天津中考英语作文2021范文

天津中考英语作文2021范文

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天津中考英语作文2021范文

天津中考英语作文2021范文【一】

1。 头绪分明,脉络清楚

写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。

2。 突出中心,详略得当

在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:

One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。

When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger。

I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice。 When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"

3。 用活语言,准确生动

记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。

原文:

One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it。 She served them with tea but they left。

修改后:

The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home, he started and crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。

"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked。

"I want Mom, I go home。" said the boy, still crying。

"Don't worry, we'll send you home。"

And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house。 With the help of a policeman, they finally found it。

When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。

天津中考英语作文2021范文【二】

要是说起让我尊敬的一个人,要数那位和蔼可亲的清洁工爷爷。起初,我认为他没什么特别,可是,通过这件事,清洁工爷爷在我心中的形象慢慢变了......

有一天放学回来的路上,可能是前天晚上着凉了,早上一直不舒服,胃里翻江倒海,我拼命忍,怎么忍也没忍住,还没走到家就吐在了小区的马路上,差点连肠子都要吐出来。正当我难受的时候,一个穿着清洁工服装的人,推着一辆臭味扑鼻的垃圾车走过来,他弯下腰看看我,关切的问:“小朋友,你怎么了,哪儿不舒服呀?爷爷来给你帮忙。”这时,一股难闻的味道迎面扑来,更难受了。“没事,不用你管。”我赶紧捂着鼻子,斜着眼睛地瞪了他一眼,心中暗想:哼,脏死啦、臭死啦,赶紧离我远点儿。爷爷可能意识到了什么,没有再上前,只是站在远处担心地看着我。

我吐完以后,人也舒服多了,就慢慢往家走。快到家门口的时候,我下意识的用眼睛的余光扫了一下刚呕吐的地方,只见清洁工爷爷正拿着扫把慢慢地打扫我刚吐出的脏东西。不一会,地面又洁净了,丝毫看不出有人吐过的痕迹。我见了很感动,并对他产生了强烈的好奇心,从那以后我就悄悄地关注他。

半年多时间过去了,无论刮风下雨,他都会准时出现在小区里清理运送垃圾。他除了做好份内事,还不厌其烦地向人们宣传要保护环境,对被毁坏的草地及时采取补救措施。为了美化小区环境,他还经常发动小朋友一起种花种树。当有人遇到困难的时候,他总会不计报酬,热情帮助。我被爷爷这种默默无闻、无私奉献的精神所感动。他是一个社会责任感强的人,他是一个爱岗敬业的人,他是一个乐善好施的人。他是一个多么令我尊敬的人啊!

天津中考英语作文2021范文【三】

“蚯蚓的生活环境……”考场里只能听见书写的“唰唰”声,我盯着这道题,一题十分,如果不做出名次会差很多,昨天我怎么会没复习到的?同桌正从容地写着,我心里突然闪过一个十分不光彩的念头:抄答案。万一被监考老师发现了怎么办?我紧张地看看监考老师,她正在看报纸,现在这时侯应该不会被发现吧?我这样想着,可脸上不知为什么火辣辣的。

到底要不要抄答案?我成绩一向不错。万一被发现了,以后同学们会怎么看我?但如果不抄,这道问答题就做不出,相差十分呢!名次前十名肯定是排不上了,回去一定会挨骂的!我的大拇指和食指用力夹着笔,笔上面的硅胶套被我夹了起来,不知不觉地手心竟渗出了汗水,显得十分潮湿。“还有八分钟,收卷了。”监考老师尖细的声音从报纸后面传来。怎么办?快来不及了,我到底该怎么做?我瞄了瞄同桌的试卷,几个大字一下映入我眼帘,但我却很快收回了目光,又一次心虚地瞄了瞄正在看报纸的老师,还好,老师一动也没动,依旧坐在讲台上,整张报纸挡住了她大半张脸,我只看见四个大字“钱江晚报”。

正当我在做贼心虚的时侯,一张被折成方块形的小纸条发出悄悄地“啪”地一声,我以为是监考老师发出的声音,连忙低头看自已的卷子,却忽然看见了那小纸条。“谁?”我心里一阵紧张,却依然打开了纸条,上面明显是同桌的`字迹,我呆住了,见上面写着:曾经我也的题目在时突然做不出的时侯,要相信自已,一定会想的出来的,就算想不出,也有一条基本准则:要诚实!我愣了一下,不觉笑了。“收卷!”我坦然地交上了试卷,望望同桌,他也在看着我。是的,他教会我诚实,他诚实的品质值得我学习!

天津中考英语作文2021范文【四】

今年暑假,我和爸爸妈妈一起去了天津。

在天津,你可以在河边看风景,可以坐游船游览两岸美景,也可以坐着发呆,没有人会干涉你。

海河作为天津的母亲河,哺育了无数的天津人。来天津乘海河游船赏津卫风景,是一大景致。他最让眷恋的是夜幕降下之后,海河流水闪烁的波光灯影的美,流动不息的美。那两岸若明若暗的各色灯光,倒映在河中,浮如绚丽的彩霞,缓缓的流水,又把一道道彩霞送向遥遥的远方,是人们产生无限的遐思。我们登船的码头叫做大悲院码头,也是我们的出发地点。随着游船的缓缓前行,看到的白色的桥是大沽桥,是海河上又一个标志性建筑,墙上有两个不对称的拱圈。大拱全面向东方象征初升的太阳全面向东方象征初升的太阳,小拱圈面向西方象征月亮,预示天津美好的未来与日月同辉。

我们正在通过的是狮子林桥,始建于1974年,在我国首次进行了桥梁抬升,运用美国的顶升技术,用32个千斤顶把这座7400吨的桥台升了1.72米,这是海和上第一座抬升改造的桥,也是国内首创。俗话说,卢沟桥的狮子数不清,实际上卢沟桥上有485只狮子,而狮子林桥上一共有1181只,是名副其实的狮子成林。

在繁华的市区,在广袤的原野,一座座现代化的桥梁巍峨起伏,强烈的表现出天津国际化大都市的英姿。有人说:一座城市有了水就有了活力,有了桥就有了诗意。天津是一座以‘水文化’为依托的城市,桥对于每一个天津人来说,都有着难以割舍的情感。

天津中考英语作文2021范文【五】

导入:

第1段:Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题

Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧

正文:

第2段:Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点

Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由

第3段:However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点

Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由

结论:

第4段:Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点 オ

天津中考英语作文2021范文【六】

导入:

第1段:提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题

As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对

The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句,承上启下

正文:

第2段:First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的`理由

结论:

第3段:In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段,构成\"总—分—总\"结构

天津中考英语作文2021范文【七】

导入:

第1段:Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.

正文:

第2段:There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因

第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势

结论:

第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论 オ

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