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第1段:Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题
Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧
正文:
第2段:Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点
Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由
第3段:However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点
Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由
结论:
第4段:Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点 オ
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第1段:Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
正文:
第2段:There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势
结论:
第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论 オ
1。 头绪分明,脉络清楚
写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心,详略得当
在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:
One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice。 When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言,准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文:
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后:
The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home, he started and crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom, I go home。" said the boy, still crying。
"Don't worry, we'll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house。 With the help of a policeman, they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
近年,汉中的油菜花因其規模宏大,早已闻名全国,每当春天来临,汉中的田野就变成了金色的海洋,为大家分享了中油菜花海的导游词,欢迎阅读!
亲爱的游客朋友们,你们好!这里是陕西汉中,也是我的家乡。汉中一年四季风景如画,尤其春天更是美不胜收,每年三四月份油菜花开的时候,整个汉中就成了一座美丽的大花园。现在,就让我来给各位尊贵的客人介绍介绍吧!
金黄的小花瓣,嫩绿的茎叶,漫山遍野的黄色和绿色随地形起伏蜿蜒,在天地间形成了一幅壮美的田园风景画,这种黄色的花儿就是我们汉中大名鼎鼎的油菜花。因为汉中的油菜花多而且美,所以被评为“中国最美油菜花海”。
细雨如丝,一朵朵油菜花贪婪地吮吸着春天的甘露;春风吹拂,一株株油菜花像仙女一样在风中舞蹈。风停了,油菜花笔直地站在春天的蒙蒙细雨之中,就像五星红旗的旗杆一样挺拔。这时,美丽的油菜花,给一望无际的田野增添了无限生机和魅力。
现在是油菜花开得最盛的时候,漫山遍野已是黄色的海洋,当你置身于这里时,你一定会被这片“花海”吸引、陶醉。这时,你没准会忽然觉得自己仿佛就是一朵油菜花,穿着嫩绿的衣裳,绽放出金黄的笑脸,站在阳光里。一阵微风吹过,你就翩翩起舞,随万千的油菜花一起舞蹈。风过了,你静静地站在那,小蜜蜂从你头上飞过,告诉你清早劳动的快乐。蝴蝶在你身边飞来飞去,告诉你花儿的芳香和美丽——花谢之后,也不忘为人们做贡献。那时,它结出了果实,可以用来榨油。它默默绽放它的精彩,奉献它的'一生。
亲爱的朋友们,你们觉得汉中的油菜花美丽吗?对了,这美景如画的漫山遍野的油菜花,是农民伯伯用辛辛苦苦的劳动换来的,要不然怎能创造出如此壮美的画卷。请你们一定珍惜他们的劳动成果,不要去损坏那美丽的油菜花。
希望有更多的朋友来汉中观赏美丽的油菜花!
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