待地光着脚丫走在沙滩上,金黄色的沙子是那么细腻,那么柔软,那么炙热,让人看着就忍不住想用手去摸一摸。
我和弟弟在沙滩上边走边玩,就连舅妈也跟着一起玩了起来,我和舅妈决定搭一个狮身人面像,首先我们搭了一个小山,然后把桶里的`沙子装满,接着把桶盖在“山顶上,最后添上了眼睛、鼻子、和嘴巴就可以了,还别说真的挺像。短暂休息后我又和舅舅一起搭城堡,我们先挖一个圆形,然后沿着圆形用沙子堆城墙,城墙堆好后,舅舅就开始修墙面了,哇!一会功夫,城墙被舅舅修的像长城一样,看上去十分雄伟。接着在里面埋一些“地雷,最后做一些小鱼和螃蟹放在城堡的四周,一个海底城堡就搭好了,简直像个艺术品。
太阳渐渐落下了山,晚霞映红了半边天,倒映在水面上格外的美丽。舅妈说时间不早了,该回家了,我和弟弟都没玩尽兴,深深叹了一口气,穿上鞋子依依不舍地离开了,到了家里,听家人议论,我才知道那个公园叫——滨湖塘西河公园。
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大,但是有的\'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能,人们可以i用电脑做很多事情,比如说看电影,听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器,所以我很喜欢电脑。
以前的马路都是坑坑洼洼的,一到下雨天,如果在马路上走,过往的车辆就会溅到你一身的.泥点子,你会很生气。姥姥家屋后有一条小溪。一到雨季,就会洪水泛滥,有时还会把姥姥菜园的一角给冲走,爸爸妈妈很是担心,可有无计可施。这些年发生了日新月异的变化,家家都住上了宽敞明亮的砖瓦房,室内还增添进了很多的家用电器。
有的人还在县城里买了楼房,有的人还开上了小轿车,人人都配上了手机,沟通起来真是便捷。现在的马路是又宽又长,铺上了柏油,人们不再为雨天赶路会溅到一身泥点而发愁了。姥姥家屋后的小溪两旁,村里给砌上了堤坝,雨季时,爸妈也不再担心洪水的到来了。这几年,在党的好政策下,农民种地不用花钱,而且还会得到一定的补贴。四周建起了铁矿、纺织厂、养殖场。农民不用外出打工,在家里也可以上班挣钱了。人们的收入稳定,真可以说得上是安居乐业。这就是家乡的变化,我希望家乡会变得更好,更漂亮!
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