9月10日星期一,太阳公公也亲自出马迎接第28个教师节。在这特殊的日子里,同学们高高兴兴地来到学校,个个都晒出自己的创意或礼物准备送给各科老师。有的送贺卡,有的送鲜花,有的送自己亲手制作的小手工艺品,而我送的却是跟同桌合作的卡片和每周一老师专为我开的“小灶”——硬笔书法练习本。
由于我每次考试总是因为写字不好、错字多而被扣分,老师就想出了一个法子:让我每天练字一行,要求写得认真、整齐。当初是练单字,其次是练词语,最后练句子,周而复始的练。今天老师终于告诉大家:看到罗壹写的字老师心情特别好,他写的字像他本人一样阳光、帅气。现在我已经进一步了解了书法的基本知识,我的字写得更规范更好看了。为了增加我的阅读量,老师还特意制作了一个阅读表,让我记录每天所阅读文章的序号、日期、篇目、内容等,要求我每个月要读5篇文章或2本书。现在我已经习惯每天都讲故事给爸爸妈妈听,有些名人故事还可以背下来,还用电脑记录呢。比老师当初更高更严的要求自己了。您的学生不赖吧?
老师,您一直是我们成长路上的精神支柱,在我们垂头丧气的时候您让我们重新找回快乐;在我们高兴的时候您陪我们一起欢笑;在学习、运动、想像等方面您教给了我们一些连父母也不能传给我们的和方法,您就是我们在学校的父母。作为老师,您总是知道许许多多的知识,懂大大小小的道理,总是耐心的帮我们改正错误的思想,更新学习的方法,总是因材施教地给每个学生开“小灶”,所以我们班的每个同学都是最棒的。
感谢您,老师!
亲爱的妈妈:
您好!
提笔写这封信,是为了向您表示心中的感激之情:生活中送来无微不至的关怀;学习上循循善诱;做人时严格要求……有您撒下爱的阳光,我才能从一棵小树苗茁壮地一棵参天大树。
说起妈妈的爱,很多人都会提到几年如一日的接着。可您不光白天接送我上下学,晚上读兴趣班也来等待。我们家住在清源山脚下,离市区特别远,我曾在心里默默地算过:接送一趟至少得走5公里,几年坚持下来,应该可以绕地球一圈了吧。
这天晚上,上完作文兴趣班,透过窗外一瞧,天早就暗下来啦。我焦急地想:天气预报说今晚会下雨,还刮六七级的大风,不知道您会不会来接我?走出教室,拉开艺术中心的玻璃门,一股寒风夹着小雨吹进来,我全身的鸡皮疙瘩全部竖起来啦。妈妈呢?我迫不及待地向四周环视。咦,电动国上坐着一个全身包裹得严严实实的'人,正是您。您一见到我,脸上露出灿烂的笑容,说:“今天算错时间,早来半个小时了。”不会吧,这么冷的天气,妈妈竟然在外面吹风淋雨半个小时?我呆呆地看着妈妈,心想:只怪自己平时不好好学习,才让您受这个罪。我小声地说:“对不起,妈妈。”您摸摸我的头,说:“傻孩子,只要你认真学习,妈妈多累都值得。”听了这句话,我暗暗下定决心:一定要好好学习,让您为我而骄傲。
说到就要做到,我一改上课做小动作、说悄悄话、注意力不集中的坏毛病,和“专心听讲”交上好朋友。期中考试中,我的作文取得26的高分,换算成100分制的,该有87分呢。我开心地说:“妈妈,我不用再去补作文,您也免得在寒风中等待啦!”您听了,笑得可真甜呀。
妈妈,看到这封信,您一定能读懂我对您的感激,知道儿子是多么地爱您!
此致
敬礼
xxx
20xx年x月x日
张老师是我的语文老师,又是我的班主任。我感谢张老师,她那鼓励的话语、灿烂的笑容像温暖的阳光照耀着我的心房。
记得上三年级的时候,虽然我的学习成绩不错,但我的仰卧起坐成绩不理想。有一天,班主任张老师找到我说:“马上要开运动会了,希望你努力练习,为咱们班争光,有信心吗?”我勉强答应了。张老师好像看出了我的心思,大声鼓励我说:“咱们一次不成练两次,两次不成练三次,只要有信心坚持练,你肯定能成,要有自信。”看着张老师那坚定的目光,我暗暗下定决心,要天天坚持练习,不管作业多多,不管天气多不好,我都不中断。
运动会终于来到了,哨声一响,我闭着双眼,屏住呼吸,奋力起身,一个、两个、三个……太棒了,我得了第二名,周围响起了老师和同学们的欢呼声。汗津津的我看到了张老师那带着赞许和鼓励的目光。
还记得以前我十分胆小,即使上课回答问题声音也小得只能自己听见。一次张老师交给我一项“重要”任务,让我和其他几位同学代表我们班向全校师生展示北京的风采。张老师和我们一同练习了一个星期,总是笑眯眯地鼓励我们要大胆、要勇敢。这天,我们站在台上,面对那么多同学和老师,我落落大方,勇敢地大声朗读,大声地歌唱,响亮的声音在操场上空回荡,我激动地说着、唱着,忘记了自己是在台上,这时台下响起了同学们热烈的掌声,我们的表演成功了。在掌声中,我又找到了张老师那赞许的目光。
老师,这个伟大的称呼,您的目光、笑容给了我信心、勇气,给了我最好的鼓励。我从心底感谢您,我的老师!
Dear all,
I am writing this letter to express my gratitude to my parents for teaching me to be positive and to be strong. “Educating the mind without educating the heart is no education at all.” is the opinion held by Aristotle. It is the experience of our forefathers, however, it is correct even today, including my parenting.
It is widely acknowledged that parenting, which can also be explained as family education, is of great significance in our character forming and manner acquiring. To be more detailed, setting good examples instead of just giving precepts is the greatest achievement of my parents. They not only taught me to think for the best and prepare for the worst; they taught me how. They not only told me the benefits of being strong in mind; they proved it. All those things require huge amount of time and work, but it’s worth it.
Without my parents’ contribution and education, I would never be who I am now. But most importantly, I would never be more gratitude to them than today.
Yours,
XXX
在我的记忆长河中,有许许多多我要感谢的人:我要感谢妈妈,是她给了我宝贵的生命。我要感谢爸爸,是他给了我宽广的胸怀。我还要感谢朋友,是她们给我了珍贵的友谊……但是今天我要感谢的人却是我的老师——刘老师。
记得在我刚上一年级的第一次语文测验中,我考砸了。拿到试卷后垂头丧气地走到座位上,眼泪也跟着刷刷刷地流了下来,心想这下完了,老师肯定再也不喜欢我了。没想到刘老师看见后走了过来,用鼓励的眼神看着我说:“一次失败不等于每次都失败,不要气馁,记住这句话,只要努力就会成功,要相信自己是最棒的!”听了刘老师那亲切的话语,我又对自己重新充满了信心。从那以后,每次学习中遇到困难,老师的话语都会在我耳边响起,它就像一盏明灯,照亮我前进的方向。
教师节就要到了,我要把我心中最美最甜的语言送给全天下所有的老师:“老师们,谢谢您为我们付出的一切,您辛苦了!我们爱您!祝您节日快乐!”
作文五:感谢老师
啊,老师——人类灵魂的工程师,有谁不在将您赞颂?您对我们呕心沥血,我们爱您!老师,是您从1、2、3、4,+、-、×、÷教我们学习,教我们意味深长的哲理,让我们在理想的道路上铺台阶,您可真伟大,千言万语说不尽您对我们的关心与爱护,加减乘除算不尽您对教师事业的巨大贡献。老师,您——变得憔悴了,您的两鬓又增添了几道皱纹,几缕白发,而我的心里不是滋味,仿佛被坚韧的钢针扎了一下。老师,您像蜡烛在燃烧,默默无闻地无私奉献。
啊,老师,虽然广播里听不到您的名字,报纸上看不到您的名字。可我衷心的祝福您天天快乐。
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
在我们的脑海里,记录着从小到大所学的知识,那都是您辛勤教育的结果。
谢谢您,我的老师。是您把我领进知识的世界,让我在成长的路上,吮吸文化的甘霖。谢谢您,让我坐在教室学习知识,教会我们同学之间应该和平相处。
记得有一次,您教了我们一首词。主要写的是田园风光。老师您耐心的给我们讲解。我们举手问问题,老师您则是娓娓而谈的说,在我们如痴如醉的时候戛然而止。吴音是什么意思?后来,吴音等词的意思,我们都记在脑子里了,但是为了防止忘掉,我们还是记在了书上。老师还问我们这首词主要表达了什么?我虽然还没说出来,但是后来,我知道我是对的。
老师经常用激将法让我们提高学习兴趣,让我们爱学习,能更好的学习。
老师您不仅博学幽默,还非常严厉。老师您让我知道了许多知识;您让我们懂得。理解了做人的道理和基础,还告诉我们不要忘恩负义,要知恩图报。老师,我永远也不会忘记您,我会报答您的教导之恩的。
谢谢您,我的老师。
Dear Mary,
You said in your letter that many of your classmates wore fashionableclothes, but you couldn't afford them so you felt very depressed. There are dif-ferent views on people's clothes. The followings are my ideas:
Firstly, you shouldn't put too much emphasis on physical appearance.
Remember that the most important task for you today is to concentrate on yourstudies. No matter what you wear, you will really look your best when youcome out first in your examinations.
Secondly, you should understand that it is a fine virtue to live in fru-gality. Just as a famous saying goes, Frugality is the mother of virtue.
Since your family can't provide you with enough money to buy fashionableclothes, it is all the more necessary for you to try to lighten the financialburden of your family. And you will find the virtue of frugality benefit youa lot in your future life.
I hope you understand what I mean. Hope you will take a positive attitudetowards life and will be happy again when you read my letter.
Yours,
Anne
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