英语小作文一年级【一】
你们好。
我是小安小康的家长，很高兴昨天参加了小一班的家长会并旁听了一节课，感受颇多。
不知不觉，小安小康已经入园四个月了。四个月来，除了特殊情况，两个孩子从来没有因为去幼儿园哭闹过，也从来没有在幼儿园不适应回家抱怨，这一切和老师的关心和照顾是分不开的。在家里，孩子们每次都是以王妈妈、邹妈妈、徐妈妈、邱奶奶、园长奶奶称呼；每次都会喊道“幼儿园是我家”；’每次生气了，都会嚷嚷要去幼儿园以躲避我们；这一切说明孩子们真的把幼儿园当成自己的另一个家，把幼儿园的老师当成自己的妈妈，很感谢老师们能够如此细致、无微的关心和照顾，给了孩子如此的感觉，让孩子体会到了真正的爱和关怀。
记得刚入园的时候，小安小康因为一直是两个人玩，不知道如何处理和其他小朋友的关系，小康经常会和小朋友动手，但是最近很少听到小康打架的消息，在家里，甚至有时小安碰了小康，小康也会说“打架不对”；孩子们的变化真的很大，在成长的同时，学会了如何与他人相处，如何处理事情，感谢幼儿园和老师们给了孩子们一个和谐、愉快的环境和氛围，让孩子们能够健康、正确的成长。
昨天开完家长会，听完老师的建议，感觉自己做为家长还是不够称职，我比较奉行男孩散养的原则，因此在家比较少的过问孩子们在幼儿园的情况，相信他们如果在幼儿园有问题会主动告诉我的，现在可能需要加强和老师们的沟通，多了解一下孩子们在幼儿园的`表现，希望以后老师多多支持和沟通。
昨天旁听课程时，发现老师真的很用心，从内容到形式，孩子们也都非常主动和积极，小安表现好像稍微差一点，印象中好像只有第一次举手要回答问题后，再也没有主动举手，感觉还是没有太好的融入环境，不够主动积极，希望老师能多注意一下，多培养一下他的主动性，多让他锻炼一下；小康好一些，继续努力加油！
整堂课程中，发现他俩咬手的习惯还是存在，小安严重一些，希望我们一起多多关注，尽快让他们改掉。
他俩可能入园较晚，整体还是比早入园的孩子在独立性、适应性、积极性差一些，我们会在这些方面多关注一下，希望老师多和我们配合，让他们尽快成长起来。
四个月的时间飞逝而过，孩子们的变化历历在目，更加有礼貌，更加懂得关心他人，主动帮助做家务，帮爸爸洗脚，也懂得分享，遵守规矩。记得一次我脚破了，让小康帮我拿纸，小康拿过纸后，发现我是要擦血，立刻又去拿来垃圾桶，让我将擦完的垃圾丢垃圾桶里；小安更懂得关心别人，有一天晚上睡觉，自己搬着凳子，把跳跳虎玩偶拿下来后，送给了奶奶，说“奶奶自己睡害怕，让跳跳虎陪奶奶睡”；孩子们的成长让我们感到欣慰，孩子们的品质让我们感到安慰，感谢幼儿园和老师们！
一次家长会和一节旁听课，加深了老师们和家长的沟通，也让家长看到了孩子们的表现，希望以后多组织几次，可以不让孩子们看到家长，展现更加真实的自我！
英语小作文一年级【二】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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英语小作文一年级【三】
你们好。
我是小安小康的家长，很高兴昨天参加了小一班的家长会并旁听了一节课，感受颇多。
不知不觉，小安小康已经入园四个月了。四个月来，除了特殊情况，两个孩子从来没有因为去幼儿园哭闹过，也从来没有在幼儿园不适应回家抱怨，这一切和老师的关心和照顾是分不开的。在家里，孩子们每次都是以王妈妈、邹妈妈、徐妈妈、邱奶奶、园长奶奶称呼；每次都会喊道“幼儿园是我家”；’每次生气了，都会嚷嚷要去幼儿园以躲避我们；这一切说明孩子们真的把幼儿园当成自己的另一个家，把幼儿园的老师当成自己的妈妈，很感谢老师们能够如此细致、无微的关心和照顾，给了孩子如此的感觉，让孩子体会到了真正的爱和关怀。
记得刚入园的时候，小安小康因为一直是两个人玩，不知道如何处理和其他小朋友的关系，小康经常会和小朋友动手，但是最近很少听到小康打架的消息，在家里，甚至有时小安碰了小康，小康也会说“打架不对”；孩子们的变化真的很大，在成长的同时，学会了如何与他人相处，如何处理事情，感谢幼儿园和老师们给了孩子们一个和谐、愉快的环境和氛围，让孩子们能够健康、正确的成长。
昨天开完家长会，听完老师的建议，感觉自己做为家长还是不够称职，我比较奉行男孩散养的原则，因此在家比较少的过问孩子们在幼儿园的.情况，相信他们如果在幼儿园有问题会主动告诉我的，现在可能需要加强和老师们的沟通，多了解一下孩子们在幼儿园的表现，希望以后老师多多支持和沟通。
昨天旁听课程时，发现老师真的很用心，从内容到形式，孩子们也都非常主动和积极，小安表现好像稍微差一点，印象中好像只有第一次举手要回答问题后，再也没有主动举手，感觉还是没有太好的融入环境，不够主动积极，希望老师能多注意一下，多培养一下他的主动性，多让他锻炼一下；小康好一些，继续努力加油！
整堂课程中，发现他俩咬手的习惯还是存在，小安严重一些，希望我们一起多多关注，尽快让他们改掉。
他俩可能入园较晚，整体还是比早入园的孩子在独立性、适应性、积极性差一些，我们会在这些方面多关注一下，希望老师多和我们配合，让他们尽快成长起来。
四个月的时间飞逝而过，孩子们的变化历历在目，更加有礼貌，更加懂得关心他人，主动帮助做家务，帮爸爸洗脚，也懂得分享，遵守规矩。记得一次我脚破了，让小康帮我拿纸，小康拿过纸后，发现我是要擦血，立刻又去拿来垃圾桶，让我将擦完的垃圾丢垃圾桶里；小安更懂得关心别人，有一天晚上睡觉，自己搬着凳子，把跳跳虎玩偶拿下来后，送给了奶奶，说“奶奶自己睡害怕，让跳跳虎陪奶奶睡”；孩子们的成长让我们感到欣慰，孩子们的品质让我们感到安慰，感谢幼儿园和老师们！
一次家长会和一节旁听课，加深了老师们和家长的沟通，也让家长看到了孩子们的表现，希望以后多组织几次，可以不让孩子们看到家长，展现更加真实的自我！
